EEEEE!! I love your stobotnik art sm! If ur open to it id love to see some more art of the pair interacting with themselves/each other in the future? šš
Anyways, (eats ur art)
Stone has some regrets and Robotnik is learning some stuff
ko-fi
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Sighs.
Im back
Au where ford actually kept track of Stan a little bit more than in canon. Iām talking the man would cast spells and ask the mail box āis my brother aliveā or āwhere is my brotherā
But of course because I love myself some angst, Fords questions were worded in such a way that he ONLY knew his brother was aliveābut being alive doesnāt equal being okay. He gets his brothers location, but being realistic do you think Ford would think that heās traveling so much because heās running away or because heās successful and LIKES to travel. āOh look Stanleyās taking a vacation in Colombia. Although thatās a long vacations itās been months⦠he must be pretty rich thanks to his products!ā (Because remember ford had seen Stanās commercials, so ford follows his line of logic to be that Stan is pretty successful.)
Of course one day Ford finally asks a slightly different question, one that crumples the narrative he created in his mind, āHow is Stanley doing?ā
And thatās when he learns that his brother is currently being transported to a hospital. That his brother is on the verge of death due to malnutrition, hypothermia, and because of an infected untreated wound. That his brother hasnāt been okay the last few years.
He learns that he asked all the wrong questions.
(and also youre too young for her but you just cant get that one to stick in your brain, can ya?)
If you outline your fics, how do you go about it? Or do you just write it out without a specific plan?
God I wish I could just START writing my fics, but no I am nothing if not a well planned bitch
First, I write stuff out on paper. This makes itās easier to go back and look at my own writing, but also paper has? Less high stakes for me? If I type something it feels like I HAVE to go in that direction, but when I write on paper I can just scribble it out or turn to the next page. This step is where Iāll write whatever comes to mind that I might want to add, usually out of order. I guess you could call this brainstorming? But I donāt usually cause to me brainstorming is JUST in my head, and this is on paper. Thatās another thing, GET THE IDEA OUT ON PAPER because youll be super excited about a certain dialogue line or plot line, and if you donāt write it out you will forget. So step one is filling pages and pages of my favorite, designated āBrain Dumpā notebook (mine has mushrooms on it :) )
Then, actual outline. This is also on paper for me, where Iāll write out any big plot lines or bits Iāve come up with in the first step, and try to fit them in an order that makes sense. This is simultaneously the easiest part and the hardest, because Iām someone who wants smoothness in my writing in terms of how stuff flows together, so Iām ver particular about what stuff goes where. If Iām doing an outline for a WHOLE fic, each little line is most likely a chapter, or important chapter moments however, and this is important, I make up an outline for every chapter I write. That way I can go into detail with what dialogue goes where, the blocking of how the characters are, etc
Then itās first draft time!! This parts fun. This is where I write BADLY. I basically just throw everything at my poor google docs until it sticks, and I try not to stop, so thereās no going back and spell checking, or finding a better word. If I write āsaysā or āhe shiveredā eight times in the same paragraph it DOES NOT MATTER. Iāll be back later. This draft is the shittiest possible version of what I want to write.
Step two of first draft is when Iām DONE, I have the bare bones of my draft, and this is where I go back and ask myself if I really deserve to know how to type. Iāll sew up any glaring plot holes, spell checking, rewrite verbs and whatnot to not repeat, stuff like that. If I read the whole thing and decide I donāt like this particular part, Iāll delete it and rewrite it.
Then itās onto my favorite part, draft two. This is REWRITE TIME. not edit, rewrite. Thats the best writing advice Iāve ever gotten and I can ever give. I pull up two screens, slap my draft 1 on the the first screen and open a new doc, and rewrite the entire thing. Why? Because as im retyping this is when I add prose, and fix the flow, and add more angst in or better word choice or whatever. This is where the LENGTH of whatever Iām writing comes in, Iāll usually double whatever I have for the first draft, on sheer added prose and grace notes alone. This part is immensely satisfying, and it takes the longest by far. I do this for every single chapter of things I post on Ao3
Draft three is usually my final draft. I copy and paste draft 2 in another document, and Iāll read through again for any typos and mistakes and fix those. This is PROOFREADING, plain and simple, and itās so important. I usually donāt fix much in this stage, but I do read it outloud (quietly to myself or maybe my dog) to see if it sounds right.
And thats it! Usually, at least with Abandon My Eulogy each chapter takes about two weeks, and by two week I mean I spend a week thinking about it not actually writing and then outline, first draft and correct that in three days. Draft two takes. So long, but itās worth it
āSorry I went off on a ramble there
You've got so much to learn
There were a trillion years before Ford, and there might just be a trillion years after him too.
A few days back on AO3 I found an unfinished, two chapter spideypool fanfic that was cute and had lots of potential and was also last updated two years ago. Two whole years! And it had only three comments, all of which on chapter one, none on chapter two. I enjoyed the fanfic, despite it being far, FAR from being finished and the chance of it ever updating again anytime soon was just about zero. So you know what I did?
I wrote a damn comment. On chapter two.
And I made sure that fucker was long and had a small theory of where I think the author would take the fanfic in the future. I let the person behind the fic know that I friggin LOVED the two chapters I got to read! That I would LOVE to see more! That Iād jump out of my skin in happiness and virtually hug them half to death if I saw that they updated it.
Let me remind you this fic wasnāt updated in two YEARS! I was the first to comment on it in a year. And the first to comment on chapter two! And you know what happened today?
I got a reply.
From the author of the fanfic. And the author said how I gave them life for a project they had loved (still did) and that they were now working on a third chapter. After two YEARS of not updating. Of not writing. And it makes me so friggin happy seeing what I did. What I caused.
With a single. Damn. Comment.
All that it took for me was to think a bit about what I wanted to tell the author and the comment it. All it took was one comment. And suddenly this person was inspired to continue a fanfic they had abandoned for TWO YEARS!!
I couldnāt be happier. I couldnāt be more proud.
Comment on peopleās fanfics. No matter how few chapters there are. No matter how many years have passed since their last update. Comment. You like a fanfic? Comment on it. Itās that easy.
a selection of quick'n'dirty pamphlet binds because i had a bunch of short typesets i wanted to make multiple copies of. am i counting this toward my binderary goal? ehhhhh not really because theyre not hardcovers. but i figured i'd post anyway cuz the lil mushroom one in the front was cute :>
Stanley Pines with Congenital insensitivity to pain andĀ anhydrosis since he was a twin he just copied everything Stanford did- so jf Ford got hurt when falling he'd pretend to get hurt too.
It isn't until later when he gets hurt a lot and doesn't even notice that it becomes a problem. Yeah he's great at boxing as he can't really feel the punches but when he's in the streets? When he has a gunshot wound and is bleeding out but has 0 idea?? When he becomes some sort of shield for others?
Heck when Ford finally sees him and sees the state he is in and he's pushed against the burning hot symbol but doesn't realise- they both don't, not until the smell of burning flesh anyway. Stanford is horrified because his brother just got some burn and all he had been focusing on was their argument, didn't even bat an eye- in fact, he didn't even seem to be hurt by his punches and pushes and shoves-