stupid
it does not matter who you are! stanley will lie to your face! and trick you into following some rando who's not even dead or gonna die for miles out of town!
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(and also youre too young for her but you just cant get that one to stick in your brain, can ya?)
the "came back wrong" trope except like... they didnt. like this mad scientists wife died, and so he studied necromancy, brought her back, and she came back and it all worked. like she came back exactly the same as she was before with literally no difference. but the scientist guy is like "oh no... what have i done.... shes Different now!!!! she came back Wrong!!!!" and shes just like. chilling. reading a book. cooking dinner. shes just so so normal but in the guys mind hes like "oh shes soooo weird" but shes just normal
Itās always okay to laugh at two dimensional chaos demons.
Finished the next verse! (previous part here)
The lyrics are by @inkyrainstorms!!
I can't get over just how fun this was to animate. Ford raging that he's losing to a puppet (who is also his twin brother) in a rap battle. is just. peak silly. I love this
Also I ran out of steam towards the end of cleaning it up so Ford's looking kinda janky and and off model sometimes whoops
If you outline your fics, how do you go about it? Or do you just write it out without a specific plan?
God I wish I could just START writing my fics, but no I am nothing if not a well planned bitch
First, I write stuff out on paper. This makes itās easier to go back and look at my own writing, but also paper has? Less high stakes for me? If I type something it feels like I HAVE to go in that direction, but when I write on paper I can just scribble it out or turn to the next page. This step is where Iāll write whatever comes to mind that I might want to add, usually out of order. I guess you could call this brainstorming? But I donāt usually cause to me brainstorming is JUST in my head, and this is on paper. Thatās another thing, GET THE IDEA OUT ON PAPER because youll be super excited about a certain dialogue line or plot line, and if you donāt write it out you will forget. So step one is filling pages and pages of my favorite, designated āBrain Dumpā notebook (mine has mushrooms on it :) )
Then, actual outline. This is also on paper for me, where Iāll write out any big plot lines or bits Iāve come up with in the first step, and try to fit them in an order that makes sense. This is simultaneously the easiest part and the hardest, because Iām someone who wants smoothness in my writing in terms of how stuff flows together, so Iām ver particular about what stuff goes where. If Iām doing an outline for a WHOLE fic, each little line is most likely a chapter, or important chapter moments however, and this is important, I make up an outline for every chapter I write. That way I can go into detail with what dialogue goes where, the blocking of how the characters are, etc
Then itās first draft time!! This parts fun. This is where I write BADLY. I basically just throw everything at my poor google docs until it sticks, and I try not to stop, so thereās no going back and spell checking, or finding a better word. If I write āsaysā or āhe shiveredā eight times in the same paragraph it DOES NOT MATTER. Iāll be back later. This draft is the shittiest possible version of what I want to write.
Step two of first draft is when Iām DONE, I have the bare bones of my draft, and this is where I go back and ask myself if I really deserve to know how to type. Iāll sew up any glaring plot holes, spell checking, rewrite verbs and whatnot to not repeat, stuff like that. If I read the whole thing and decide I donāt like this particular part, Iāll delete it and rewrite it.
Then itās onto my favorite part, draft two. This is REWRITE TIME. not edit, rewrite. Thats the best writing advice Iāve ever gotten and I can ever give. I pull up two screens, slap my draft 1 on the the first screen and open a new doc, and rewrite the entire thing. Why? Because as im retyping this is when I add prose, and fix the flow, and add more angst in or better word choice or whatever. This is where the LENGTH of whatever Iām writing comes in, Iāll usually double whatever I have for the first draft, on sheer added prose and grace notes alone. This part is immensely satisfying, and it takes the longest by far. I do this for every single chapter of things I post on Ao3
Draft three is usually my final draft. I copy and paste draft 2 in another document, and Iāll read through again for any typos and mistakes and fix those. This is PROOFREADING, plain and simple, and itās so important. I usually donāt fix much in this stage, but I do read it outloud (quietly to myself or maybe my dog) to see if it sounds right.
And thats it! Usually, at least with Abandon My Eulogy each chapter takes about two weeks, and by two week I mean I spend a week thinking about it not actually writing and then outline, first draft and correct that in three days. Draft two takes. So long, but itās worth it
āSorry I went off on a ramble there
they should invent a grief that doesnāt define you in new and strange ways for the rest of your life
question: do you think stone would wear a dress (or a maid dress woah who said that) is robotnik asked him to do so? How would they both react? :3
This is an important step on the plan to conquer the world, trust.
ko-fi
does anyone wanna hold hands until we feel a little braver
part 1