For Those Of You Who Follow Me For My STRIKE Story, The Script Is Being Edited And Rewritten From The
For those of you who follow me for my STRIKE story, the script is being edited and rewritten from the beginning so it may be a very long while before anything involving that story is posted. I will still remain active but That specific storyline will be taking a hiatus on social media. Big news on it however, I have found an artist/animator so STRIKE may actually become a comic! I'll leave you all updates!
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Dreams show me the vilest concepts. This was few nights ago, and I can't stop thinking about it
In honor of pride month, I'll let you all in on a secret; most of the characters in STRIKE, my original comic story, are a part of the lgbtq+ community!
The Actor - Pangender and bisexual
Guy - Ally
Obsidian - Non-binary
Creampuff - Bicurious
Blurry Face - Transgender demigirl and pansexual
Spectre - Demigirl and asexual
Characters you haven't met yet (for ark one):
Teleporter - Ally
Vapira - Lesbian
The Knight - Lesbian
The Greater Being - Ally (may be evil but they're not a monster)
Emotional Walls Your Character Has Built (And What Might Finally Break Them)
(How your character defends their soft core and what could shatter it) Because protection becomes prison real fast.
✶ Sarcasm as armor. (Break it with someone who laughs gently, not mockingly.) ✶ Hyper-independence. (Break it with someone who shows up even when they’re told not to.) ✶ Stoicism. (Break it with a safe space to fall apart.) ✶ Flirting to avoid intimacy. (Break it with real vulnerability they didn’t see coming.) ✶ Ghosting everyone. (Break it with someone who won’t take silence as an answer.) ✶ Lying for convenience. (Break it with someone who sees through them but stays anyway.) ✶ Avoiding touch. (Break it with accidental, gentle contact that feels like home.) ✶ Oversharing meaningless things to hide real depth. (Break it with someone who asks the second question.) ✶ Overworking. (Break it with forced stillness and the terrifying sound of their own thoughts.) ✶ Pretending not to care. (Break it with a loss they can’t fake their way through.) ✶ Avoiding mirrors. (Break it with a quiet compliment that hits too hard.) ✶ Turning every conversation into a joke. (Break it with someone who doesn’t laugh.) ✶ Being everyone’s helper. (Break it when someone asks what they need, and waits for an answer.) ✶ Constantly saying “I’m fine.” (Break it when they finally scream that they’re not.) ✶ Running. Always running. (Break it with someone who doesn’t chase, but doesn’t leave, either.) ✶ Intellectualizing every feeling. (Break it with raw, messy emotion they can’t logic away.) ✶ Trying to be the strong one. (Break it when someone sees the weight they’re carrying, and offers to help.) ✶ Hiding behind success. (Break it when they succeed and still feel empty.) ✶ Avoiding conflict at all costs. (Break it when silence causes more pain than the truth.) ✶ Focusing on everyone else’s healing but their own. (Break it when they hit emotional burnout.)
STRIKE #2
THE NEXT MORNING
*Panel shows the bell ringing at a high school, THE ACTOR and CREAMPUFF walk to class.*
CREAMPUFF: Hey Mars!
Can we talk real quick?
THE ACTOR: Sure thing, Goldie.
Is everything okaaayyy-??
*CREAMPUFF pulls THE ACTOR into a corner to speak in private.*
CREAMPUFF: I know.
THE ACTOR: You know...what?
CREAMPUFF: I know about The Actor and I know about Obsidian.
Mars, I know about you.
THE ACTOR: Elizabeth. I have o clue what your talking about.
CREAMPUFF: Mars, I know you are The Actor.
THE ACTOR: How do you-
*THE ACTOR is cut off by TELEPORTER.*
TELEPORTER: Elizabeth!
There you are! I've been looking all over for you!
*CREAMPUFF annoyingly waves.*
TELEPORTER: Oh, hello there, Farrell!
THE ACTOR: Keegan! What's up, my man?
TELEPORTER: Oh, nothing much. I was just looking for the two of you, we're going to be late for class!
CREAMPUFF: *Sarcastically* Great.
THE ACTOR: Well then, let's get going.
*Whispering, to CREAMPUFF* We'll talk about this later.
AFTER SCHOOL
*Panels show THE ACTOR fighting some goons in an alleyway, they defeat them and go to comfort a young woman who the goons attacked.*
THE ACTOR: Are you alright ma'am?
WOMAN: Yes. Th-thank you.
*The woman gathers her things and leaves the alleyway. OBSIDIAN jumps down into the alleyway, and knocks out a goon who was getting up to attack THE ACTOR from behind.*
OBSIDIAN: Might want to watch your surroundings.
What? No thank you?
THE ACTOR: *Smugly* Thank you, Obsidian.
OBSIDIAN: Your welcome.
See, was that so hard, hero?
THE ACTOR: *Sarcastically* So tough, such a struggle.
OBSIDIAN: *Sarcastically* Oh, yes. I'm sure it was.
THE ACTOR: So, why'd you drop by?
OBSIDIAN: I, uh...
...I wanted to talk about last night.
THE ACTOR: Oh...
*THE ACTOR blushes and can easily be seen behind their domino mask.*
OBSIDIAN: Yeah, I...
...I wanted to apologize.
THE ACTOR: Apologize, huh? That's out of character for you.
OBSIDIAN: Heh, I know. But, I just don't know what came over me last night and...
...I'm sorry.
THE ACTOR: Well, your forgiven.
Was that all you wanted to talk about?
OBSIDIAN: Well, now that you mention it...
...Last night, after our meeting I was confronted by a girl in the alleyway.
THE ACTOR: Oh?
OBSIDIAN: She said she knew you.
THE ACTOR: What'd she look like?
OBSIDIAN: Its was hard to see in the dark but...
...She was dressed in some makeshift uniform with what looked like facepaint over her eyes...
...Oh, very blond hair I can tell you that!
THE ACTOR: I don't...
...Oh...Goldie.
OBSIDIAN: So, you know her?
THE ACTOR: No.
Well, yes. But...
OBSIDIAN: But?
THE ACTOR: It's nothing.
I've got to go.
OBSIDIAN: Again?
You seem to have a habit of walking out mid conversation.
THE ACTOR: I'm sorry but...
...I need to make a call.
*THE ACTOR grapples away leaving OBSIDIAN in the alleyway alone.*
OBSIDIAN: ...Damn.
LATER
*THE ACTOR is at home trying to contact CREAMPUFF on the phone.*
THE ACTOR: Come on, come on, pick up!
CREAMPUFF: *Voicemail* Hey!
THE ACTOR: Hey, Goldie!
CREAMPUFF: *Voicemail* Sorry I can't come to the phone right now...
...But leave a message and I'll get back to you as soon as I can!
THE ACTOR: Damn.
*Beep.*
THE ACTOR: Goldie. We need to talk. Please call me back.
*THE ACTOR looks over to the TV which is currently showing the news.*
NEWSCASTER: And in other news, Creampuff, a newly established hero has defeated her first major foe.
We have Greg over on the scene. Greg?
GREG: Yes, Carmen. I am here at the scene of the battle with Creampuff.
Now tell us, what made you decide to join the fight?
THE ACTOR: Oh my god.
Goldie!!?
CREAMPUFF: Well, Greg I became Creampuff because I wanted to help those in immediate danger-
*THE ACTOR turns of the TV and sits there on their couch in shock.*
THAT NIGHT
*THE ACTOR crawls into the window of CREAMPUFFs house.*
THE ACTOR: *Whispering* Goldie!
Elizabeth we need to talk!
*CREAMPUFF turns on the light.*
CREAMPUFF: I knew you'd come.
THE ACTOR: What the hell do you think your doing?
CREAMPUFF: ...What?
THE ACTOR: You've just made yourself a target!
Your not trained for something like this!
CREAMPUFF: I know I'm not but I couldn't just stand around and watch you be an idiot!
THE ACTOR: Idiot!!?
CREAMPUFF: You struck a deal with Obsidian!
Their a villain! You of all people know what they've done! How could you trust them!
THE ACTOR: I knew it.
*THE ACTOR points a finger at CREAMPUFF.*
THE ACTOR: You were the one who talked to them last night!
*CREAMPUFF crosses her arms.*
CREAMPUFF: And what if I was?
THE ACTOR: Elizabeth, your putting yourself in danger, this is a situation that you don't understand.
CREAMPUFF: ...You are too.
Let me join your team.
THE ACTOR: Hm?
CREAMPUFF: Your making a team. I want in.
THE ACTOR: What did I just say about putting yourself in danger!!?
CREAMPUFF: I wont be in danger. You'll be there.
THE ACTOR: No, Goldie.
CREAMPUFF: Fine.
But I'm not going to stop being Creampuff.
THE ACTOR: *Sighs in defeat* Fine.
*CREAMPUFF smiles. THE ACTOR gives her a card*
THE ACTOR: Meet me next saturday at this location.
CREAMPUFF: I'll see you there.
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