To speak more broadly for a second, I think one of the other large issues (maybe the main one) is that the writers just took on too much for this book. They expanded the world, turned the Light and Shadow dichotomy on its head, introduced several new characters in addition to continuing the stories of the main cast. That’s a lot to cover in 18 chapters even with better pacing. And a couple of the LIs were already getting shafted before all of this. I just really don’t understand many of the decisions they made for book 2. And I think it would’ve been leagues better if they hadn’t tried to take on so much at once, stuck with all of our original party members (no writing Kade, Threep/Loola, and to an extent Aerin out), and fixed the mistakes they made in book 1
OMG @llamagirl28 you CANNOT just mention it and not tell us about your Shep and their LI!!
Say how are you doing?^^ I hope your day is going alright!
Doing well, thanks for asking :) I've been playing Mass Effect today, gotta get back to writing tomorrow 👀 Hope your day is going well too anon!
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Mass Effect Legendary Edition - Mass Effect 2 - Legion Dancing
“to the glistening eastern sea, i give you queen lucy the valiant”
“to the great western woods, king edmund the just”
“to the radiant southern sun, queen susan the gentle”
“and to the clear northern skies, i give you king peter the magnificent”