This is the funniest and most relatable bsd panel ever
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As enjoyable as the anime adaptation may be, I urge everyone to read the light novel itself!! The anime glossed over many, many important scenes which are plenty enjoyable, but one thing I feel the novel captures a lot better are Oda’s thoughts, which definitely help you understand his (slightly odd) way of thinking. Here’s just a few of the many scenes you’d have missed out on if you only watch the anime:
Prologue + Chapter 1
How Dazai injured himself on tofu.
Dazai’s cooking and his miraculous soups.
Oda’s extremely detailed breakfast routine.
Dazai’s interaction with Hirotsu.
Dazai making an order for coffee and his highly sweet tooth.
The shooter was around three meters away from Dazai, compared to the anime which was near point blank (even I could have shot Dazai at that distance without training, please.) Also, Odasaku’s thoughts about Dazai’s expression. In comparison, he’s a lot more vocal about asking Dazai to stop talking after having his hand forced.
Chapter 2
The fight with the kids.
Odasaku’s vacuum cleaner passage about Dazai. Well worth the read.
Ango commenting that Dazai and Oda stink of rotten tsukudani.
Chapter 3
At one point, Akutagawa had Gide tied up. Also, he punched him.
Oda and Gide’s first meeting, in which Oda describes Gide as handsome.
Gide has grey eyes.
Dazai proposes to arrange Gide and Odasaku’s wedding.
Odasaku’s inner thoughts when the Buraiha trio break up are also well worth a read.
Chapter 4
The chase scene when Odasaku goes for the orphans. This was moved to episode 15, but keeping this would have been more dramatic imo.
The utter resignation in Odasaku’s thoughts are much, much grimmer in the novel. Also, Odasaku picks up smoking again.
His fight with the Mimic soldiers was cut short. Just a little, though.
Odasaku smiles when he fights Gide.
Their pose is described as miraculous.
The singularity of abilities is better explained in the novel.
Odasaku’s past is slightly less glossed over/implied.
Gide tells Odasaku to say hello to the children for him.
The cigarettes. Also, Odasaku’s last words were about his true love, curry rice.
Epilogue
Only one scene was animated. Everything else is pretty important imo.
they literally created a place where you can go and learn about something that really interests you and they fucked it up by inventing ASSIGNMENTS
As a writer, understanding and incorporating body language into your storytelling can greatly enhance your characters and their interactions. Here's a cheat sheet to help you describe body language effectively:
* Raised eyebrows: Surprise, disbelief, or curiosity.
* Furrowed brow: Concentration, confusion, or frustration.
* Smiling: Happiness, amusement, or friendliness.
* Frowning: Disapproval, sadness, or concern.
* Lip biting: Nervousness, anticipation, or tension.
* Eye contact: Confidence, interest, or honesty.
* Avoiding eye contact: Shyness, guilt, or deception.
* Narrowed eyes: Suspicion, skepticism, or concentration.
* Wide eyes: Shock, fear, or surprise.
* Rolling eyes: Exasperation, annoyance, or disbelief.
* Crossing arms: Defensiveness, disagreement, or discomfort.
* Nervous fidgeting: Anxiety, restlessness, or impatience.
* Pointing: Assertiveness, emphasis, or accusation.
* Open palms: Honesty, openness, or sincerity.
* Hand on chin: Deep thought, contemplation, or evaluation.
* Slumped shoulders: Defeat, sadness, or fatigue.
* Upright posture: Confidence, attentiveness, or authority.
* Pacing: Restlessness, agitation, or contemplation.
* Tapping foot: Impatience, annoyance, or frustration.
* Leaning in: Interest, engagement, or curiosity.
* Hugging: Affection, comfort, or warmth.
* Handshake: Greeting, introduction, or agreement.
* Patting on the back: Encouragement, praise, or camaraderie.
* Clenched fists: Anger, determination, or frustration.
* Brushing hair behind the ear: Nervousness, coyness, or flirtation.
* When two characters unconsciously mimic each other's body language, it indicates rapport, connection, or empathy.
* A subtle nod can convey agreement, understanding, or encouragement.
* Crossed legs can indicate relaxation or a casual, nonchalant attitude.
* Impatience, anticipation, or nervousness can be expressed through rhythmic finger tapping.
* Placing a hand on the chest can convey sincerity, empathy, or a heartfelt emotion.
- Tilting the head:
* Tilting the head to the side can suggest curiosity, attentiveness, or interest.
* Rubbing the temples can indicate stress, fatigue, or a headache.
* Stroking the chin while in thought can portray contemplation, decision-making, or intellectual curiosity.
* This posture can indicate authority, confidence, or a composed demeanor.
* Leaning slightly towards someone can suggest interest, attraction, or engagement in a conversation.
* Nail-biting can reveal anxiety, nervousness, or tension.
* Rapid or impatient foot tapping can show agitation, restlessness, or eagerness.
* Squinting the eyes can signal suspicion, doubt, or an attempt to focus on something.
* Shifting weight can imply discomfort, unease, or anticipation.
* This gesture can indicate hesitation, embarrassment, or the desire to hide something.
Remember that body language can vary across different cultures and individuals, so consider your character's background and personality while describing their movements. Additionally, body language is best used in combination with dialogue and internal thoughts to create a more nuanced portrayal of your characters.
Happy writing!
Hua Xi, from "Night Drive Through My Own Life"
as the request stated, that ‘i am trying really hard to keep hating you‘ phase, or what i like to call the reluctant friend stage. feel free to use :)
“i think we’re friends now.” “God, don’t say that.”
“everything is just a competition for you… isn’t it?” “isn’t it for you, too?”
“h—” “don’t talk to me.”
“i’d pay good money for you to admit you tolerate me.” “tolerate being the operative word.”
“why can’t you open up to me?” “why do you want me to?”
they’re so used to hating each other sometimes the snide remarks just slip out LMAO
like “should i get you something too?” “you can get out of my fa— woah, hehe. sorry.”
“you’re still on that?” “still on that..??? STILL ON THAT?????? I CANT STAND YOU???!!!(!;!”
a whispered moment between them ; “i’m trying so hard to hate you.” “why?”
they’re trying hard to hate each other then something happens (plot) and they’re stuck together which makes it ten times harder
“be honest with me.” “but why? why would i do that?”
“stop.” “stop what?” “being so kind to me.”
remember… they hated each other a couple chapters back. what changed? why did it change? who did it start to change in first?
the moment where your character asks themselves; “when did this nuisance become so important to me?”
EVERYONE SAY THANK YOU SOUTA YAMAZAKI!!!!!
“I have a deeply hidden and inarticulate desire for something beyond the daily life.”
— Virginia Woolf
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