oh yeah have i ever told yall of the academic war i have been an unwilling soilder in for the past two years
in another universe
I love seeing a meme and being like oh, tumblrs going to love this one
positivity post 😁😁!!!!
Listen, what if Naruto and Menma met? What if Naruto wants out of the shadows and anonymous lifestyle? What if Menma craves anonymity without his Father/Brother shadows hanging over him? And if we already have prince and a pauper situation , both of them raised by Kakashi/Obito why not parent trap them?
I know what I’m drawing next I’m writing it here so I don’t forget later. Minato chooses the village instead of Naruto so obito has to kill the baby Naruto but he looks at Naruto’s big turnip head and googoo gaga eyes and is like “fuck idk” and he runs off with Naruto and is standing there with a rock like “I don’t want to be a dad I have to kill this baby and mail the body parts to Minato.” But Naruto is like googoogaga and obito is like ok fine you convinced me
Writing "said" repeatedly in creative writing projects isn't necessarily bad. "Said" can be an excellent tool to support the flow of your prose. It can function like picture frames on a wall. It adds to your manuscript, but your readers may only read the whole dialogue tag occasionally.
Still, there can definitely be times when "said" gets used too many times in a row. Descriptive dialogue tags can add tension, variety, and depth to crucial moments in your manuscript.
Need a creative boost? Here's an extensive list of dialogue tag options besides "said."
Acknowledged
Added
Agonized
Agreed
Announced
Apologized
Approved
Articulated
Asserted
Babbled
Backtracked
Bawled
Beamed
Began
Blubbered
Blurted
Bubbled
Called
Chattered
Cheered
Chimed in
Chortled
Chuckled
Commented
Communicated
Conferred
Congratulated
Complimented
Considered
Contended
Cried
Crooned
Declared
Denoted
Drawled
Elaborated
Emitted
Ended
Enunciated
Exclaimed
Expounded
Expressed
Giggled
Greeted
Grinned
Groaned
Gushed
Interjected
Jabbered
Joked
Laughed
Mentioned
Moaned
Mumbled
Noted
Observed
Orated
Persisted
Praised
Predicted
Pronounced
Quipped
Recited
Reckoned
Rejoiced
Related
Remarked
Repeated
Replied
Responded
Sang
Screeched
Shared
Slurred
Stated
Smiled
Snarled
Spat
Suggested
Swore
Thanked
Tittered
Told
Trilled
Urged
Uttered
Yammered
Yelled
Vocalized
Voiced
Need more inspiration? Here are a few other sources you can check out:
350 Other Words Than Said
Different Words to Use Instead of Said
500 Dialogue Tags Examples
You don't have to! Conversations often happen in all genres of creative writing without constant dialogue tags. Once you establish who's saying what, you can format a conversation like this:
"You don't know what you're talking about," Joe said.
"Of course I do," Lucy replied, rolling her eyes. "I only got a Ph. D. in Chemistry."
"From one of the worst universities in the country."
"It's still accredited."
"Your thesis advisor was just arrested for academic fraud!"
"And yet I still passed all my finals."
You can keep up with who's saying what and the tone behind their voices without a tag for each line of dialogue. I wouldn't recommend doing that with every conversation (especially extensive ones) but you can take a break from tags if people are talking rapidly back and forth or if you just want to take a break.
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You'll know how to handle dialogue tags and descriptors as you practice. Reading your manuscript out loud can also point out when they're clunky or unnecessary. There's a necessary balance to making tags that you'll find more easily with each draft!
Not that anybody asked, but I think it's important to understand how shame and guilt actually work before you try to use it for good.
It's a necessary emotion. There are reasons we have it. It makes everything so. much. worse. when you use it wrong.
Shame and guilt are DE-motivators. They are meant to stop behavior, not promote it. You cannot, ever, in any meaningful way, guilt someone into doing good. You can only shame them into not doing bad.
Let's say you're a parent and your kid is having issues.
Swearing in class? Shame could work. You want them to stop it. Keep it in proportion*, and it might help. *(KEEP IT IN PROPORTION!!!)
Not doing their homework? NO! STOP! NO NOT DO THAT! EVER! EVER! EVER! You want them to start to do their homework. Shaming them will have to opposite effect! You have demotivated them! They will double down on NOT doing it. Not because they are being oppositional, but because that's what shame does!
You can't guilt people into building better habits, being more successful, or getting more involved. That requires encouragement. You need to motivate for that stuff!
If you want it in a simple phrase:
You can shame someone out of being a bad person, but you can't shame them into being a good person.
Naruto and Sasuke daily life
opens box that reads "i wanna draw again". inside lies a note. the note says, "mental illness and difficult circumstances have taken years of interest, accessibility, and skill away from me. i want to forgive myself for that. i want to heal my relationship to my hobbies. i want to feel connected to something that once made me feel good, but the cyclic discouragement is difficult to overcome." i turn over the note. on the back it reads "wannta drawe sexy bodies awooga"
Ladies and their Magic Swords (2019)
Art by: Serge Birault