I’m never satisfied with my vnc drawings-
Sometimes I forget that he didn't die. Things were so bad for so long. Sometimes I think he did die, and this is another boy entirely
The Lesson by Kelly Link
This is my hotel. Thanks. Hey, what’s up? Nothing. Just that I’ve stayed here before, too.
Hey there! You can call me Nym.
For a while I’ve been juggling with the idea of starting a writing blog and it seems like I’ve finally found the courage to do so.
Nym, 26. Uni Student.
Friendly Mess
Passionate about reading and writing since forever.
Hoping finding an online community of writers could help kindle the dormant fires of my inspiration.
Seeking to experiment with my style.
Favorite genres to both read and write would be Fantasy (mostly dark and/or urban) and Science Fiction. But I love a little bit of everything.
Huge Greek Mythology Nerd.
World-building enthusiast.
The problem is; I’m not familiar with how things are done around here. Everyone seems to have these enormous networks and I don’t know how to do that.
- My blog is a sad empty Limbo with no format whatsoever.
- I can’t do edits.
- I don’t use an efficient tag system.
- I’m not used to the whole blogging business.
- I don’t even follow anyone as of now.
I guess what I would need is for those of you, seeing this in the tags, that feel anything I said resonate with them, to reblog this, so I can find friendly mutuals to start this adventure with.
Want to help a friend out?
I was thinking about plotting, and about telling a story chronologically or not.
It reminded me of first impressions and the primacy effect. Solomon Asch studied this in the 1940s I think. The primacy effect shows us that we appoint more weight to information that we learn first than to information we learn later.
He studied this by giving two groups of people a list of personality traits. For example, group one is introduced to a woman, “This is Anna. She is beautiful, funny, spiteful and mean.” Group two, however, hears this: “This is Anna. She is mean, spiteful, funny and beautiful.”
The second list is of course the reverse of the first list. You would think that both people form the same impression of Anna, because they are given the same adjectives. But no. Group one had a more positive impression of Anna and were more prepared to forgive her for her meanness and spitefulness than group two.
This is how you can use the primacy effect for your characters:
Introduce your main character by showing her doing something good first.
If you plan to redeem a villain in the end and make your readers feel positive towards him, show him having some small positive traits first, for example petting his kitten.
If you want your readers to go, “I knew this character was bad even though everyone trusted him, I just had this feeling he’s up to no good!”, show him doing something bad first, like kicking the kitten, and then some good acts. (”I never forgave him for kicking that helpless kitten!”)
Flashbacks, flash forwards and other ways to tell your story non-chronologically can influence the impression your readers have of your characters compared to a linear, chronological story.
I hope this was helpful. Don’t hesitate to ask me any questions, and happy writing!
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Some frames from my “Jaikarn” comics.
***It’s a free webcomic I update every month, but it’s not available on english; english translation in progress .______.
the most heartbreaking part of hamlet really is the whole “goodnight sweet prince” part because when horatio says “and angels sing thee to thy rest” he is using the intimate form of thou, and it’s the first time he ever does it. hamlet consistently uses the intimate form of thou for horatio (only when they’re in private though, which – if shakespeare intentionally wanted to give their relationship homoerotic subtext, which he totally did – shows that hamlet wants to keep his romantic love for horatio a secret to the greater public) but horatio, being the respectful person he is and also given the fact that if he were to use the intimate form of thou it would pretty much be a romantic confession, never ever uses thou. except when after hamlet dies. when it’s too late.
here hamlet is, dying in horatio’s arms, asking horatio if he ever held him in his heart. and horatio doesn’t get a chance to reply. hamlet dies. only then does horatio realizes his mistake of not confessing sooner
this is so self-indulgent is2g but what if this audio was in video form??
so basically what we have here is: makoto having the courage to leave a love message on haru’s phone and haru stays in bed and thinks about it while he plays it again and again
this took me like three hours j e s u s
some fucking resources for all ur writing fuckin needs
body language masterlist
a translator that doesn’t eat ass like google translate does
a reverse dictionary for when ur brain freezes
550 words to say instead of fuckin said
638 character traits for when ur brain freezes again
some more body language help
off to have a flying date!
behind the scenes with Gemma Arterton for Harper’s Bazaar UK (January 2020) [x]
Hi! I'm Kit I write and occasionally do other stuff
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