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1 year ago

Another worldbuilding application of the "two layer rule": To create a culture while avoiding The Planet Of Hats (the thing where a people only have one thing going for them, like "everyone wears a silly hat"): You only need two hats.

Try picking two random flat culture ideas and combine them, see how they interact. Let's say taking the Proud Warrior Race - people who are all about glory in battle and feats of strength, whose songs and ballads are about heroes in battle and whose education consists of combat and military tactics. Throw in another element: Living in diaspora. Suddenly you've got a whole more interesting dynamic going on - how did a people like this end up cast out of their old native land? How do they feel about it? How do they make a living now - as guards, mercenaries? How do their non-combatants live? Were they always warrior people, or did they become fighters out of necessity to fend for themselves in the lands of strangers? How do the peoples of these lands regard them?

Like I'm not shitting, it's literally that easy. You can avoid writing an one-dimensional culture just by adding another equally flat element, and the third dimension appears on its own just like that. And while one of the features can be location/climate, you can also combine two of those with each other.

Let's take a pretty standard Fantasy Race Biome: The forest people. Their job is the forest. They live there, hunt there, forage there, they have an obnoxious amount of sayings that somehow refer to trees, woods, or forests. Very high chance of being elves. And then a second common stock Fantasy Biome People: The Grim Cold North. Everything is bleak and grim up there. People are hardy and harsh, "frostbite because the climate hates you" and "being stabbed because your neighbour hates you" are the most common causes of death. People are either completely humourless or have a horrifyingly dark, morbid sense of humour. They might find it funny that you genuinely can't tell which one.

Now combine them: Grim Cold Bleak Forest People. The summer lasts about 15 minutes and these people know every single type of berry, mushroom and herb that's edible in any fathomable way. You're not sure if they're joking about occasionally resorting to eating tree bark to survive the long dark winter. Not a warrior people, but very skilled in disappearing into the forest and picking off would-be invaders one by one. Once they fuck off into the woods you won't find them unless they want to be found.

You know, Finland.


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1 year ago
page 1 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 4 panels long. 

1. Nosramus is reading (Frankenstein), when from the other room, Enki shouts. 
Enki: God (of the depths) fucking DAMNIT 
*metal sound*

2. Nosramus: What is

3. Nosramus gets surprised: going ON in here

4. Enki is sitting at a stool in a bathrobe next to a comb with most of the teeth broken off. His hair is tangled, bloody, and stuffed with herbs and comb teeth and he is preparing to saw it off with a bonesaw.
Enki: can I help you
page 2 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 5 panels long. 

1. Nosramus grabs Enki's hands with the bonesaw in them.
Nosramus: hey hey

2. Nosramus takes the bonesaw away from an indignant Enki
Nosramus: why

3. Enki holds up his hair with comb teeth tangled in it.
Enki: My hair is too far gone in my opinion. Better to chop it off and start over.

4. Nosramus holds out his waterfall of beautiful hair. 
Nosramus: I've spent 400+ years growing this shit out do you think I got this far by cutting if off every time it felt hopeless?

5. Nosramus takes Enki's hair.
Nosramus: Your hair is - _ ... Could Be beautiful.
page 3 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 2 panels long. 

1. Enki grabs his hair to his chest.
Nosramus (offscreen): Unless you really want to cut it.

2. Enki holds out his hair to Nosramus. His fingers twitch in excitement.
Enki: If you're so hungry to try to detangle all of this be my guest.
page 4 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 4 panels long. 

1. Enki (changed into his priestly robes again) is getting his hair combed out by Nosramus. 
Enki: hOW long did you say this was going to take?

2. Nosramus: not long at all ^^ three or so days ^^

3. Enki turns his head fast, causing his hair to be yanked.
Enki: THREE?

4. Enki cradles his head, and Nosramus steps back, sheepish.
Enki: ow ow fuck
page 5 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 5 panels long. 

1. Nosramus has his hand in Enki's hair. What is also in Enki's hair are a bunch of grubs and a centipede. 
Nosramus: !

2. Nosramus pulls his hands out of Enki's hair.
Nosramus: are you aware that you have maggots in your hair?
Enki: oh yeah leave them

3. Nosramus gets a close up. He looks like he has aged a couple years, hit by the Ruin spell.
Nosramus: leave. . . them?

4. Enki turns back to Nosramus, lacing his fingers. More maggots poke out of his hair and crawl onto his face.
Enki: they are my fuvkibg buddies

5. Nosramus leans over in despair and makes a keysmash sigh noise.
Nosramus: Chambara see me through this trial.
page 6 of a six page comic featuring Enki and Nosramus from Fear&Hunger. The page is 5 panels long. 

1. Enki's hair is mostly detangled, and he tilts his head back.
Enki: oh you pray to the new gods?

2. Nosramus picks a maggot out of Enki's hair.
Nosramus: something wrong with that, dark priest?

3. Enki turns back to Nosramus, who is braiding his hair.
Enki: I wasn't expecting it, since you are
Nosramus: Since I am old as balls?

4. Enki turns forward again, holding up his hands. 
Enki: yes since you are old as balls
Nosramus cracks up.

5. Nosramus ties a ribbon around Enki's hair, finishing the braid. 
Nosramus: I take their names in vain whenever I can. Fellowship and all that.

My take on the bathtub fic. . .


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4 years ago
I Did Some Abyss Fan Art. I Hope Y’all Like It!

I did some Abyss fan art. I hope y’all like it!

I really really love Abysstale and I think Abyss Sans’ design is super iconic!

Abyss Sans by @metakazkz


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2 years ago
I Am Correct Actually
I Am Correct Actually
I Am Correct Actually
I Am Correct Actually

I am correct actually

4 months ago

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1 year ago

I went to a library book sale this weekend and I found a very old book called “Electronic Life: How to Think About Computers,” which was published in I think 1975? I’ve been reading it kind of like how I would read a historical document, and it’s lowkey fascinating

1 year ago

Drawing in mspaint? Cool, impressive,  But whenever I see that, I think about the person who makes their art in power point  Every time I see them it boggles me

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(their account)


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