Creating Characters

On the internet, the most common advice for developing characters I’ve found is to fill out a character questionnaire. It’s everywhere. What’s the best way to get to know your character, you ask? Fill out this form, they answer.

The official NaNoWriMo questionnaire is forty-six questions long, guys. Forty. Six. Questions.

This may work perfectly for some people, but I look at those things and die a little on the inside.

I know I can’t be the only person who hates character questionnaires, so if you’re not a fan of forms and also have no idea where to start with your character, I thought I would share my list of things I know about my characters before I start writing.

It is not a list of forty-six things. It’s a list of four.

1. Their Role

Character is story and story is character. You can’t have characters taking up pages and doing nothing. For me, knowing the character’s role in the story means knowing who I need my character to be. Even if a story is character-driven, the first thing you should decide is what about the character is actually driving the story. The role can be specific: a girl grieving for her murdered aunt decides to solve her murder. The role can be vague: the protag’s best friend. No matter what, it’s the reason this character is in your story.

2. Their Name

In real life, our names don’t usually say too much about our characters. This is not the way in fiction. Your name can say everything about your character. Whether it reveals the big stuff: Remus Lupin, Luke Skywalker. Or whether it just sets the tone of the character: Chad, Fitzwilliam, Lily. Choose the name carefully and you can get a rough sketch of a character based on it alone.

3. What Makes Them Unique

In a writing workshop, my instructor once had the class do a character building exercise. She had us close our eyes and imagine our character’s shoes. What sort of shoe were they? What color? Were they scuffed? Polished? We worked our way up the rest of the character, but first, we knew what their shoes looked like.

Having that one piece of information gave us something to use to inform the next piece of clothing, which informed their hair style, which informed the next thing, until we had a clear picture of our entire character.

It’s easier figuring out the smaller details of your characters and working your way to a composite than it is to start with a big picture. When you’re just getting to know your character have a few small, specific details about them that give you an idea of exactly who this person is and, more importantly, make you interested in this character.

Usually I like to have a mix of physical details and personality details. The best usually speak to both. They’re details that can be built upon. They give an impression of a larger picture. For example:

She has the nose of a Fox and the character of one too.

Her hair is always tied up in a messy ponytail.

She likes to wander through the garden when she can’t sleep at night.

For me, these details usually don’t change, no matter how many drafts I work through. The details are usually the reason I like writing about this character in the first place.

4. Where they’re sorted

When you’re writing, you need to be able to answer the question “what would X do next?” Therefore, you need to know something about your character that will help you answer that question.

How do you do this? Luckily, society likes categorising people, so there are a lot of shortcuts you can take to find a way to answer that question for every single character in your novel. You can use the Myer-Briggs system, the zodiac, even the question: cat person or dog person?

Personally, I like using Hogwarts Houses. For three reasons:

It identifies a key personality trait. It isn’t the character’s only personality trait, but it’s something to start with. Matching this with the list of things I know about my character usually defines the character completely.

It focuses on characters’ motivations. It makes me define the person at their core. I can use it as a sort of compass when guiding my character through the plot. It also vaguely answers the question what does this character want: knowledge, power, glory, friendship?

I speak the language fluently. I am my own sorting hat. I can look at anyone, sort them into a house and tell you how it fits into their strengths and weaknesses. With fictional characters as well. I don’t have to think about it. When they make a decision, I don’t need to ask myself: is this in character or out of character? I just know.

Once I know these four things, I write the first draft. I let my characters grow with the plot, using those small things I know about them to guide the rest of their development. At the end of the draft, I reevaluate my character. My list of unchanging facts about the character quadruples. Instead of using their Hogwarts House to guide their decisions, I identify single, solid goals.

The best thing about this is that it works for developing both minor and major characters. For minor characters, this information is usually all I need. Even that grocery clerk who only speaks once can have a name, a Hogwarts house and a couple of distinguishing characteristics. For more major characters, it’s the groundwork for a character I enjoy writing about.

God I should get back into Tumblr...

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lizordz74

6 years ago

Raise ya hand if you love listening to your friends’ OC character powers/abilities and world-building lore

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lizordz74

6 years ago

An older oc that I’m reblogging.

(I like Roma a lot as I put a good amount of time on her. So she’s not getting change from my reboot. Roma will stay Roma. I’m rebloging again due to some thing I added and Tumblr bugging out on me)

I spend some good time working on this and I’m proud to introduce you to Roma!

Name: Roma

Age: mid-twenties

Height: She’s a tall person. Just up to Goku’s neck if the two stood side-by-side.

Pronouns: She/Her

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Occupation: A combat medic in the Time Patrol

Family: Father (Alive), Mother (Deceased)

Backstory:

This bundle of joy was born into a very rich family on a very old planet with secrets that have yet to bo discovered. Her Dad was a “Businessman” and Her mother is a Doctor that did everything. Her family was a happy one. Roma spent her time with her mother to learn the medical skills and her Father went to work. They were a nice humble with no problems… until one day Roma was told to help clean her dads office and she did. Under the desk she found a button, and she pressed it and a secret door opened up.

Curious she went inside and went into the hallway and entered a room with ancient books and relics. She couldn’t make up most of the rooms but the one thing she could make out was something to do with Time manipulation. Roma’s curiosity took a toll when she accidentally knocked a fragile artifact and it exploded with a small, quiet but mysterious effect. She didn’t feel anything happen at all though. She shrugged it off, thinking that was nothing. She exited the secret room before her dad noticed at all.

As the years past Roma’s parents started to drift away. Roma’s dad started to work more and more and not spending time with Roma. Her mother did not approve of that. Arguments increased. Roma still spent time with her mother with medical stuff learning many things.

In her teens, thing between her parents grew to a boiling point of their relationship. One day Roma’s dad asked her to come at the office. To learn the truth. It turns out that her dad is a crime lord. Then Roma heard a scream. Her mother. She was shot by a special bullet that can kill majins that she learned with her mother. Roma tried everything to save her mother but her mother died before she could save her. Her mother was… assassinated.

Outraged at her father. It’s his fault that Roma’s mom was dead. His fault that he was a crime lord leading to this… but it was HER fault for not saving her mom. Roma ran away from home and into the outside world. She spend most of her time helping the wounded trying to forgive herself for being unable to save her mother. Her medical skills was noticed by many people… that she can be used as a tatical move to their gang.

Roma was leaving a alleyway when four men attacked her. She was on the ground, these men were going to kipnap her! Then… everything… Froze in place. Like. Time itself. Then the men started to reverse a little bit but Roma can move around just fine. She beat the thugs up and after that Roma had a strong gift. To stop time. (I’ll talk about this more later).

Years later of roaming and helping anyone that she could do. She got the news that her dad’s in prison for life. She visited her father. It was a emotional meeting but she still couldn’t forgive him and herself for getting her mom killed. Roma’s dad gave her all of the crime money and told her not to follow in his footsteps. She did that. For her mother. Not her father. It was what Roma’s mother would’ve wanted.

Roma needed a peaceful place to go to. To get away from most things and think about life. She heard of a place that was called Conton city. She went there to buy a mansion with her tens of trillions of money she got from her dad.

Months past and she did nothing. Just. Nothing. Thinking what her mother would do now. If Roma asked her mother she’ll say ‘The right thing’. Wait… the right thing. Roma helped and protected many people that needed it. She needed to help people in need but Conton had very little people that had needed it but there was a program that did specially that.

The Time Patrol…

Roma signed up to the academy. She struggled a little bit but she still past with her medical skills. She was assigned as a Combat Medic for the TP.

Roma still is trying to forgive herself for her mother’s death… and her father as well secretly…

Personality: VERY Supportive, perfectionist, slightly snobbish, joyful, hates sour food, organized, messy at times. She tends to hold grudges against people if they’re mean or just not a nice person.

Likes: Helping others, exploring, sleeping, having everything nice and tidy (except her bed…), being independent.

Dislikes: Failing other because it remind her of her mother and how Roma failed to save her. People who are assholes, people who are criminals.

People she likes: Her mother… that’s about it.

Strengths: Her time manipulation (I’ll express more about this.., Her medical skills, her kindness for others, her speed, compassion and willpower.

Weaknesses: hard on herself, not very strong at all, Gullible, Can and Will shut herself away from others if someone dies and she could’ve done something about it, slightly naive.

Some Facts:

She has four outfits (Two I drawn myself!)

She has a “Casual”, “Training” or “fighting” clothes, a “Battlesuit” and “sleepwear”

Casual:

Training/Fighting

Battlesuit: like zarbons but with a little bit different

And sleepwear: a tank top and a thong

Now to address the elephant in the room. Her Time Manipulation. She can COMPLETELY stop time, nothing can break through it BUT to compensate for that she can only stop time for 0.025 of a second (Hit can stop time for a 0.1 of a second to compare.) AND instead Roma’s Time-Skip is a dome like blast that is mediocre in size that Roma HAS to shoot or throw out. It’s like a grenade that forms a dome that completes stops time for 0.025 of a second. I hope this balances her out enough.

Roma it the worst person to sleep with she one of these sleepers… (I didn’t want to draw this so imagine that’s Roma)

My second oc is still being worked on and I’ll give you a secret… it’s a icejin… and I may draw the whole character..! Stay tuned lol

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lizordz74

6 years ago

A faint voice. That’s all he can hear... and it was growing farther away. Away to the point that the voice was more like a soft sound. It was... peaceful. The coldness was forced away by a vast movement of warm air. Perfect... Zero is warm. Tired. Zero’s eyes finally closed and into the blackness. A bright white light pieced the darkness. Zero was warm and was on something soft. It felt nice. Then he opened his eyes. Lights beamed on his face. Zero felt weak but comfortable. He sat up to see that he’s in a hospital. Wh-what happen- Zero remembered. He was going to die in a alleyway... then someone saved him. Thank you to whoever save my life... Zero thought to himself on the bed...

🚑 bleeding in an alleyway @snowy-and-frosbyte-roleplay-blog (will play as Snowy)

F-fuck… Zero laid on the cold alleyway pavement weakly pressing against the wound on the abdomen. The blood was seeping between the space of his fingers. He doesn’t remember what even happen. One thing he was drinking the next he’s has a deep wound in his abdomen.

Zero’s breathing shallowed. He needed help…..

Or he’s going to die.

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lizordz74

6 years ago

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lizordz74

6 years ago

This is too... ahahdisbash!!! Such a adorable Xue!

Commission - Fifth Form

Author’s Note:-

Commission for @theshyesticicle, with their OC Xue and Cooler. I kind of based their end position on this post by @xeosprism , I hope that’s okay. It seemed to fit them really well haha.

Thank you for commissioning me!

xxxxx

A small smile formed on Xue’s face, accompanied by a faint blush. It always happened when he saw Cooler come out of the bathroom, and into the bedroom. Even if they weren’t going to do it; even if they weren’t in the mood and just wanted to sleep… Xue could never get over how cool Cooler was. He was just so – amazing! He was really powerful and handsome, and that didn’t even matter because he was funny and a smooth talker and everything he did and said was just so so awesome! Xue loved him! He idolised him! He felt so lucky, every single day to be in Cooler’s life. Not only in his life – but his boyfriend as well! Was that what they were? They’d never really given it a name… Lover? They were lovers, right? Yes! Xue was Cooler’s lover! And he loved being Cooler’s lover! He loved Cooler! In all of his moods and in any setting and in any form – … huh. Xue stopped thinking about how amazing Cooler was, just for a moment, when another thought occurred to him. Did Cooler have other forms…? Xue had never seen any, but… he must have, right? Even Xue had another form, and Xue wasn’t anywhere near as powerful as Cooler! But… Cooler’s first form was strong enough in itself… Maybe Cooler didn’t need any other forms. His first one was certainly amazing enough, without a doubt! Xue couldn’t imagine how it could be improved. But… now that he’d thought of it, he couldn’t let it go. He had to ask!

“Um…” Xue looked at Cooler, and met his eyes. Eep! Eye contact with Cooler was always so exciting, even if it was a regular occurrence now. Xue was constantly in awe of him. “Hey… can you transform?”

“Transform?” Cooler looked back at Xue, who was lying in bed, staring at him keenly. He looked somewhat nervous. Hm. Cooler smirked slightly. Waiting in anticipation, was he? Well… the answer was yes. “Of course I can.” Cooler spoke. “I have five forms.”

“F-Five!”

Wow! Xue’s eyes widened, and his mouth remained wide open, as if it had forgotten how to close. Five forms? Five? That was the highest number Xue had ever heard of! How did he get five forms? Wow, Cooler really was amazing! He must be so powerful! Xue couldn’t even begin to imagine what the fifth form must look like. It would be so cool – it would definitely be too good to show to Xue! Right? Xue wasn’t worthy of seeing it, right? As much as he wanted to… as much as he was suddenly desperate to, the second he’d heard of its existence. But there was no way – no way Xue could ever see –

“Would you like to see my fifth form?”

“Yes!” Xue screamed at the top of his lungs, jumping out from under the covers. He landed on the bed, his tail erect, his fists clenched in excitement, and his eyes gleaming as he stared at Cooler with a wide grin upon his face. Then within seconds, his shoulders drooped and he turned bright purple. He realised what a douche he must look right now… “U-Um…” Xue mumbled sheepishly, his cheeks growing darker. They were burning. “I mean… if… you want to…”

“Hm.”

Cooler’s smirk grew, charmed by Xue’s fanboying. Cooler did adore being admired, and Xue always did it with such passion. It was clear the younger being was constantly in awe of him, and Cooler found it exhilarating. He loved having his ego stroked… especially by one as adorable, and beautiful as Xue. Cooler liked to show off his strength and power in front of him, because his response was just… irresistible. Cooler remained calm, as if it were nothing… which would fascinate Xue more, Cooler knew. The calmer he was, the more Xue was in awe of him. Cooler made everything look so easy, even transforming. He took a step back, and powered up… and he watched the expression upon Xue’s face as he transformed.

Xue was… speechless. Seriously, speechless. His eyes were wide, his jaw had dropped once more and he didn’t seem able to close his mouth. He didn’t dare blink, he didn’t dare move… He was just… breath taken. Cooler looked… amazing! Wow! Xue felt himself begin to tremble, and he felt embarrassed by it but he couldn’t stop. Actually, being aware of it only made him tremble more. He felt so nervous! Cooler’s new form was so – powerful! Xue could feel his ki running straight through him! And he looked so awesome, like totally badass! His muscles were bigger, and he had spikes on his head armour and his eyes were glowing like lasers – aaaaaaa it was amazing! “Do you like it?” Cooler questioned.

“I – I – I –” Xue wheezed, so overwhelmed by his own excitement that he could barely breathe. “I – yes!” He managed to wail at the top of his lungs, and once he’d started he didn’t seem able to stop. “Cooler I love it! Aaaaa you look totally cool and awesome – I mean you looked amazing anyway but now you’re totally better and I didn’t even think that was possible and you’re way more powerful –” he paused, but only to take a breath, before he continued his wailing. “I bet you’re the strongest guy in the universe, nobody can ever compete with you now, you’re totally the best ever and thank you for showing me thank you thank you thank you –”

He was stopped abruptly, by the tip of Cooler’s tail placing itself in his mouth. Xue froze on the spot and stared at his lover, his heart racing. What… did that mean…? Had he said something wrong? Oh no – he hadn’t overdone it, had he? He hadn’t freaked Cooler out with his nerdy fanboying? Oh, no! Why was he so stupid? Cooler probably got people marvelling over him all the time, he didn’t need to listen to Xue’s stupid squealing –

“Would you like to try it out?”

Again, Xue froze. For a second, even his heart stopped beating. Try… try it out…?

“Mm…” Xue pulled his mouth away from Cooler’s tail, and looked at him. “Y-You mean…?” His body grew tense, and his heart started pounding. No… no… eep!

“Mm…” Cooler purred. He crawled onto the bed, and nuzzled the metal grill on his face against Xue’s cheek. “Of course, I’ll have to hold back a lot… but I might not be as gentle as usual. This form is very powerful, after all… is that alright?”

“C…” Xue swallowed, and looked at him. The thought of it was just – out of this world! He couldn’t believe he had the opportunity, to do it with… wow! Kami, yes! Of course he wanted to! Yes yes yes yes! Xue almost screamed, and kissed Cooler in excitement, when he realised… this form didn’t have a mouth, did it? How were they supposed to kiss? “Your… your lips…” Xue mumbled. “I mean – you don’t need them! Because that plate thing looks really good on you and you have the best face ever! But – can you still –”

“Yes.” Cooler nodded. “I can still kiss you.”

Xue watched as the metal plate collapsed down into Cooler’s cheeks, revealing a fleshy mouth, just like the one he’d had before. Oh… so it was still there? But whenever Cooler wanted he could put a mouth guard on to protect himself…? … … Wow! That was amazing! Xue gasped loudly, in marvel at how advanced this new form was. How did it do that? This form had everything!

Cooler sniggered, at the expression on Xue’s face. He was in complete awe of him, complete admiration… how adorable. Irresistible, actually. Cooler didn’t care to hold back. He leaned forward, and placed his lips on Xue’s. He felt Xue quivering and whimpering underneath him; the poor thing probably felt unworthy. At the very least he was trying very hard to contain his excitement. He didn’t need to contain it for Cooler’s sake. Cooler liked to hear Xue squeal over him. He parted his lips, and allowed his tongue to invade Xue’s. There it was… that delicious squeal. Xue whimpered under him, trembling against Cooler’s hands as they slid up his back. Xue had a beautiful body. Soft, and slim, and smooth… Cooler adored it. He slid his fingertips along Xue, massaging into his muscles the way Xue liked. His hands were warmed slightly with ki, the pressure just a little harsh… he had to hold back a lot in this form. It was slightly frustrating, but it was worth it. To feel Xue’s body warm under his hands, and his quivering tongue timidly caress Cooler’s, his trembling lips release the most adorable whimpers… After a long moment of indulgence Cooler pulled away, to look at Xue’s face. His cheeks were flushed, his lips plump and moist. He watched as the younger being swallowed, and offered a small, shy smile.

“U-Um…” Xue uttered quietly. “That was… good.” What? Why the hell had he said that? Xue regretted it immediately – how could he be so dumb? Of course it was good! Cooler was well aware of how good he was! He didn’t need Xue to remind him – what if he thought Xue didn’t mean it? Xue didn’t say that every time they kissed – it wasn’t like it was normal – so what if Cooler thought he was only saying it now because he hadn’t really liked it? Oh, noooo! That was definitely what he’d think! Crap! Crap crap crap crap! Xue began to panic, and tried very hard not to turn into a hyperventilating mess. Should he say something? To reassure Cooler? Or would that make it worse? Because what if Cooler didn’t need reassuring? What if he knew how amazing he was, and he knew Xue really had liked it, but the reassurance actually made him wonder if Xue was just saying it to be nice or something? Aaaaaa, no! Xue had no idea what to do! He had to calm down, before Cooler noticed he was on the verge of a meltdown!

Too late. Cooler started chuckling, and Xue felt his cheeks burn once more. He must look like such a douche…

“I’m glad you approve.” Cooler spoke silkily. “But… what’s wrong, my dear?” He brushed his tail along Xue’s, trailing it up to the base. That always drove Xue wild… he knew it drove Xue wild. “You seem… nervous. You don’t want to stop, do you?”

“No!” Xue screamed, and then clasped his hands over his mouth, catching himself. “It’s just – aaaaa Cooler, you know what I’m like! This form is really amazing, it’s making me act so stupid!”

“I don’t think you’re acting stupid.” Cooler soothed.

He moved forward, to plant a kiss on Xue’s neck, calming him. “Mmm…” Cooler’s voice rippled against Xue’s skin, drawing another small squeal from Xue’s mouth. It felt so… sexy. “Actually, I’m rather flattered that you would think so highly of me…” He planted another warm kiss on Xue’s neck. Then another, and another… moving across Xue’s flesh, each one of them feeling like fire. Xue almost screamed. Kami… “Hmm… Lie down, darling.” Cooler spoke softly against his skin, and Xue willingly obeyed. He lay down and closed his eyes, his tail curling in anticipation. Would it hurt…? Would it be too much…? Xue could sense Cooler’s ki surrounding him; he’d never felt anything so powerful before. He wasn’t totally sure he could handle it, and even if he could… would Xue still be able to please him…? He wouldn’t be too weak for Cooler, would he…?

“Aaaa…” Xue uttered a soft moan, as Cooler’s hand slid across his thigh, and onto his organ. Xue was already partly aroused. He couldn’t help it! It was… this form… “Mmm…” Xue bit his lip, his eyes still closed as Cooler stroked his hand up and down Xue’s length. Xue could feel his ki, travelling into him. It was warm, and tingly, all the way down his length, and up his spine… kami. “Aaaaa…” Xue whimpered, digging his nails into the bedsheets. “C… Cooler…”

“Hmm…?” A small smirk crept across Cooler’s lips as he watched Xue’s face twist in bliss. That was it… Beautiful. Cooler did enjoy pleasuring Xue. He enjoyed how powerful it made him feel over him, how superior… he was controlling Xue’s body, through pleasure alone. It was exquisite…

Xue writhed and whimpered under him, as Cooler’s tail trailed along his lips. It placed itself in his mouth, and obediently Xue began to suck. Gently, and through his soft moans. Mmm, wonderful… Cooler pushed his tail further into Xue’s mouth, to see how much Xue could take. Xue winced when it started to go down his throat. He coughed and gagged, his hands firmly gripping the sheets. He wanted to pull away, Cooler could see. But he didn’t. Because his desire to please Cooler was greater. How loving of him… Cooler found it arousing. He continued on, lustfully watching the expression on Xue’s face as he filled it with his tail… until it was clear Xue had taken as much as he could. “Ssh…” Cooler soothed, slowly removing his tail from Xue’s mouth. He never pushed Xue too far. That would be barbaric. “That’s it, darling… are you alright?”

“Mm-hm…” Xue swallowed, easing the pain in his throat. Cooler’s tail was big…

“Good boy…” Cooler purred. “So… are you ready for me…?”

“Y-Yes…” Xue answered, trying not to show his nerves. He failed miserably; Cooler could see how nervous he was. It turned Cooler on. He adored how nervous and timid Xue was around him. He wanted it. He craved it. He wanted to make him squeal.

“Aaa!”

Xue cried out, as Cooler suddenly bound his hands together with his tail, and flipped him onto his front. “C-Cooler…”

“Mmm…?” Cooler’s voice came from above him, almost in a moan. His ki was rising; Xue could feel it echoing through his body. He could feel it in his bones, in his heart… it was almost frightening. Xue scrunched his eyes shut, his body trembling with nerves. Would he be able to handle this…?

“Ah!” He let out a cry, when he felt Cooler’s hand on his organ again. The heavy weight of Cooler’s body pressed down against Xue’s back. He felt his legs being parted by Cooler’s, and his body being raised. Cooler’s face was beside his, and he felt Cooler’s lips on his neck again. Kissing him… then biting. “Aaa…” Xue whimpered at the small, sharp pain of Cooler’s teeth sinking into his flesh. He dug his nails into the bed, gritting his teeth at the mix of pain and pleasure, as Cooler’s teeth hurt him, but Cooler’s hand… it touched his organ in just the right way; Cooler was driving him crazy! His hand slid up and down Xue’s length, showering it with the powerful, blissful ki of Cooler’s fifth form. It felt amazing… “Oh…” Xue moaned in ecstasy. “Cooler…”

“Mmm…” Cooler hummed against his skin, grinding his own organ against Xue’s entrance. He could feel the heat of it against his cock; he could feel Xue trembling against him… so sexy. Cooler didn’t want to wait. He tightened his tail around Xue’s wrists, and held him against him with his free hand, then he entered him.

“A-Aaaa…” Xue cried out in agony as Cooler’s cock pushed into him. Xue was tight anyway, but even more so from nerves. Cooler was bigger in this form… it hurt. “Cooler…” Xue whimpered, his eyes watering. He felt a deep, throbbing pain travel up his spine as Cooler continued his invasion, moving further into him… kami, when would it stop? How big was he? “Cooler…” Xue groaned into the duvet, his restrained fists clenching as best they could. “Nnnn…”

“Do you want me to stop…?” Cooler asked, closing his eyes. He hoped the answer was no. This felt unbelievable! Xue was so warm, and tight. His body was shaking around Cooler; his ki was soaring. Cooler didn’t want to stop.

“No!” Xue gasped. “Don’t – ah!” He hissed, his walls clamping around Cooler’s organ as it filled him. Cooler was now fully submerged, and Xue’s tender body was beginning to adjust. Slowly…

“Good…” Cooler exhaled, and pulled out slightly. Then in again… oh, yes.

“Ooo…” Xue uttered, almost sobbing. It still hurt, but it was getting better. Cooler knew exactly what to do. “Coo – ah…”

His moan was cut off, by another deep, heavy thrust. Cooler pushed into him, and out again. He tried to stay slow and gentle, for as long as he could, but after just a few movements his keenness got the better of him. He wasn’t as patient in this form. He released Xue’s organ from his firm grasp to grab hold of his thighs, and keep him in place. Then he began to thrust. Hard. Xue started to cry out underneath him, his entire body tensing up. “Ah – Cooler! Mmm…” He scrunched his watering eyes shut as the force of Cooler’s thrusts travelled through him. He could feel each one, hot and heavy. Through his walls, up his spine, across his stomach. He felt Cooler’s ki plunge into him with each movement, forcing itself into Xue’s body. It hurt to begin with, enough to bring Xue to tears, but he didn’t want Cooler to stop. He wanted to please Cooler, and eventually his body adjusted… and it started to feel good. More than good. It started to feel unbelievable! “Ohhhh…” Xue moaned underneath his lover, his nerves tingling all throughout his body. He felt hot. His skin was trembling and his chamber was burning… but it felt good. He could feel Cooler’s ki surrounding him, warming his entire soul. He could feel Cooler’s power moving through him, in wave after wave of hot, white bliss. “Cooler…”

“Mmmm!” Cooler groaned above him, and he yanked Xue’s body towards his organ. He shoved himself into the tightness of Xue’s chamber, grunting and moaning as Xue’s hot, moist walls clamped down on him. He caressed Xue’s body, eagerly groping and fondling the smoothness of Xue’s flesh. The slimness of his figure, the quivering of his skin… He could feel Xue trembling and growing warmer under his hands; he could sense Xue’s ki skyrocketing, fuelled by his own. Xue was struggling to handle him, and that drove Cooler wild. He threw his lips down onto Xue and bit him, drawing a loud cry from Xue’s mouth. It only excited Cooler more. He bit him harder, all over his body. He kissed and licked the wounds, before biting him again. Je squeezed Xue’s buttocks in his hands as he pounded into him, tightly holding his grip on Xue’s wrists, as if he were his prisoner. Xue squirmed and squealed underneath him, which only made Cooler go harder. He grew more excited the more Xue moaned; he thrust deeper every time Xue’s hot, moist body pushed against him. Fast, and firm… mmm…

“Ooo…” Xue groaned, nuzzling against Cooler’s tail. It was too much… Cooler’s ki was burning through him; he felt like he was going to explode! It felt so good, though. So warm, so intense… “Mmm…” Xue gasped desperately, his lips parting as he grew closer to climax. Cooler… it was all he could think, all he could feel… yes… “Ooo, Cooler…”

“Mmmm…” Cooler let out a loud moan, and Xue screamed at the top of his lungs as his ki soared. Fuck!

“Aaaaaa!” Xue almost burst into tears, just from the sheer force of Cooler’s ki. It tore through his body and soul, heating up every atom of his being, engulfing him in hot, white bliss. Oh, kami! “Ohhhh…” Xue groaned, deeply and lowly as his chamber became filled with Cooler’s seed. He didn’t even notice his own spill onto the bed. Not until Cooler released him, and he collapsed down onto the wet patch. He winced and turned away from it, but he was too zoned out to get up and wash himself. That… was amazing. That whole thing… … wow…

Xue lay still, panting softly, recovering from Cooler’s fifth form. He felt the weight of Cooler lying beside him, and he scurried into his lover’s arms, seeking comfort after a very intense session. Cooler simply chuckled, and wrapped his arms around Xue, draping his tail across them. Such a beautiful little thing, Xue was. Cooler closed his eyes, a small smile upon his lips. He breathed slowly and deeply; he was a little fatigued, but he felt very satisfied. As he always did, with Xue. He enjoyed Xue… more than he cared to admit a lot of the time…

“How was it…?” Cooler spoke softly, and rested his lips against Xue’s head.

“Mmm…” Xue simply moaned in response, still in his daze. Cooler smiled, and chuckled again. He planted a kiss on Xue’s forehead, and hugged him… and he wondered how long it would be before Xue had a meltdown over touching the wet patch.

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lizordz74

6 years ago

Hru 🤡🎈 do u want to play with me......... im getting really hungry..heheheh

Uhhh... Hi... *screams then hides in attic*