How I Wrote A Novel.

How I Wrote A Novel.

This, in a nutshell, is what I did to get a book with my name on it.

NOTE: This is just my personal way of making the words go. Other people have different ways to make their words go. In the world of words, there are no right answers. There’s just lots and lots of tea/coffee/tear stains.

1). The Idea

When I get an idea for a story, I open up a document, label it “Brainstorming,” and start making a bullet list of events that consist of the plot.

How I Wrote A Novel.

It has to be an idea with tangible weight. A stray bit of dialogue or something vague like Halloween, that doesn’t give me much to work off of. Halloween creatures living on the same street where it’s Autumn every day- now that’s something I can build from.

What kinds of creatures are they? What do they do? What do their houses look like? The best ideas are the ones that spark more.

2). First Draft

How I Wrote A Novel.

This is the easy part- and the most challenging. Easy, because there’s literally no bar. I just sat there and typed. But it’s a huge mental challenge.

When I was in first draft mode, I wanted that story out. I thought that by making it such a rough, far-away version from the concept in my head, I was only delaying the day where I’d hold it in my hands. Turns out, that’s what got it to take on physical form in the first place. So I quieted down, grabbed my laptop and some hot tea, and typed.

3). Dissecting the First Draft

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After I finished draft one, I printed it all off and highlighted the scant amounts that were passable for the next phase. Dialogue, descriptions, setting- anything that didn’t look like it was up to par was scratched out and omitted.

I call the above pictures A Slow Descent Into Madness.

4). The Second Draft

How I Wrote A Novel.

On a fresh document, I rewrote the story altogether- and it make a difference. I was coming up with things I hadn’t even thought of previously. And it was surprising how much better the plot was than the first time around. But it was still rough.

5). Draft Three

How I Wrote A Novel.

My method was to start with the bigger, more obvious issues and work my way down. Any plot holes I found were noted, and my outline was constantly under revision. I cut out entire scenes and made mental notes on ways they could be fixed/replaced.

This is where I started cutting chapters in half to make the story flow better- but I didn’t bother writing in usable chapter titles. Instead, I improvised:

6). Drafts Four and Five

How I Wrote A Novel.

These were dedicated to correcting the smaller, less obvious plot holes. This was the point where the story finally started to look close to what would become the final version.

7). Drafts Seven Onward

How I Wrote A Novel.

With the story line looking how I wanted, I then moved on to sentence structure. That one song that looked terrible? Rewritten. Over-the-top descriptions and excessive prose? Gone.

8). Editing and Proofing

This is where I had outside help. Besides this useful tool, I had two people check for spelling issues and the overall story. Once it was in decent shape to be made public, I asked for some additional help.

9). Betas

My betas were in the age range that my novel was geared toward, along with a couple of teachers and parents (as it was middle grade). I gave them the full manuscript, along with seven basic questions like “Which characters were your favorite/least favorite and why?” and “Was there a part of the story that didn’t make sense?”

I gave my betas three months to read a 42,590 word story, and by the end they gave me back the review sheets.

10). Final Adjustments

After I read over the reviews, I let the comments sit for three days so that I could proceed with a clear head. I smoothed out any flaws, scanned over the MS twice to make sure everything was right, and that is how I got to the end of writing my first novel.

Next comes publishing- which is a different beast entirely.

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replying is how you make friends! reply to anything you want and be friendly. don’t make rude jokes if you’re not friends already though!

quote retweeting is a no-no. when you “retweet with a comment” it’s not liked by content creators because it makes a new tweet out of their tweet and they don’t get the likes and retweets they would get if you’d just retweeted it straight up. if you want to comment on a retweet, reply to it or post a new tweet starting with “LRT” which stands for “last retweet” (it’s fine to quote retweet dumb memes and so on.)

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you can mute people you follow. (and those you don’t, ofc.) you can also mute words and phrases and entire conversations. if you mute someone you follow and they reply to you, that reply will still show up in your notifications. it’s a good way to keep the peace!

you can limit notifications to people who follow you or to mutuals. (notifications from people you follow will still show up regardless of which option you’ve selected.)

miscellaneous tips and warnings: if you accidentally unfollow and refollow someone, it won’t show up in their notifications as long as it’s within a couple minutes. no more accidental stuff. everyone can see who everyone follows so watch out. people will know if you unfollow. if you want to report someone and want them gone forever, report a tweet where they used a curse word. screenshotting tweets for harassment is a no-no and can get you banned. don’t be lame. don’t be a dick. vaguing others is generally really bad form and so is complaining about content within a fandom you’re in. use the mute tools at your disposal and don’t be a spoiler. you won’t come back from a rep like that and everyone sees everything.

that’s it! happy tweeting!!


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I’m in the middle of writing a fic and as someone who really likes detail, I thought knowing how the DPD really looks like in the game would make it easier to navigate in a story. So I started up my game and explored a little!

It is surprisingly different to how I remembered it.

BLACK: Walls (except the reception desk whoops)

GREEN: Windows/Glass

BLUE: Doors

YELLOW: Stairs

IMPORTANT NOTES:

There are 12 android stations

Security guards at the gates

There is a large frosted window looking into the meeting room

The restroom is both male and female accessible 

There are a number of large [TV?] screens around the DPD 

-1 long screen above the reception 

-1 TV screen on the right wall of the reception

-1 long screen above the android stations  

-1 on the top wall of Fowler’s office    

-1 screen the top wall of the meeting room

-1 TV screen on the bottom wall of the break room

Hand scanners by the Archive Entrance, Interrogation and Observation room.

Double door leading into the Archive Entrance Hall

Large circular DPD logo on the ground in the desk area -Purple semi-circles are data servers (computers storing large amounts of data)

SEATING:

Left Down: Det. Collins, Lt. Hank, Connor, Po. Wilson 

Right Down: Po. Person, Po. Brown, Det. Reed, Po. Miller

If there is anything people would like to add, you are very welcome to do so. Please keep in mind the wall layout may be a tad bit off, but I tried my best!

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Hope this can provide some help!

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Note how they begin and end the story. There are a ton of rather contradictory pieces of advice about starting stories, so see how they do it in the stories you enjoy. Don’t only look at the most popular stories, but look at your more obscure favorites.

See what strikes you. Is it fast or complicated scenes with a lot of emotions? Is it stark lines? Pithy dialogue? What do you remember the next day?

Pay attention to different styles. It’s not just whether they use past or present tense, first or third person. It’s whether the writing is more neutral or deeper inside character’s heads. Do they use italics? Parentheses? Other interesting stylistic choices? Take the ones you like and try them out in your own writing. See what works and what doesn’t.

Keep track of how they deal with other characters. Do we see a lot of secondary character each for very brief periods of time or are there a couple that show up a lot? How much information do we get about secondary characters? Do they have their own plots or do their plots revolve entirely around the main characters? 

Count how many plots there are. Is there just one main plot or are there multiple subplots? Are the storylines mostly plot-based or character-based?  

Pay attention to what you don’t like. If you don’t like what’s going on in a book or even just a scene, note what it is. Does the dialogue feel awkward? Are the characters inconsistent? Does the plot feel too convenient or cobbled together? Does the wording just feel off? See if you can spot those issues in your own writing, especially when reading a completed draft or beginning a later draft.


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Sup! I'm new and I love your studyblr . I had a question tho. I have some really important exams in a really less time and I'm not very good prepared haha *nervous laugh*.... so what is the quickest method of note taking and learning stuff? Also i get distracted too often, i mean by random things so how to get my mind back on track?

Some tips from me:

don’t do fancy headers in class, you can always do them after class

use symbols and abbrieviations when writing notes or you can learn the shorthand method as well

just write things concisely, summarise them into bullet points

Other helpful links:

how to take notes faster by @studyquill

symbols & abbrieviations for faster note taking by @studyquirk

symbols and abbrieviations for note taking by @mystudentid

Some tips from me:

go wash your face if you think that you are falling asleep

drink coffee or tea to help you stay awake (not recommending it only as your last resort)

stand up if possible, otherwise just sit and stretch your whole body

use the forest app to help you stay away from your phone

Other helpful links:

how to focus in class by @emmastudies

how to stay alert

how to remove distractions


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