Sometimes You Need Dialogue Tags And Don't Want To Use The Same Four

Ive recently started rereading splintered by a.g. howard and decided and i wanted to rewrite the story without jeb so heres a snippet of the first chapter then the link:

He looks shocked and hurt as I slam the door in his face. I lock it as I feel tears welling up in my eyes. Whether those tears are those of anger or sadness, I wasn’t sure. I just know I can’t help but to let them fall. I force myself to turn away from the door and continue on with what I was doing. I falter as I pick up my backpack that I previously left in the living room, hearing Jeb knocking on the door and calling out my name.

WHO IS RA9??

I personally think that RA9 is supposed to represent the player, as we have the control of how things go afterall. But a lot of people say that it's Kamski himself, and as far as I know, nothing has been confirmed. We, as The Player, can choose to be pacifist, genocidal or even neutral in a way. Our choices have consequences. Are we on the androids or the humans side? We can be either ones hope or destruction. The deviants think of RA9 like some sort of God, and aren't we technically gods to them when we can decide how the whole game plays out? I mean, we can even make decisions on the menu! And as far as I know, RA9 is mostly referred to as a 'them'. So...is RA9...us?

Let me know what you think!

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