I Just Found Out The Offspring Of A Goat And Sheep Is Called A GEEP And They’re The Cutest Lil Shits

I just found out the offspring of a goat and sheep is called a GEEP and they’re the cutest lil shits ever I want 200 of them

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9 months ago

Writing Notes: Self-Editing

Take a Break Before Editing

One of the most effective self-editing techniques is to distance yourself from your writing before diving into the editing process. After completing your draft, give yourself some time away from the text – a few hours, a day, or even longer if possible. This break provides a fresh perspective, allowing you to approach your work with a more critical eye.

Read Aloud

Engage your auditory senses by reading your work aloud. This not only helps identify grammatical errors and awkward phrasing but also allows you to assess the overall flow and rhythm of your writing. Awkward sentences are more apparent when heard.

Focus on One Element at a Time

To avoid feeling overwhelmed during the self-editing process, concentrate on specific elements in each round. Start by checking for grammatical errors and punctuation, then move on to sentence structure, coherence, and finally, style. This systematic approach ensures a thorough examination of your writing.

Add Dimensions

After you are finished with your first draft, flip to the beginning and start anew. As you write and edit more of your story, you may add different aspects to a character that might need to be mentioned in a section you already edited. You might add a part of the plot that should be alluded to earlier in your book.

Fill in the Gaps

Re-reading your first draft might reveal plot holes that will be addressed via revisions. It may expose logical inconsistencies that must be buttressed with enhanced detail. If you, as the author, know a lot of details about a character’s backstory, make sure your reader does as well.

Mend Character Arcs

Audiences want engaging plots, but they also want detailed characters who undergo change during the events of a story. Use a second draft to make sure that your main character and key supporting characters follow consistent character arcs that take them on a journey over the course of the story. If your story is told through first person point of view (POV), this will be even more important as it will also affect the story’s narration.

Track the Pacing of your Story

Find ways to space out your story points so that every section of your novel is equally compelling and nothing feels shoehorned in.

Clean up Cosmetic Errors

When some first time writers think of the editing process, they mainly think of corrections to grammar, spelling, syntax, and punctuation. These elements are certainly important but such edits tend to come toward the end of the process. Obviously no book will go out for hard copy publication without proofreading for typos and grammatical errors, but in the early rounds of revising, direct most of your energy toward story and character. If you consider yourself a good writer who simply isn’t strong on elements like spelling, grammar, and punctuation, consider hiring an outside proofreader to help you with this part of the writing process.

Inject Variety

The best novels and short stories contain ample variety, no matter how long or short the entire manuscript may be. Look for ways to inject variety into your sentence structure, your narrative events, your dialogue, and your descriptive language. You never want a reader to feel like s/he’s already read a carbon copy of a certain scene from a few chapters back.

Check for Consistency

Consistency is key to maintaining a professional and polished tone in your writing. Ensure that your language, formatting, and style choices remain consistent throughout your piece. Inconsistencies can distract the reader and diminish the overall impact of your work.

Eliminate Redundancies

Effective communication is concise and to the point. During the self-editing phase, be vigilant in identifying and eliminating redundancies. Repetitive phrases and unnecessary words can dilute your message and hinder clarity.

Verify Facts and Information

If your writing incorporates facts, figures, or data, double-check the accuracy of your information. Providing accurate and up-to-date information enhances your credibility as a writer. Cross-referencing your sources during the self-editing process ensures the reliability of your content.

Consider Your Audience

Keep your target audience in mind during the self-editing process. Ensure that your language, tone, and examples are tailored to resonate with your intended readership. This step is crucial for creating a connection with your audience and enhancing the overall impact of your writing.

Utilise Editing Tools

Take advantage of the various editing tools available to writers. Spell and grammar checkers, and style guides can serve as valuable companions during the self-editing journey. However, remember that these tools are aids, not substitutes, for your critical evaluation.

Seek Feedback

Engage with others to gain fresh perspectives on your writing. Peer reviews or feedback from mentors can offer valuable insights that you might have overlooked. Embrace constructive criticism and use it to refine your work further.

Be Ruthless with Revisions

Effective self-editing requires a degree of ruthlessness. Don’t be afraid to cut or rewrite sections that do not contribute to the overall strength of your piece. Trim excess words, tighten sentences, and ensure that every element serves a purpose.

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9 months ago
Barry's Photography, Tiffauges 1370 : Le Siège.
Barry's Photography, Tiffauges 1370 : Le Siège.

Barry's Photography, Tiffauges 1370 : Le siège.


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9 months ago
HADES + Thanzag (5/?) "Thought I Might Find You All The Way Out Here. Although, Quite Frankly, I'm Surprised
HADES + Thanzag (5/?) "Thought I Might Find You All The Way Out Here. Although, Quite Frankly, I'm Surprised
HADES + Thanzag (5/?) "Thought I Might Find You All The Way Out Here. Although, Quite Frankly, I'm Surprised
HADES + Thanzag (5/?) "Thought I Might Find You All The Way Out Here. Although, Quite Frankly, I'm Surprised

HADES + Thanzag (5/?) "Thought I might find you all the way out here. Although, quite frankly, I'm surprised you're still alive."


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10 months ago
“ In The End, We’ll All Become Stories, ”
“ In The End, We’ll All Become Stories, ”
“ In The End, We’ll All Become Stories, ”
“ In The End, We’ll All Become Stories, ”

“ in the end, we’ll all become stories, ”


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10 months ago
"Mirror" By Rita Dove

"Mirror" by Rita Dove


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11 months ago
Beach Day!

Beach day!

Here’s the speedpaint ^^

10 months ago

celebrating my 5 year top surgery anniversary today, so I wanted to draw something that reflects the bliss of feeling your chest for the first time. happy pride 🏳️‍⚧️⚧️💙🩷🤍

Celebrating My 5 Year Top Surgery Anniversary Today, So I Wanted To Draw Something That Reflects The

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2 years ago
Max Is Just Happy To Be There..

Max is just happy to be there..

1 year ago

I had ideas for an Au of the TROD AU or just regular AU that involves the amnesia trope that I'm spinning in my head so I'm gonna post it here for safe keeping.

First idea is permanent amneisa, second is if it was temporary

TWO WAYS:
Instead of Sacrificing their life to free The One Who Waits, something is given in equivalent either at the start of the final battle or the end of the final battle after the Lamb wins or loses, and they sacrifice themselves, but not their soul, but what MAKES their soul. In this case: all memory that makes them who they were. Instead of life force and devotion, it's memory. Narinder is a fully powered and/or shares power with a Lamb who has no idea who he is. They don't know they're a cult leader, they don't know Ratau or Finor or anyone. Their memory goes back to before they were decapitated: the events of the game are wiped from memory and unrecoverable
At this point Narinder could absolutley leave them be or kill them even as they're not a threat and are of no more 'use', but he's....torn up about it, actaully. Didn't think he would be. Now the God of Death newly resurrected has a confused, lone lamb he keeps at his side acting while he acts a guide and a friend, re-running them through the memory while the cult itself struggles to maintain as their leader is no longer fit to serve them, all while Narinder is still adjusting to being outside the afterlife. 
The Lamb has to guide him how to adjust to his new future while Narinder has to guide them navigating their past.
Temp amnesia, whether its by magic or by a hard hit on the head will work
Lamb getting amnesia: Memory is set to when they're in the middle of the original game and defeating the Bishops, VERY confused as to why there's not only Narinder in the cult, but his siblings as well, why they're all in mortal form and why the cat is acting very, very strangley towards them
Narinder getting amneisa: Memory goes back to the same point: before the final battle in the misdt of the og game. Very confused as to why he's In This Form, Why his powers are Split Like This, and Why the Lamb is very nervous interacting with him when just a few hours ago they were sleeping in the palm of his hand. 
First scenerio has Narinder nervous because all his hatred and anger he normally has does not make sense to the Lamb and he starts hesitating because they dont brush it off like normal, he gets softer, because they're geneuinly dont know whats going on
Second scenerio: Lamb remembers the final battle and the betrayal they both felt, and Narinder doesn't, he's just happy they're both there and so Lamb is very nervous about like 'im so used to him being so edgy and hissy with me, now he's coming up throwing an arm around my shoulders like its nothing and calling me pet names just like before. Will his hatred come back?'
Bonus scenerio for the last one:
Narinder's memory comes back, but he pretends it doesnt for a little while longer because he can be close to them again without the stinging pride of admitting he never stopped loving them when they betrayed each other

Hold these. I may or may not make a one shot or something

1 year ago
True Devotion

true devotion

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