Trying To Look Back And Add/fix Some Writing For The Coffee Because I've Gotten Better At Characterization.
Trying to look back and add/fix some writing for The Coffee because I've gotten better at characterization.
Probably gonna fix the first chapter since it comes off as preachy and I feel like Sylvia would be more worried about Wander leaving the "happy to be single" club over him screwing up a relationship; she KNOWS those two are obsessed with each other. Also gonna dial back on the whole "Wander being downtrodden" to make him worried about the cut contact instead.
Other stuff to note about the series since I'm probably not gonna go back and rewrite old episodes (at least for a while):
- Female Watchdogs have apparently always existed on the ship, so that whole equality segment is trashed
- Hater's backstory changed a bit; the ID number name he had isn't accurate anymore since NASA chimps were named before launch. I'm keeping the whole "remembering being a chimpanzee" thing but I'm going to make it so that it's a lot blurrier for him and he just can't remember/doesn't like his old name.
- Any attempt at a play on words like a "kerson/keyson" in the first chapter is something I hope people completely disregard because it sucks... Sorry!
- Similar apologies for any preachy bullshit, I've gotta get better at the whole "show don't tell" thing
- Any future installment after The Coffee will be posted all at once instead of chapter-by-chapter because I tried that again for this installment and it's been a disaster.
Thank you for being patient with me! I'll try to get writing out as soon as I can, I've just been dealing with some sudden family deaths/depression. I'll post again soon! ;)
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do you have a schedule for when your fics post
Not really, no. I tend to just post them whenever I finish them completely, the latest fic being an exception since I've been sitting on it for a while.
how close are u to finishing your next skeletondance fic chapter
Honestly? Been going through some major family issues rn so I shelved it for a bit.
I tend to only post my fics when I've completed them due to stuff like this, but I decided to post two chapters early when I probably shouldn't have.
I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out, but I do work on it in my down time. I might post a snippet later...
are you an alt account of someone? i swear i saw that username from a discord person i know
(also if u want ppl to not mark you as bot pls have a pfp or smth)
Good point. I go by GreenMeowstic most other places, so probably!
best friends or should i say gay lovers <3
fun day yesterday :3
Misc photos
rest in peace Jtsoon official livestream cause of death nuked by copyright
maybe in like half a year we’ll get the edited video lol
Also table :D
Finally had a (mostly) my own table again after 2 cons
thank you @kotikaleo for being the bestest helper and also thank you @excessive-moisture for travelling out here for this it was awesome meeting you again !!!
also thanking the ratatouille Remy cosplayer after me - I was first in the schedule and i was really nervous but they gave me some encouragement. We all need a hug from a big rat i think
https://www.tumblr.com/2194teddy/732636242795200512/my-giant-nomad-oc-based-on-wander-over-yonder
Do you like my WOY OC?
It's pretty cool! I'm not personally a huge fan of nomad OCs because Wander's species might be functionally extinct, but this sounds interesting.
I've seen all your previous messages, and I advise you not to ask multiple times in a row. I always get to messages eventually, so please don't spam me. Thank you!
some hc lore of mine i tried to break down into pause screen-like info excerpts. i started on the second slide but got more ambitious as i went along
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