What do you mean this wasn't them for most of Book 2?
You don’t need to say “She was losing.”
Show me the way her breath stutters, the way her vision blurs at the edges, how her arms feel like lead but she still lifts them anyway. Show me the taste of blood on her tongue, the sharp sting when she wipes it away.
A fight isn’t just fists and kicks, it’s instinct. It’s mistakes. It’s the split second where she moves left instead of right, and pain explodes across her ribs. It’s the way she grits her teeth, forces herself to stay standing, even when her legs threaten to buckle.
People don’t announce their next move. They don’t think in long sentences. It’s breathless. It’s now. It’s move or lose. Make your readers feel every hit, every heartbeat, every desperate second she fights to stay on her feet.
Dont know if this actually works still, haven’t tried it but ya know…if it does then you're welcome 😂
I would over explain but it’s normal now for me to say something out of context then go back to what I was doing.
Midoriya : i would take a bullet for you
Todoroki : please don't, taking a bullet would hurt me less than seeing you hurt
Kirishima : i would die for you
Bakugo : don't you fucking dare
Shinsou : i would sleep for you
Kaminari : *tears up* you would ?
Aizawa : i would smile for you
Yamada : MIRACLEEEE
Dabi : i would kill for you
Hawks : you would kill for fun
I did the trend thingy on instagram but for Erasercloud 🥲💪🏾
So this actually relates/parallels to my Dabi headcanon with the sandwiches being a comfort to him.
I imagine that Keigo likes chicken so much, despite being salty and everything, is because it’s something he was never allowed to have as a child. It’s a freedom he didn’t earn until adulthood.
While I don’t know how much chicken is in Japan, I’d imagine it can be expensive with inflation, compared to beans, crackers, water, and bread, which is most likely what Hawks had when living with his criminal father while he was in hiding, because it was easy, simple, and cheap, and money would be tight in hiding.
It could also be why he’s not the biggest fan of salty foods and prefers sweet and savoury food, because it’s something he didn’t have as a child, he never had that comfort.
He was forced to eat salty crackers and stale bread with a bit of bean because it was all he could afford.
So chicken to him was a luxury he never got until he was an adult; it made the bird part of him preen at the fact he was eating something that was natural as a hawk.
Chicken is a comfort to Keigo because it shows how he can make his own small choices, and it shows how he’s free from the shitty childhood he had, being able to eat things his father never would have allowed him to.
So, while sandwiches are a comfort to Dabi because they were the only stability he had when growing up, chicken is a comfort to Keigo because it shows how he’s relatively free from the hand he was given when he was younger, a stability that he’s more free than he was as a child.