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Sure has been a while, but he's back in my brain (tragic)
A little somethin to celebrate tonight's partial lunar eclipse
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**Update For the people asking I asked her and she bought the frog tea set HERE šø
They should never have ended the way they did, respectfully
Hatty Family Dyes
Originally, some of these were just color practice I'd do in between other projects. But then I made more of them, so now they're for my Hatty Family au I've decided.
Obviously I didn't make all of these, Obnoxious, Citrus, Cardboard, and a few other are already in A Hat in Time and others like Pumpkin Spice and Burger 2 are spins on preexisting dyes. But I had fun with all of these and I haven't posted anything in a while.
I'll be able to post more cool stuff soon I promise, but for now, I leave all with this.
@mmmmmmmmmmm-no YEESSS AND YOU'RE SO RIGHT OH MY GOODNESS!!!! :0
I feel confident enough to post these now. A collection of all the existing posters after some edits from the other post that got 13k notes! These are full size/quality. Go nuts.
You may use them for wallpapers, tabletop campaigns, whatever. Consider tipping me or buying a print or sticker on ko-fi here! If you do use them, let me know what for, or send pictures!
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have not touched Homestuck since 2016ā¦.
This entire rant has never left my skull since I first read it so many years ago nowā¦
GOD. FUCKING. DAMN IT.
Happy 4/13.
This super cute Yin and Yang is perfect for your favorite cat lover! ā¤ļø This makes a great couples gift or friendship necklace.
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I found a big difference between Tumblr and Reddit.
Here, your silly statements and little slipups are responding to with āyeah same,ā a completely unhinged reply, or maybe some healthy advice.
On Reddit, you get helpful answers and a guy saying ātake a critical thinking class in college.ā Yeah, sure. And Iāll also find a way to compensate for autism, ADHD, anxiety, and depression. One class will not fix the fact that I cannot read social cues over text without tone indicators and other in-text cues. Yes, I want to believe that someone wants to give me 40 grand. I also almost got scammed over an iPad and did get scammed over a ball of yarn all because of one thing.
Most people donāt look up every detail. Stuff isnāt as obvious as the porn bots here. My USPS scam got caught by a post office employee and got caught by me after I scrolled through the fake website they used to try and buy $100 of fried chicken. Critical thinking canāt always save you.
Sometimes you just have to go off pure vibes and hope for the best.
And so, if that idiot on Reddit sees this, Iād like you to know that I did not click that link or call the number because I wanted to check. I was suspicious of it. If I wasnāt, I wouldnāt have asked. So donāt shame people for asking for help. Especially if the person asking is disabled or otherwise unable to figure it all out (sheltered kids, the elderly, etc).
TL; DR Dear everyone, stop shaming or insulting people for asking for help.
I found a big difference between Tumblr and Reddit.
Here, your silly statements and little slipups are responding to with āyeah same,ā a completely unhinged reply, or maybe some healthy advice.
On Reddit, you get helpful answers and a guy saying ātake a critical thinking class in college.ā Yeah, sure. And Iāll also find a way to compensate for autism, ADHD, anxiety, and depression. One class will not fix the fact that I cannot read social cues over text without tone indicators and other in-text cues. Yes, I want to believe that someone wants to give me 40 grand. I also almost got scammed over an iPad and did get scammed over a ball of yarn all because of one thing.
Most people donāt look up every detail. Stuff isnāt as obvious as the porn bots here. My USPS scam got caught by a post office employee and got caught by me after I scrolled through the fake website they used to try and buy $100 of fried chicken. Critical thinking canāt always save you.
Sometimes you just have to go off pure vibes and hope for the best.
And so, if that idiot on Reddit sees this, Iād like you to know that I did not click that link or call the number because I wanted to check. I was suspicious of it. If I wasnāt, I wouldnāt have asked. So donāt shame people for asking for help. Especially if the person asking is disabled or otherwise unable to figure it all out (sheltered kids, the elderly, etc).
TL; DR Dear everyone, stop shaming or insulting people for asking for help.
EVERYONE
My orchestra teacher is rickrolling us
Never thought it would happen
It's UP! Welcome Home--the whole first year recap, with the latest update, so newcomers and old neighbors alike can get on in!
A lot of my advice comes down to, having beta readers, and āitās up to youā which doesnāt sound like good advice but when it comes to writing, everyone writes differently so there are different ways of doing the same thing. So, whatās my advice when I talk about chapters?
To me, a chapter is a section of the book which talks about a certain event. Thereās no right or wrong way for how long the event should be, and thereās no right or wrong way of how the event can start or end. Hereās how I write my chapters and what Iāve learned along the way.
Before I start the chapter, I need to figure out what the main event is gonna be. Will this event be informational? Action pact? Suspenseful? It can also be a combination of a few events as well, such as having my characters find information, but something goes wrong and now they have to escape.
After I figure out what the main event is gonna be, I start writing and once I complete that event I end it and move on. I try not to carry on too much after the main event has finished because I feel like my chapters might drag if I do.
When it comes to a chapter, I try to have a beginning, middle, and end section. (Keep in mind this doesnāt work for every chapter.) Let me explain what I meant about those sections. The event in this example is Nix and Dante are tryna get information, but something goes wrong after they get said information. So the chapter starts at the beginning where Nix and Dante enter a secured location. The middle is where they get passed all of the alarms and hacked into the network. The ending is they got the information but an alarm gets triggered anyway.
So, I wrote the beginning, middle, and end, the event is done, but it was kind of boring. Letās expand it to them escaping. This is where I think chapters start to become long. Some people combine two events into one chapter and some events are longer than others. Escaping a secured facility sounds more difficult than sneaking in. So, adding an escape attempt can spice up the chapter, but you need to be careful with how you do it.
I think when people complain about long chapters, one of their reasoning is āThis feels like it couldāve been split into two chaptersā. It might be the fact there are two separate events, both with their beginning, middle, and ends. If you want to expand upon your chapter, I would change how the beginning, middle, and end originally played out so it feels more natural when you go from one event to the next. This will take practice and beta readers can help if a chapter sounds too long or just right.
So instead of sneaking into a place, getting the information and having to escape. I would get rid of the middle part where Nix and Dante were sneaking and just show them entering the building, maybe talk for a few paragraphs before they reach their end goal because I already know escaping is gonna add several more pages. Itās a trial and error, and some readers might prefer the sneaking portion, while others might enjoy the fast pace. The end result is what do you like?
What about chapters that donāt need a beginning, middle and end? Those chapters are what I call, continuing chapters. The most obvious examples of continuing chapters are the final climax of a story, like a big battle. The big battle might take multiple chapters to get through, and starting at the beginning, middle, and end of each chapter where the main event is the final fight, might get a bit tiresome. A simplified way of taking a large event, like a big fight, and breaking it over several continuing chapters is having each chapter be its own thing. Letās say it takes three chapters to finish the final confrontation. The first chapter is the beginning, so thereās lots of build-up, but nothing too bad. The second chapter is the middle and is normally the longest out of the three. Itās the one with the most fighting and maybe a character dies at the end as a cliffhanger. The third chapter is where the villain is defeated and the fight is over thrust concluding the three sections.
That was a very simplified way of explaining continuing chapters, but yeah, not every event can be told in a single chapter, sometimes you have to space them out a bit. I would recommend letting the readers know that said event will most likely take a long time to complete so they'll be aware it's gonna be a long read.
People often ask, how long should a chapter be, and thereās no real answer to that. Some can be a page, and Iāve seen others that are thirty. (Looking at you DragonFire). I personally donāt try to go for a word count or page limit. Often times when I try to make my chapters reach a certain goal, I find thereās a lot of filler that couldāve been cut. This is why I like to write my chapters as if I were writing an event and just focus on the event itself. If I need to expand or get rid of something, I can do that later.
My chapters are normally three pages in length, whenever I go over that, I try to tell my readers the next upcoming chapters will be long. This kind of tactic will depend on your story of course, but letās go back to Nix and Dante.
In the example, Nix and Dante went into a secured location, took some information and got caught, now they needed to escape. If I want to add the escape portion in the same chapter because breaking in was kind of short, I might tell the reader before said chapter even began that āThis mission won't be an easy oneā, or āYouāll need to be real careful stealing the information because if you get caught, guards will come.ā So, by the time Nix and Dante do get caught, the reader should be aware, the chapter will continue for a few more pages.
Oh yeah, if youāre gonna write a long chapter, make sure to have at least one smaller chapter to break it up. (DragonFire) Having long chapters, after long chapters, is, at least for me, very tiring. I donāt like to stop reading midway through a chapter, but reading thirty pages in a day is very difficult. So if you know you have some long chapters, throw in a few short ones.
Readers might also hate long chapters because they feel like thereās a bit too much filler in them. (Filler-in chapters arenāt the same thing as filler chapters).
Filler-in chapters might appear in one of two ways, either thereās too much filler to get to the main event, or thereās too much filler and the chapter shouldāve ended already. Beta readers are a good way of telling you if thereās filler in a chapter or not. Keep in mind, that you, as the writer know whatās best for your story. Readers can only tell you how they feel. If you feel the āfillerā part isnāt filler, but a lot of people say it is. Finding a workaround can be difficult. Unfortunately, I donāt have any advice on this kind of topic because this kind of writing problem is unique for every writer. Writing groups might be able to help as theyāll have your text and can help figure out what's going on.
Thereās nothing wrong with filler chapters. Not every chapter needs to focus on the main story. I personally like filler chapters. Theyāre fun chapters which explore the characters and the world. A bit of a refresher after an intense fight is fine. When people complain about filler chapters, itās often because thereās a bit too much of them. Or they came out of nowhere and killed the pacing. For example, if everything has been dark and gritty, having a chapter thatās more on the upbeat side is strange. Also if the chapter ends with a character's death and the next one ignores it, readers might not like that. This is one of the reasons why I donāt like POV swapping between every chapter. If someone dies in character (A) POV, and the next chapter switches to character (B) POV where theyāre on the beachā¦I might get a bit annoyed. Even if Character (B) POV isnāt filler, I just witnessed someone die, I wanna know whatās going on and not swap to another POV.
Also filler chapters tend to be on the shorter side as well. If a filler chapter goes on a bit too long, then it might feel like the story is losing its focus a bit.
Beta readers can help point out which chapters are filler and where to add in filler if that's something you want to do.
Ending a chapter is always interesting, do you want to end it with a cliffhanger or not? Does your chapter flow smoothly from one to the other? I donāt mind cliffhanger endings but try not to make every chapter a cliffhanger. At some point it becomes a bit much for some readers such as myself, I prefer to stop reading at a good stopping point. Cliffhangers arenāt a stopping point, I need to see whatās gonna happen next. Creating a cliffhanger after a long chapter, for me is a bit much. Long chapters already drain me, and forcing me to continue to get to an actual stopping point will make me enjoy your book less. (I understand no one is forcing me to read a book, but I just really, really hate stopping at cliffhangers). Not to mention if there are multiple cliffhangers in a row, I might put the book down and not pick it up for a long time because Iāll have no idea how many cliffhangers Iāll have to deal with before getting to an actual pause in the story. Personally, as a reader, I feel like there needs to be good stopping points. Places where itās safe to stop reading and the reader can pick it back up later.
If you end a chapter in a city and the next one starts in a jungle, that kind of scene change might be a bit confusing so again, just send it through a couple of beta readers and see how you did with the transition portion of going from one chapter to the next. The same thing goes for tone as well. If the last chapter ends with a death, and the next one is in a circus, the tone shift might be a bit much. Just pass it along with a beta reader.
Thatās about it for chapters. If you want some more detailed advice on certain chapters then let me know, but chapters are one of those things where it comes with practice. The length, the event, the ending, all of this stuff will be determined by your ability to write. Beta readers are a great way of pointing out how they felt while reading a chapter and you can go from there.
happy easter day fuckers
My favorite scene from Clown's recent Makeship commercial
[ID: A digital artwork of Wally Darling and Barnaby B. Beagle standing in the vacuum of space, surrounded by floating debris and three colorful planetary bodies. The black background depicts countless tiny stars that are all arrayed in different colors. Wally conveys an inquisitive expression with his finger pointed towards his mouth. The speech bubble above him reads, "How did we get up here, Barnaby?". In response, Barnaby is seen shrugging his shoulders with his usual smiley expression. The speech bubble above him reads, "Beats me, kid!" as if in a whimsically aloof manner.]
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I canāt imagine how happy Dogday was when he learned the rest of the Smiling Critters were still alive! Their reunion must have been heartwarming and tearfulā¦though it must have been a bit awkward when Catnap showed up!
Some spoilers bc I REALLYYYYY want to write this scene, but! Catnap received a message from Prototype first and rushed to Angel, saying that more toys were found. Angel thanks him and rushes back to Playtime Co. as the cops call them to tell them about the situation.
When they arrive, Poppy on their side, it's when they see Craftycorn, wrapped in a blanket, trembling.
Angel drops their phone to the ground. Poppy's eyes are wide open as they see Hoppy being carried over to an ambulance. Angel grabs their faithful Nokia phone and immediately calls back home. Mommy picks up the phone, only to hear Angel say "the other Smiling Critters are alive".
Long Legs' eyes are also wide open in surprise when she gives Dogday the phone. He then stares at Catnap before telling him their friends are all alive.
Angel grabs Dogday's wheelchair and fits him in the van they rented - Catnap didn't have the courage to come with them - before driving to the hospital. When Dogday sees Crafty, the first one to recover, they're both sobbing. They hug each other, Dogday asks her just how this happened, she says that she tried her best. Dogday is there to calm Hoppy down when she wakes up, to hug Picky when she sobs upon finding him, ready to help Bobby clean her tears, cracking a joke when Kickin wakes up and asks if he died and this is heaven, and there to give Bubba the hug he needs. Everyone is so happy to find each other still alive, and then Dogday and Angel break the news that most of the other toys are still alive, including Catnap.
Reactions are Mixed. "He's doing better now", Dogday promises. "He's doing so much better, actually. He wants to make up for everything". Hoppy doesn't believe him at all, and the others are wary. They come back to Angel's home one by one, and each encounter makes Catnap more and more aware of their own increasing guilt. He gives every single critter a small gift, or at least tries to make them feel as comfortable as possible. He doesn't talk much to anyone until two weeks after, when he helps Picky move around a bit.
There is a moment in which Catnap does cry from seeing his friends doing well, and I think he cries a lot when Crafty hugs him and tells him she forgives him and MEANS it. The others come with time, but everyone eventually goes back to being a big and silly group of friends.
Drawing a Hat Kid every day until a Hat in Time 2 releases: day 193
Drawing a Hat Kid every day until a Hat in Time 2 releases: day 173
today in 1976, 6 unarmed palestinians were killed and over 100 others were injured by israeli forces during protests against the theft of their home.
today, even after 75 years of israeli occupation, they are still here. they are continuing to fight for their land, their history, their freedom.
today, we recognize the people of palestine and remind ourselves that we are still fighting and standing for palestine and we will not stop until a permanent ceasefire.
Wally Darling has a little message for us...
I turned @bit-b into a Magolor
This was a lil test shot I made of the critters before moving on to creating the cartoon.
Welp, time for me to go cry!!! :D
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I freaking love Moonjumper.