Reblog If You’ve Read Fanfictions That Are More Professional, Better Written Than Some Actual Novels.

reblog if you’ve read fanfictions that are more professional, better written than some actual novels. I’m trying to see something

Sally Face x!GNreader

Pls don’t bully me yall this is my first fanfic😭😭😭

Starring: (Y/N), Sally Face, and a literal demon

Ship: platonic Sal xReader (it could be taken as something romantic though cause nothing really happens in that aspect)

Description: Reader meets the red eyed demon on the first night at the apartments and has to save Sally before it gets the both of them.

As we finally arrive to our new home, I feel a chill run down my spine. “Our new apartment looks…interesting” I say to my parents as I grab my bags. “Oh don’t be so negative all the time! This will be great” my mom says trying to make me feel better. I appreciate the gesture, but I still can’t shake off the uneasy feeling inside of me. I sigh and step out of the car and quickly open my umbrella. “What do you need me to carry upstairs?” I ask my parents.

*Time Skip*

I am FINALLY done with carrying all the boxes over to our apartment, and god could it have taken longer! It’s almost night by the time I bring all the boxes to our house, and we haven’t even started unpacking and decorating! As I’m looking around my empty room I hear one of my parents come up behind me, “Thank you for helping with the boxes today.” They say “Why don’t you meet some of our neighbours? Or maybe you can just explore the building?” They continue. Exploring the building doesn’t seem too bad.

I slide on my shoes and walk out the door. I immediately go to the elevator and press the button. As I’m waiting I look around at my surroundings. I am stood in a long narrow hallway. The walls are covered in striped wallpaper and light wood panels, the doors are a sickly neon green colour, and the floors are a cream colour.

I finally break out of my trance when the elevator doors open up. I step inside and press the top floor button. Once I reach the top floor the elevator doors open and I am immediately stunned over how dirty it is. This has got to be a health hazard! Aside from the dirt and broken panels, the hallway looks the same as mine on the fourth floor.

As I’m walking down the hallway I hear a quiet creaking sound from behind me, seconds after I get a splitting head ache and feel unwell. I walk back to the elevator and starts to go back down to level four.

when I reach my floor I see some kid, around my age, coming out of their apartment. They are wearing a white and pink prosthetic mask on their face and have bright blue pigtails. They notice me standing there and wave meekly before putting their hands in their pockets. Time starts to feel like it’s slowing down.

I start to hear that creaking noise again, but I ignore it for now. Before I can wave back I see a shadow start to move behind my neighbour. The pitch black shadow grows bigger and bigger, but the person doesn’t seem to notice what’s going on. As I let out a shrill scream the shadow opens its bright red eyes.

My neighbour hears my scream and looks down sadly, almost like this has happened before. Though, I don’t notice the sad aura now coming from the person in front of me. It’s because the shadow raises its arm and inches towards my neighbour.

I instantly start to run towards my neighbour, they lookup and take a step back as they watch me sprint closer towards them. They scream as I grab their hand and pull them along as we run to the elevator doors.

I start feverishly pressing the button trying to get the elevator doors to open. My neighbour looks behind us and sees the shadow slowly coming closer to us. They scream again and start pressing the button with me. After what seems like forever the elevator doors finally open and we run inside.

we press the ground floor button over and over again trying to get the elevator doors to close faster. We look up and see the shadow moving faster towards us and my hands start to shake. The doors finally start to close and the shadow starts moves even quicker. My neighbour and I both let out a loud scream and back up into the corner of the elevator. We sink to the floor cowering in fear. Just as the shadows arm is about to reach us the doors close and the elevator starts to move down.

All you could hear is the sound of us catching our breaths with slow elevator music playing int the background. I look to my right and see my neighbour looking at me too. We both stand up from the elevator floor and let go of each other. “Uhh hi, I’m (y/n)…what’s your name?” I ask awkwardly with a shaky voice. “I’m Sal, but you can call me Sally face.” They respond with an equally shaky voice. We start at each other for a second before I speak up again. “Does.. this happen often at this building?” I question. They take a moment before answering, seemingly to think about question. “Kind of” Sally reply’s.

The elevator comes to a stop and we both get out. “What do we do now?” I ask “there’s a shadow demon in front of our apartments.” I say bluntly, “if you want you can come with me to the basement. That’s where I was going in the first place. My friend lives down there and would probably be interested in hearing the story from both of us” Sal suggests. “Sure” I say as we get back onto the elevator.

That’s it.. I hope it’s alright cause as I said at the beginning this is my first fanfic

I hope y’all liked it