I know it's hard sometimes. When the story is just awful, it's not original and you cringe the whole time while reading.
But then you realize something: the person had fun writing it. They wrote it with passion and they were confident.
They're propably just a child. They downloaded Wattpad or something to share their first stories.
They were so excited to share these stories. They were hoping someone would like it.
So you have two options.
1. You write them a hate comment that makes them cry and lose their motivation = they won't want to write anymore.
2. You write them a comment where you try to explain to them the things they've done wrong, but you also try to find the things you like about it and mention them. Try to give advice and be positive, end the message with a heart emoji and say that you're here to support them.
Because they will write more. And the stories will get better and better.
I believe in these people.
Please believe in them too.
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Get to know me asksâ¨
So introverts who never talk to their mutuals can get to know each other lol
1. What were your summers like as a kid?
2. Do you enjoy thrilling rides like rollercoasters?
3. Who was your childhood hero?
4. What is your favorite book?
5. What do you find most attractive about your crush?
6. Whatâs your favorite outfit?
7. Does seeing people in love make you happy? Sad? Annoyed?
8. Do you sleep with a stuffed animal?
9. What CD did you play to death as a kid?
10. Hike to a mountain top to watch the sunrise or drive out of town to stargaze?
11. What song has the most relatable song lyrics to you?
12. Iced drinks or hot drinks?
13. Bright colors or neutral tones?
14. Breakfast for dinner or pizza for breakfast?
15. Do you have a green thumb or a black thumb?
16. Whatâs your favorite feature of yours?
17. Would you rather be a lawyer or a doctor?
18. What type do you tend to go for physically?
19. Power of invisibility or flight?
20. Would you rather wake up with your makeup magically done or your hair?
21. Whatâs the stupidest fight youâve ever gotten into?
22. Whatâs the weirdest thing youâve seen someone do in public?
23. Whatâs your dream date?
24. Do you tend to gravitate more toward using logic or intuition to make decisions?
25. Do you like parties?
26. Did you enjoy high school?
27. Who is the craziest person in your family and why?
28. Whatâs your favorite holiday tradition?
29. Can you describe your laugh?
30. Instagram or Twitter?
31. Whatâs a show that everyone loves that you didnât?
32. What song is stuck in your head?
33. Do you like exercising?
34. Do you scare easily?
35. Who are your top 5 celebrity crushes?
36. If you could learn one language fluently what would it be?
37. Would you fly to the moon if given the opportunity?
38. Whatâs your favorite flower?
39. What non-sexual touch affects you the most?
40. Do you enjoy cuddling?
41. Do you like valentineâs day?
42. Do you enjoy driving and are you a good driver?
43. What would you be most likely to become famous for?
44. Do you have a favorite quote?
45. Are you a romantic?
46. Do you have any tattoos or want to get one?
47. Biggest pet peeve?
48. Favorite personality trait about yourself?
49. Sum up your type in three words.
50. Do you listen to Kpop and if so who is your bias and why?
51. Whatâs the longest youâve ever stayed awake?
52. Hot or cold weather?
53. Bouquet of flowers or box of chocolates?
54. Can you do any good impressions?
55. Whatâs the best prank youâve been witness to?
56. Favorite dessert?
57. Is there a vine or tik tok you quote often?
58. What tumblr post always makes you laugh?
59. What country that you havenât been to do you want to visit most?
60. Can you cook and do you enjoy it?
61. Whatâs your guilty pleasure movie?
62. Whatâs your comfort movie?
63. Is there a genre of music you donât like?
64. Whatâs an album that you think has no skips on it?
65. Whatâs your favorite thing to watch on youtube?
66. Would you make the first move to ask someone out?
67. Do you often dream or have nightmares that you remember when you wake up?
68. What are you craving right now?
69. What turns you on?
70. Whatâs something you havenât done that you think most people have?
71. What genre is your favorite playlist right now and whatâs it called?
72. Are you a sad or happy drunk? Chill or energetic drunk?
73. What time of day do you like best?
74. Do you tend to enjoy being babied or do you prefer to be the one taking care of someone else?
75. What top three cities do you want to travel to?
76. Whatâs your favorite feature about your best friend?
77. Do you have any pets? What are their names?
78. ďżźBack scratches or having your hair played with?
79. Do you like surprises?
80. Whatâs your favorite picture of yourself?
81. What books influenced you most as a child?
82. Do you like kids?
83. Whatâs your favorite piece of jewelry? (or other accessory if you donât wear any)
84. Any wild stories passed around in your family?
85. Do you consider yourself an independent person?
86. What are you most comfortable sleeping in?
87. ďżźďżźWhat was your childhood dream?
88. Whatâs your fictional OTP?
89. Whatâs one thing you want to achieve this year?
90. What has been your favorite book youâve read in the last 5 years?
91. What was the first movie to make you cry?
92. What book world would you live in if given the opportunity?
93. Whatâs your craziest work related story?
94. Whatâs the best job youâve had so far?
95. Worst tinder or date experience?
96. Whatâs the first thing you think of when you wake up most mornings?
97. Are you more of a planner or a spontaneous adventurer?
98. Do you think you see yourself the way other people see you?
99. Whatâs the last show you binged?
100. Whatâs one of your fondest memories?
Definitely reach out again! If they said they'd be in touch and they weren't be persistent! You deserve an answer at least from them!đ¤
Advice needed (if anyone sees this - if no one sees it, I never wrote it haha):
Should I, or should I not, try emailing the one casting director I know again?
For context, this person gave me a chance and sent me an audition a year ago. I didn't get the part, but they said they still liked the tape and would send me other stuff, but then I never heard back. So I chased them up around July 2021 just to check in and see if there was anything suitable for me that had come up, and didn't hear back again.
I mean, in all likelihood they're probably very busy, or I'm just not what they're looking for, or they've forgotten who I am because they'll have loads of people contacting them every day, but what's the harm in sending another polite email?
I honestly don't know how this 'put yourself out there/be persistent' etiquette thing works and I never have đ Don't wanna harangue someone, but it's hardly haranguing if I last emailed them in July, right?
Summary: you and John take a trip for your anniversary and John has a very special question to ask
Pairing: John Price x gf!reader
Words:~ 2.0k
Warnings: fluff, tiny bit of angst(?), smut, p in v sex, unprotected sex(wrap it before you tap it folks :3), MDNI!!
A/N: so this has been sitting in my drafts for months and I finally finished it! Probably the longest fic Iâve written and Iâm not sure how I feel about it(I feel like Iâm better at writing fluff pieces rather than spicy ones maybe?)but let me know what yall think! Iâm working on another Price fic and a Soap fic so stay tuned! :)
A/N: As always likes, reblogs, comments, and feedback of all types are welcome and my inbox is always open! Hope you guys enjoy!!
***beware of typos lol
Your mind wandered as you zipped your suitcase shut. John announced you were taking a trip for your anniversary and refused to tell you where. "You'll find out when we get there love," he said with a laugh after you pestered him to tell you. You walked downstairs and set your suitcase by the front door.
Through no fault of his own John wasn't always around for your anniversary. He always tried his best to to have his leave coincide but it didn't always happen. Usually you just had a nice dinner at home or John would surprise you with flowers; both of which you enjoyed. Needless to say you were shocked but excited when John told you he had a few weeks leave and had something big planned.
"Hey hon, remember to pack your toothbrush this time," you said, doublechecking to make sure you had everything. "You forget it every time," you mused. "I'm not going to forget my toothbrush dove. And I don't forget it every time," Price argued; he checked his suitcase and realized he forgot. He went to the bathroom and grabbed his toothbrush to pack it away without telling you.
"Are you ready love?" Price asked. "I want to get going," You noticed your boyfriend seemed to be acting weird. He was very fidgety and it wasn't like him at all.
"You okay?" You asked. "You seem anxious to get going,"
"Yeah I'm fine love I just want to get there before dark," Price replied, taking the luggage outside. He loaded the suitcases into the back of the car and slipped his hand in his pocket. His fingers brushed against the velvet box resting in his pocket. "Well if we want to get there before dark we should get going," you called out and shut the door behind you, locking up the house.
You noticed the scenery started to change from hilly landscapes to dense woods. You started to get excited about what was at the end of your little road trip. The car turned on to a cobblestone stone driveway that led to a beautiful cabin overlooking a private lake surrounded by trees. "Oh John this is beautiful!" You said, looking out the window. "How did you know about this?" You asked. "An old mate of mine offered to let us use it for the week," he smiled watching you try and take it all in.
"This whole place is for us?" You asked, wondering if you could possibly see everything in just a few days. Price squeezed your thigh. "Just us," he said, parking the car. "Here love," Price stated. He fished in his pocket pulling out a set of keys. "Here's the keys to the cabin. Why don't you go take a look around, while I unload the car" he suggested.
You smiled and took the keys from him walking up to the front steps. You unlocked the front door and stepped inside. The living room was decorated in a way you would expect a cabin to be decorated. A large sofa facing a tv mounted on the wall, a large red rug in the middle of the floor, an end table with a lamp beside the couch, a tv stand, large fireplace, and a chandelier made from antlers adorned the living room. There was also a full kitchen to your right when you walked in.
You made your way to the stairs and found the master bedroom. A king size bed was the centerpiece of the room with a wool blanket draped over the end. The curtains were drawn and a soft light emanatedďżź from a lamp sitting on a bedside table.
Your footsteps were hushed by the soft carpet as you walked to the bathroom. The master bathroom was beautifully decorated in finished wood and white accents with a big claw foot tub; definitely big enough for both you and John. A window that faced the lake and woods let in a nice breeze and you couldn't help smiling, the fact it was yours for a few days finally setting in.
You came down the stairs just as John set down the last of your luggage. "So? What do you think?" Price asked, smiling as you wrapped your arms around him. "It's perfect John!â you smiled. "It's so beautiful," you planted a kiss on his lips.
Over the next few days the ring Price carried around burned a hole in his pocket. He tried finding the right time to ask you but everytime he tried he got nervous. He was the Captain of the most elite special forces team in the world and he couldn't even ask you to marry him. He sat at the edge of the dock, his fishing pole in his hands. He looked at the water waiting for a fish to bite and thinking about how much he wanted to spend the rest of his life with you. If only I could just ask her. With a frustrated sigh, he got up to stretch his legs still holding the fishing pole.
These few days seemed like a dream to you. Getting to spend this time with John was something you didn't always get to have. You noticed your boyfriend's behavior was somewhat off. He was anxious and fidgety when he's normally the calm and self-assured one in the relationship. You saw him sitting at the dock fishing and you smiled to yourself. His behavior may have changed but him fishing certainly hadn't.
You opened the front door and started walking down the cobblestone path the sweet air warming your skin. You saw little firefly's glowing in the garden flying around. "Have you caught anything yet?" You asked, siting down in a lawn chair with him standing holding his fishing pole. John glanced over and saw you wearing one of his army green t shirts and a pair of sleep shorts; he felt his heart skip a beat and his cock swell embarassingly hard despite the spirited romp in the sheets a mere few hours prior. For some strange reason, it made his thoughts drift back to the little box still tucked away in his pocket; he carried it with him everywhere since they got here. He still couldnât believe he had trouble asking you a simple four-worded question. It was almost laughable that something so simple had the Captain racked with anxiety. The man who was feared just as much as he was respected in the field. What if you said no? What if you didnât actually love him and this was the push you needed to leave him? He grimaced as his thoughts got more and more out of control.
âNo I think I missed most of them,â he muttered and turned his attention back to the water. You furrowed your eyebrows; something was up with your boyfriend. Not much fazed the 6â2â Brit so to see him so lost in thought worried you. You got to your feet and wrapped your arms around your lover; your hands dipped underneath the shirt he was wearing and felt the dusting of wiry chest hair. You ran your fingers down the strong expanse of his chest and abdomen following the happy trail that disappears into his waistband. âWhatâs wrong hon?â You asked. âNothing is wrong Iâm fine love,â He grumbled. âYouâve been acting strange for the past few days and that isnât like you,â You persisted. "I want to know whatâs bothering you. You know you can tell me anything right?â You reassured him. John shifted his attention from the still water to you and tried to think of what to say.
âDo youâŚstill love me?â He asked with uncertainty. âWould I have let you put me in those positions if I didnât?â You teased, referencing the previous bedroom escapades. Seeing his face didnât change, you realized he was serious. âOf course I do. Why would you think I donât?â You asked. âWellâŚsometimes I canât help but think youâll wake up one day and come to your senses and leave me for someone who actually deserves you,â He sighed. It felt foreign to him to talk about his feelings but you made him feel safe enough that he could. You always brought out the best of him and it was one of the many reasons he wanted to marry you. âJohn Price, I am never going to leave you,â You told him, placing your hands on his muttonchops, framing his face. You hated it when he talked so badly about himself. âI love you so much and you deserve everything,â You said, gazing up at him. âEven if I am a grumpy old man?â He asked. âYes even though youâre a grumpy old man,â you teased. âHey! Easy now,â He said in mock annoyance. You placed your lips on his, capturing him in a heated kiss. You felt him kiss you back and the tension from his shoulders melted away. He groaned and pressed your bodies together, reaching down to grab a handful of your ass. He chuckled quietly when you whined as he pulled away. âIn that case, thereâs something I need to ask you,â He slipped his hand into his pocket while dropping down onto one knee. Itâs now or never Price. He told himself. Your eyes went wide and filled with tears as you realized what was happening. âY/N, will you marry me?â He asked, hoping, no silently begging, for you to say yes. âYes! Yes Iâll marry you John Price,â you cried.
******
âFUCK!â You screamed. The headboard practically hit the wall with each harsh thrust from John. The room was filled with obscene yet erotic sound of panting and skin slapping against skin. âFuck youâre taking me so well love,â John panted out, taking a glance down to where your cunt practically swallowed his cock. The sight drove him mad and he let out sounds he didnât know he had in him. Those sounds he was making, the breathy groans and whimpers almost made you come then and there. âFuck John!â You panted, feeling yourself get closer with every snap of Johnâs hips that hit perfectly inside you. John could feel you squeezing him like a vice and he knew you were close to coming. He grabbed the head board and pushed your legs to your chest to better plow into you and get as deep as he could into your pulsing cunt. âThatâs it love,â He breathed out, his pace unrelenting. âCome for me love, come for me,â. Johnâs voice sounded strained as he focused on making you come before he did. You keened as you felt yourself go over the edge, coming on Johnâs cock. You squeezed him so tightly he swore he saw stars and came deep inside you, thick ropes of white staining the inside of your cunt. John rested his forehead against yours, strands of his hair sticking to the sweaty skin. You felt the sheer sheen of perspiration that had covered your own body begin to dry and cool off the longer the two of you stayed in each otherâs embrace. "You okay love?â He asked, still out of breath as you both waited for your heart rates to slow. âMore than okay,â you smiled lazily. Price gingerly pulled out his softened cock and walked to the bathroom, you admiring his bare ass as he walked away. John used a warm wash cloth to gently clean you up before grabbing a celebratory cigar and lighting it. You watched and admired his naked body as he poured himself a glass of scotch from the decanter sitting on the small table in the room before sliding back into bed with you.
You and John lay slightly tangled in the sheets with your head resting on his chest and his arm around you, relishing in that wonderful, hazy post sex daze. You couldnât help but stare at the ring on your finger and smile; John was your fiancĂŠe and you could hardly believe it. âCareful now or Iâll think you love the ring more than me,â Johnâs deep baritone voice reverberating in his chest. âWell the ring is pretty great. And all I have is an old man,â you teased, looking up at him knowing he just proved himself to be anything but an old man. Your remark earned you a playful pinch on your ass. You squealed and laughed, swatting his chest playfully.
âDonât worry Mr. Price I only have eyes for you my love,â You said, planting a kiss on his lips. "I love you,"
âI love you too soon-to-be Mrs. Price,â
When I find that you have I will block you with the quickness.Â
Summary: soap helps you with your skincare
Warnings: none just fluff :)
Pairing: John "soap" mactavish x gf!reader
Word Count-~1k
A/n: this is my first time writing for Soap Mactavish(actually any of the 141) so it may be pretty rough. This story was inspired by the lovely 𫧠anon on @uselsshuman blog! My requests are open for any of the 141 characters so please send in any requests you want! As always beware of typos but I hope you all enjoy!âŁď¸
You were almost religious with your skincare. You took pride in taking care of your skin and it was something you loved doing in the morning. You loved the routine of layering your skin in different serums and creams and watching them work their magic. Whenever Johnny was home, he loved watching you from the bathroom doorway or sitting on the toilet seat. Because of his job you two didnât get to share many domestic or intimate moments like this so Soap took what he could get. Soap always pestered you to let him do it for you and you always said no.
âCome on hen I could it!â Was something you always heard when he was home and you smiled but said no.
You were staring at yourself in the mirror getting ready to wash your face when Soap woke up; he had always been a heavy sleeper, something that was a blessing when he was a teenager but something that could get him killed in his line of work. Whenever he was home you did your best not to disturb him because you knew he didn't get much sleep when he was gone. Soap felt for your warm body and when he was met with cold sheets he took a look around to see the bathroom light on. The clock on his bedside table read â10:30â. He stretched and rolled out of bed to find you.
âMorninâ Bonnie,â he said, walking over to your shared bathroom, rubbing the sleep from his eyes, his thick accent thicker with sleep. âMorning babe,â you smiled, grabbing your face wash and a towel. His eyes lit up whe he saw your face wash and bottles of serums lined up on the counter. You saw him eyeing your bottles and shook your head, a smile already forming on your face. âNo Johnny no!â You said, knowing exactly what he was going to ask. âOh please Bonnie!â He whined, wrapping his arms around your waist, resting his head on your shoulder.
You only wore a tank top so his stubble scratched your bare shoulder. âJohnny you donât even know how to do it!â You laughed, making eye contact through the mirror. âYes I do, I watch you all the time,â He replied, kissing and sucking on the sweet spot on your neck trying to get you to fold. âJohnny no st-â you started before he reached down to squeeze your ass. âOkay alright,â You laughed. âYou wonât regret this bonnie,â he said, planting a kiss on your cheek with a smile too big for his face. âI think I already am,â You mumbled.
âOkay first thing is washing your face hen everyone knows that,â He said, turning on the hot water. âOf course,â You said, watching him reach in front of you to turn on the hot water. Soap squirted some face wash and his hands and worked it into a lather before rubbing it onto your face. You winced at how rough he rubbed the soap into your skin but didnât say anything. You also didnât say anything when he got soap in your eye and tried your best not to wince at the sting. âOkay time to rinse,â he said and you leaned forward rinsing off the soap, the stinging sensation finally going away.
He grabbed a towel and rubbed your face dry before picking up you up by the waist and setting you on the counter. He stepped in between your legs and you had to widen your legs to accommodate him. âOkay first bottle weâre gonna do is this niaâŚniacin..â He said, struggling to pronounce the name written on the label. âNiacinamide?â You offered, trying not to chuckle. âYeah thatâs it,â He smiled and you wanted to tell him he wasnât supposed to use it yet but you kept quiet. âWhatâs this for?â He asked. âIt does a lot of things but it mainly helps with pores and textural irregularities,â You told him.
Johnny nodded and used the pipette to drop the serum onto your face and you were surprised that he was gentle in his kneading compared to the face wash. âDoes that feel nice hen?â He asked and you smiled. âOf course it does love,â You said. âOkay now for the hylronic acid,â He said, and you couldnât help but laugh at how he pronounced the name. âThis one is to help bring moisture back into my skin,â You told him, knowing he was going to ask.
âI canât believe you do this every morning bonnie,â he said, emphasizing the âevery morningâ in disbelief. âSo many steps,â said Soap, screwing the tiny lid back onto the bottle. You hadnât realize how small his hands made the bottles seem. âEvery morning,â you emapsized. âI do it at night too,â you smiled and he shook his head. âCaffeine and de puffing,â he looked at the tiny bottle in his hand. âYou put it on my undereyes. It helps to de-puff and energize them,â You instructed him. Johnny put some of the thick liquid on your undereye. He started massaging it into your skin when some of the serum got into your eye and you recoiled.
âOh shite sorry y/nâ he said, a worried look taking over his face. âDonât worry about it hun Iâm okay,â you said, trying not to tear up from the pain. âWhatâs next?â You said, genuinely wondering since he did the routine out of order. âThis is the only one left. Plant-based squaline,â he said, again reading the label. âThis one does a lot of things too; enhanced barrier support, moisturizing, all kinds of stuff,â You said, watching him unscrew the lid and drop the oily liquid onto your skin. âYou really need all of this stuff?â He asked, curious. âI donât need it but it does help,â You said.
He did take care to massage your skin more carefully to avoid your eyes. âLast is this right?â He said, holding up your lotion. âThatâs right,â You said, watching him pour some lotion onto his hand and rub it together before spreading it on your skin. You focused on the feeling of Johnnyâs fingers massaging the lotion into your skin and listening to his soft humming as he focused on his work. You enjoyed the simply intimate moment between the two of you, not knowing when youâd get the chance again to enjoy it. âDoes it really feel that good?â He asked and you opened your eyes to find him smirking. âIt did feel really good,â you whispered, planting a kiss on his lips.
âSo howâd I do bonnie?â He asked, looking a little too pleased with himself and you couldnât bring yourself to tell him he did it completely out of order and hurt your eye not once but twice. âYou did great Johnny,â you said smiling at him. âReally think so?â He said, helping you down from the counter. âWellâŚ.. Maybe itâs best to leave the skincare to me. You did the wrong steps and hurt my eye. Twice,â You said, with a small smile. âOkay no need to be cheeky hen Iâll leave you to your thing,â He laughed. You stood on your toe to give him a kiss. âI wouldnât mind you watching me though,â You said. Soap slipped his arms around your waist and returned your kiss. âI wouldnât mind doing that,â
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whatâs your favorite candy?
favorite love song?
what was your first kiss like?
what was your last kiss like?
sexual/romantic orientation?
do you prefer poems or love letters?
favorite fanfic trope?
have you ever been in love?
favorite milkshake flavor?
dinner dates or brunch dates?
favorite flowers?
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favorite candle scent?
whatâs your ideal first date?
favorite love story?
whatâs the most attractive thing a person could wear?
chocolate, vanilla, or red velvet?
snow, rain, or sun?
sweetest romantic memory?
favorite dating sim (and favorite character)?
fictional crushes?
whatâs your dream wedding like?
what makes you blush?
do you believe in love at first sight?
do you believe in soulmates?
denim jackets, leather jackets, or bomber jackets?
whatâs your sign?
are you single?
do you prefer to charm, or be charmed?
guitar or piano?
favorite romcom (or any romantic movie)?
do you fall in love easily?
valentineâs decorations: yay or nay?
would you prefer to propose or be proposed to? whatâs your dream proposal?
cloud gazing or star gazing?
do you like to dance?
whatâs your OTP?
kittens or puppies?
coffee, hot chocolate, or tea?
favorite soda?
do you prefer gazing wistfully out the window or lying dramatically over the sofa?
favorite ABBA song?
fuck/marry/kill? (anons name 3 people of your choice)
favorite pajamas?
favorite liquor?
do you think about love a lot?
a walk in the park or a walk on the beach?
hand kisses or nose kisses?
whatâs your dreamhouse?
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