Sometimes You Need Dialogue Tags And Don't Want To Use The Same Four

sometimes you need dialogue tags and don't want to use the same four

A colour wheel divided into sections with dialogue tags fitting the categories 'complains', 'agrees', 'cries', 'whines', 'shouts', and 'cheers'
A colour wheel divided into sections with dialogue tags fitting the categories 'asks', 'responds', 'states', 'whispers', 'argues', and 'thinks'

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5 months ago
Domestic Caitvi Doodle For The Soul

domestic caitvi doodle for the soul <3

Domestic Caitvi Doodle For The Soul

thank you for your suggestion @doctorhypetrain !!


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7 months ago

happiest birthday to my wife, my girlfriend, the loml, my situationship, and so on πŸ―πŸ’œ

Happiest Birthday To My Wife, My Girlfriend, The Loml, My Situationship, And So On πŸ―πŸ’œ
Happiest Birthday To My Wife, My Girlfriend, The Loml, My Situationship, And So On πŸ―πŸ’œ


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2 months ago
I’m Losing My Mind

I’m losing my mind


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4 months ago
a twin cinema poem. the left half (gideon) reads "forgotten and discarded in a moment, how can you be so callous and cruel when i gave you all. holy wasn't enough for you. i have learned to freefall and hear our names in the wind. this pain and you, intertwined." the right half (harrow) reads "endless grief for a future that doesn't exist. holding on, after everything, clawed and desecrated and still. i know it well; beloved, in our absence i shoulder everything, crying in the night. i take from you. let me stay forever." together, the two halves read: "forgotten and endless grief discarded in a moment for a future that doesn't exist. how can you be holding on, so callous and cruel after everything when i clawed and gave you all. desecrated and holy still. i know it wasn't enough for you. well, beloved, i have learned in our absence to freefall. i shoulder everything, and hear crying in the night, our names in the wind. i take this pain from you, and you let me stay intertwined forever." the poem is accredited at the bottom to mal delta.

finally tried my hand at a twin cinema poem and yaowza !! took me a couple hours to figure it out but i'm very happy with this one and i wanted to share. you can read gideon and harrow's thoughts separately to see their perspectives on their own and each other's actions, and putting them together supposedly reveals the truth of the lengths they would go to but can't communicate to one another :3

i just think that a form where they are talking to one another without hearing any response and yet are intertwining so perfectly is deeply on theme and makes me ill

also sorry for image quality i formatted this on canva and idk how to put such a complex form into an image description so apologies </3


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5 months ago

i've rambled about this on discord already, but i think it would have been really cool if hoyo took a different approach to the natlan archon quest. what we got was ok at best, but i think it would have been more interesting if the tribes had beef with each other. like imagine being mavuika; you construct this whole plan, you go inside the fire, and when you come out 500 years later your plan is in jeopardy because turns out a lot happens over 500 years and the tribes have been arguing about how to fix the abyss problem for so long that they are now fighting with each other (and maybe it's been so long that they don't even remember why they feel such animosity against each other anymore. 500 years is a lot of generations!)

and then some time later, the legendary traveler arrives in your land, and you figure this is it. this is my chance to fix this. so you and the traveler go around the different tribes trying to stop this war while it's still time and you pick a hero from each tribe to go fight the abyss with you.

i think it would create multiple opportunities. first, it would create interesting dynamics between the main cast. maybe some tribes have an amicable relationship, so two of the heroes would be willing to cooperate, but some would definitely have some kind of rivalry going on. there is also the opportunity to create the main yuri/yaoi ship of two heroes that desperately want to be "friends" but their tribes hate each other. this is exactly the kind of thing that's missing in natlan for me. imagine if we had these kind of dynamics, a group of people that under normal circumstances would be at each other's throats, i feel that it would only make the finale where they all unite to fight a common enemy feel much more heroic.

and second, mavuika would have to tackle actual trouble that is missing in the actual archon quest.

one of the criticisms that i have for the story is that mavuika's plan goes exactly how she plans it. everything is executed flawlessly, and sure there is the excuse that mavuika is a perfectionist who thinks of everything, but that doesn't mean that she can control every single circumstance. this curbed her of any potential growth in character that i think a scenario like this would have solved...

but that's just my idea anyway


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6 months ago
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?
How Many Days Till November Again?

How many days till November again?

Arcane incorrect quotes part I, part II, part III, part IV, part V, part VI, part VII Arcane analysis : silco + politics, caitlyn


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6 months ago

dating simulator where it starts normal but it slowly becomes clear that all of the romanceable characters are attempting to cover up an extremely specific murder they committed a year ago before you arrived


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