I can't breathe right now šš
For the Holly Everclear š„
This is cinema actually
My main story is called The Path of Destiny. It“s pretty long fantasy story where main characters are elves and other incredible creatures. I started to write about two years ago and I hope I“ll finish it soon. But it is still on-going story. I see it like some kind of saga with at least two parts. This first is called The Blue Moon. I also plan to post some ilustrations of characters and interesting parts. And if you would like my story you can also suggest how it could be and what would you want to happen next. Any ideas are welcome :D
Other stories aren“t so long. It“s usually my school work. Their genre is also everytime different, but I like to write something dramatic, so it could be even thriller. I hope you will like it :D
And as I said... your doors are wide open...
This one was one of my first shool-work stories. But honestly, I donĀ“t know if it will be as good as in my language. Also theĀ āruleā doesnĀ“t have to be valid in other countries. This story was made just to make fun of some peopleĀ“s behavior, so please donĀ“t take it personaly. Have fun :D
In the evening I am a witness of instinctual behavior. Unfortunately, in every means of transport our instinct is simple slogan: āJust me, just me!!ā. Everyone has seen this.
We all know the unwritten rule, first exit and then enter. Vain attempt. Life is a struggle, and even such a trivial thing as exit from the means of transport, is sometimes an impossible task. If we add the panic in the eyes of entering passengers and maliciousness of the driver who lights up the warning light to signal the approach of closing door, it turns out we have really hilarious scene! Well, only in the case when you are currently not in the area around the doors and do not belong to one of the two groups of entering or exiting.
Amused, I watched this scene from the seat, which I fairly seized. The exiting crowd instinctively ducked behind spatially significant persons to had more easy way to exit. The problem occurs at the moment when you and other exiting person choose the same spatially significant person. We are where we were. Crushes to the freedom. The entering people also certainly have not helped.Ā Those, who waited in the station, rushed to the sides of the door, and those, who need to free up space at the door, must exit with the intention to enter back.
Door area is getting rapidly thinner, so the first wave exiting by three suddenly became noodle exiting by one. It certainly does not add the speed, not to mention the often grumpy driver who demonstratively plays the record: āAccelerate the access and exit!ā. I think the person, that the voice from a record belongs to, had a lot of fun while recording. The intonation is excellent.
So the result? The exiting crowd indiscriminately struggling to get out, and to make matters worse, nervous entering passengers are pushing in. Physicists should be pleased by this experiment, the resistance of opposite sides is perfect. Weaker pieces drop out, that one with a small balance fall or better yet, gave up attempt to exit completly. The entering passengers look around the other door, which is not at such crush. Metro closes, strong pieces survived, though some fought for their life with the closing door and we go to the next station. I'm going to slowly prepare onto the battlefield, because the next warrior to exit is me ...
Well... It looks like my computer get mad at me. Every single document is now turned into this symbol mess...
I tried everything yesterday to fix it, but nothing works. When I tried to change the fond, it shows me just squares -_- So... all I can do now is to learn this wierd language and translate it to normal letters and then to english... It“ll take some time, but I“ll still try to post some smaller story or some book review.
(Hope I“ll fix it...)
It got me hooked right from the beginning <3
hehehe hooked, see what I did there :3
Title: The Property of Hate Author: Sarah Jolley The Property of Hate is an ongoing, graphic novel style webcomic by Sarah Jolley. The first page was posted in February 2012 and the archive totals 129 pages as of this writing. TPoH follows the story of RGB, on a quest to save his world, and a young girl known simply as āthe Heroā, whom RGB has asked for help. Itās hard to summarize this one because there is so much that is, as of yet, unexplained. What exactly RGBās world is and what is threatening it havenāt been revealed. What we do know is that itās made of abstractions. Concepts are given physical form here. Lies, doubts, ideas, grief⦠all these things (and others) are living things that populate the world. Some of them are friendly, many are dangerous. So far the story is about our main charactersā journey toward āherā (Hate, I assume), and their dealings with the worldās inhabitants and each other. A fascinating read. This is a comic I stumbled onto completely by accident, and Iām happy I did. The art is nothing short of wonderful. The way that so many styles have been blended together is unique, pretty, and absolutely appropriate considering the setting. As far as the story goes, we donāt know whatās going on, and thatās⦠really good, actually. It sets a mood, and itās an ominous one, if you ask me. The Hero has been through some awful stuff already, and we havenāt even met the titular character yet. Oh, and by the way, you will feel for the Hero. So, so much. All in all, itās a well told story that gets you emotionally involved, keeps you wondering and guessing and waiting impatiently to find out what happens next. That said, resist the urge to rush through, read it carefully and pay attention, itāll be that much more enjoyable. I love The Property of Hate. I think you will too. Read it here.
Here I would like to share my interest in writing stories and drawing some ilustrations or comics. My original language is not english so.... sorry for mistakes during translations :-) All stories without link are mine. Hope you“ll enjoy :D
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