Chapter 24 Is Posted!

Chapter 24 is posted!

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Prolonged Agony Chapter 23!

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I decided it was probably about time I worked out a proper timeline, for my own sanity more than anything, since some chapters overlap.

I will update the timeline as the story progresses to avoid spoilers for those who are following along with the fic.

The timeline is rough and might be edited in the future, but as I said, this is mostly to help me keep track of everything lol

Major spoilers below!

Timeline.

Part 1: Getting Leo home.

1st: Canon portal - Divergence starts.

2nd: Directly after first.

3rd: Night time a few hours later - Mikey opens portal alone

4th: Next day - Afternoon - Failed to open

5th: Next day - Afternoon - Leo fights back

Night time: Mikey has Nightmare.

6th: ^ Same night - Mikey and Donnie opne portal alone

Next day - Donnie and Mikey argue 

7th: Next day - Morning - open portal with April and Casey

8th: Directly afterwards - SUCCESS!

Total days = 5 days.

Part 2: Leo is home

Directly after getting Leo home: 

Mikey refuses to see Leo.

April sees Leo's injuries.

April and Mikey talk.

Raph cleans Leo.

Donnie and Casey amputate Leo's arm.

Late afternoon:

Donnie goes to bed and has a nightmare.

Raph takes Donnie to med-bay.

Raph joins Mikey, April and Casey in the kitchen.

Raph, Splinter, Casey and Donnie have lunch in med-bay.

Leo wakes up.

Leo attacks family and portals away.

Total time: Midday to Evening. 

Part 3: Search for Leo + TCRI

(Chapters overlap)

Directly after portaling away:

Late Evening:

Leo portals to TCRI roof.

Leo portals to New Jersey and sleeps all night.

Eight hours later:

Very early morning:

Family recovers after Leo's attack.

Mikey goes to Draxum.

Donnie wakes up.

Casey goes to meet Cass.

At the same time:

The family starts to plan to search for Leo.

Leo wakes up and basks in the sun.

Donnie and April go to Run of the Mill.

Raph and Splinter talk with Big Mama.

Casey and Cass search along the river.

Mikey and Draxum go to Repo Mantis.

At same time:

Leo portals to the TCRI building and sneaks inside for information.

Donnie and April go to Purple Dragons.

Mikey and Draxum fight Meat Sweats/returns to Repo

Casey and Cass run into Hypno.

Splinter and Big Mama work out a deal.

At the same time:

Leo sets the TCRI building to explode.

Donnie and April fly around.

Mikey texts Todd.

Casey and Cass chat after Hypno.

Splinter and Raph start to leave Big Mama's Hotel.

The TCRI building explodes.

At same time:

Donnie and April see Leo on the roof.

Casey notices an explosion.

Mikey and Draxum hear an explosion.

Splinter and Raph see the explosion.

Then: (in order)

Leo portals away. 

Raph catches D&A as they fall.

Donnie and April start to fall.

Protal opens to save D& A.

Mikey catched the building, slowing its down so that people could get away.

Raph carries Donnie home.

Mikey gets call from Raph

Casey and Cass arrive when things have calmed down.

Raph dropped Donnie off in med-bay

Raph calls Casey.

To be updated as I upload chapters

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2 years ago

ROTTMNT : SPIRITS WITHIN THE WEAPONS

Masterpost here

HAL AND DONNIE

And Shelldon

Finally!

Hal watching Donnie work. Full art.
Art without background
Art without background and screens
Background art
Original sketch

After Hal got his Halberd back from Fundi he clung to it for weeks, only forming half of himself while watching Donnie.

Once he wa comfortable, he abandoned the halberd completely and just hangs in Donnie's lab whether he's there or not.

Hal gets best if both worlds: to learn about technology without anyone talking to or noticing him at all, as well not being too alone or lonely. He also cherishes the peace and quiet he gets when the four turtles and three other spirits go out.

Hal was very nervous of Shelldon at first, especially since he was scared the A.I bot would find a way to see or hear him, and thus telling Donnie of his existence.

Hal knows Donnie isn’t keen on mystic or magic related things, so he thinks it's better if Donnie never finds out about him incase Donnie is either creeped out by him or hates him for hanging around for so long without Donnie knowing.

Thankfully though, after months of skirting around Shelldon in a panic, Hal realises that the bot cannot see nor hear him so he relaxes and goes about doing his own thing.

Little does Hal know, Shelldon can see and hear all the spirits but only Oda knkws this and managed to convince Shelldon not to tell anyone.

Its now a common scene to see Hal keenly watching Donnie in whatever he's doing, always surprised by the marvels of modern technology.

If the other spirits need to talk to Hal... they know where to find him.

I have been working on this drawing for ages, and then I got ill and couldn't finish it for a week. But I'm well now and managed to finished the background quickly so I can post it today.

Personally I'm terrible at backgrounds, (I mostly avoid doing backgrounds if I can) but I decided to put a bit more effort into it this time. I'm not sure whether I like the background I did or not... but decided to post it anyone without thinking too much. Oh well.

I decided also to included the original sketch work, Hal and Donnie without the background, as well as the background on itself, since I spent so much time on this. I do feel the background crowds the picture too much, so that's why there are different versions.

It was my brothers idea to have Donnie playing Tetris inbetween his usual work. 😆


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5 years ago
The Male Version Of The Original Character E.V

The male version of the Original Character E.V

Aka: Evan

2 years ago

ROTTMNT : SPIRITS WITHIN THE WEAPONS

Odachi

Nicknames : Oda / Chi / Ochi 

AU info here

(Or probably in better terms, more Canon Compliant than AU..?)

ROTTMNT : SPIRITS WITHIN THE WEAPONS

Oda is the only spirit that has all his old memories, but he never tells anyone his past. Like the others, he decided to adopt the weapons name as his own, despite knowing his original name. 

Although the other spirits don't know their ages, they all know that Oda is a lot older than them. 

Oda is stern, calm and collected, and mysterious. However, his firm attitude comes across as him not caring about what others think or feel, when really he is super intuitive to others thoughts and feelings but pretends otherwise.

Oda is more than willing to listen to and help the other spirits with their problems and insecurities, but his answers and solutions—although helpful— are often too blunt. 

Oda thinks Leo is too child-like to wield a dangerous weapon and mystic power such as the Odachi and portals. 

Oda deliberately made it hard for Leo to use the Odachi, wanting to test Leo to see if he was worthy to use the Odachi. 

Eventually, Oda sees Leo's determination to fight for his family. This determination and stubbornness to give up on using the mystic portal abilities, despite multiple failures, is what changes Oda's mind. 

Overtime Oda learns to trust Leo with the Odachi, knowing that, although it may not seem like it, the young turtle knows what he's doing. 

Although it took a while, Oda started to really enjoy Leo's sense of humor, even going as far as to laugh at his more stupider jokes. 

Oda constantly threatens the other spirits if they ever mention how he likes the young turtles wielding him— although they all know he never goes through with his threats. 

Oda is the only one who can keep Fundi in check. 

Oda doesn't talk much, but the others can hear his sighs and eye-rolls miles away. He's full of eyebrow raises, huffs and disappointed headshakes. 

Hums old tunes a lot. 

Oda's formless self consists of blue lightning whizzing around the blade and brilliant blue eyes appearing from the lightning. He can whip the sword around by itself but can't access any portals or teleportation. 

Oda hates it when his blade goes blunt. Before he was able to take on Leo's form he stressed about the condition of his blade, but now that he has a form he can sharpen it himself when the others are asleep. 

All the other spirits rely on Oda, trusting him with their lives as well as all their problems and insecurities. 

Oda loves to meditate and train, and while the others are sleeping, he can sometimes be seen by the other spirits practicing with the Odachi. 

Although he denies it, Oda is the only one who has tried multiple times to reach out to Leo, often to stop the young turtle form doing something stupid, but alas, they can't touch or communicate with the real world. 

The other spirits know Oda is soft for Leo, and secretly they all wish they could interact with the turtles just so that they could see Oda talk with Leo like they know he wants to. 

Oda often talks about old teas he used to love drinking but can't anymore (the only time he speaks of his past) and secretly enjoys watching Jupiter Jim and Lou Jitus with the turtles—though will deny it when someone mentions it.   

Thinks of Hal the most but knows that Hal probably doesn't think of them much. 

Tonfa

Fundi

Hal


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5 years ago

An Original Character Mood Board # 4 Alistair Jones

An Original Character Mood Board # 4 Alistair Jones
2 years ago

Yeashhh!

Reblog if you write fanfic and would be totally down with your followers coming into you askbox and talking to you about your fic


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5 years ago
I Made This Years Ago. I Have This Neat Little Drawing App On My Tablet That Comes With Loads Of Stickers

I made this years ago. I have this neat little drawing app on my tablet that comes with loads of stickers I usually don't use. But, when playing aroud with the app, I made this. I hope day I'll be able to draw this from scratch without using any stickers lol. #originalartwork #artistsoninstagram #artistic #nightskyart #originalart https://www.instagram.com/p/B9zzl3SBPwk/?igshid=1d3o0sgivmjm6


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2 years ago

DONNIE IS BACK, BABY!!!!

DONNIE IS BACK, BABY!!!!
DONNIE IS BACK, BABY!!!!
DONNIE IS BACK, BABY!!!!
DONNIE IS BACK, BABY!!!!

Y'ALL BETTER VOTE FOR HIM IN THE FINALS!!!


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An Original Character Mood Board #6 Elizabetha Fitzwilliam
2 years ago
Whoa! I Didn't Think I'd Ever Get Anywhere Close To This. I Know It Doesn't Seem Like A Lot, But To Me,

Whoa! I didn't think I'd ever get anywhere close to this. I know it doesn't seem like a lot, but to me, who only created this page just to ease my boredom, this means a lot.

And it's hours away from my birthday as well! That's awesome!

Thank you to everyone who got me to 500 likes! <3


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2 years ago

Prolonged Agony is in another au competition 😳

[Welcome Ladies and Gentlemen, to the ROTTMNT AU SHOWDOWN.

32 AUs, all competing to be the best. Who will win? That is for YOU to decide!

Annnnnd now that that's out of the way, ON TO THE BRACKETS!]

[Welcome Ladies And Gentlemen, To The ROTTMNT AU SHOWDOWN.

[A wonderful selection we have here, but first... we must go over some..]

[RULES]

Be respectful.

NO VOTER FRAUD. PERIOD. That is not cool.

Propaganda art is allowed! I would love to see it so @ me!

T-CEST DNI

[AUs]

Lost and Found @another-separated-au

Triple Trouble AU @triple-trouble-askblog

Unstoppable Force v Immovable Object @achilles-invulnerable-heel

Atomic Pets AU @wandering-ghost

They Came from Below @mej2235

Red Rover AU @red-rover-au

Call Me Here I Will Appear @gayneku

Bloodbath AU @bloodbath-au

Two Arms Left @intotheelliwoods

Life Mission AU @daedelweiss

No Crime Only Brooches AU @olliethescribe

Cass's Apocalypse Series @somerandomdudelmao

Prolonged Agony @archetype-archives

Addams AU @lackablazeical

Snapdragon AU @bluesgras

I Think We Broke Time Continuum @havendoesthings

Separated Leo AU @separatedleoau

The Era Of Tigerclaw @moontria

Lost Blue/Broken Red AU @wandering-ghost

Celestial AU @ashwii

Ghost of the Past AU @wandering-ghost

Spiderling @warpeddaydream

The Night @raymustardd

NLTL AU @leo-kinnie

Subnautica! Leo AU @havendoesthings

Murals and Mutants @aslitheryprinx

You’re Still My Brother @yujateaandpi

The Eldest Brother @debb987

Falling From Dawn @falling-from-dawn-au

An Arm and a Leg @newellthedragon

Never Better @less-depresso-more-espresso

Guess I’ve been… Disarmed @phoenixdeleted

//This Tournament is mostly ran by an OC of mine for fun. (I will show up from time to time though >:]) Their opinions DO NOT reflect my own.

Think of them as an overpowered Big Mamma :D

Poll ran by @unnamed-idi0t

OC I'm using: @the-speaker


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