I think the worst for gs is how similar to gb the situation is. A hot headed brat, consumed by hatred, whom older sister died by goblin? That was gb all right. And probably gb never worked on that trauma. Instead he buried it deep in his heart, and started slaying goblin, seeking to do something. Anything. All to forget. Focusing on saving people, instead of stopping and follow the five steps of suffering.
But opening his heart, started to mellow those feelings he kept in check, as useless and dangerous in battle, since they could bring distraction. Allowing him to better work with people, and doing things that he alone (may?) Never be able to. But also the trauma he left unchecked all this time. Kept fresh on purpose on his pursuit of goblin. A motive that keeps him steady before the horror he decides to live every day he walks in a goblin cave.
His guilt is not for not killing the girl. Or at least, not completely. He had no problem accepting it before, times and times again. As necessary actions. Acts of mercy, which he may have wished could have been spared for her sister, as he looked uselessly while hidden as a child. For example when Explaining to priestess that the girl could not be saved, he did so without breaking a sweat. Instead already going again to save the the last girl.
It could also be survivor guilt, as he started enjoying his time with his team, when there are people that he could not save. And realized only now, remembering the girl while everyone was preparing a party.
The most heartbreaking is how he decides to suffer alone. Deciding to run away from all the people he learnt to call friends.
He is probably condemning himself, thinking that after all this time, nothing changed. His actions were not able to save a little brother (him) from having his family (gs's sister) die on him. Useless, as he was under that hiding place. Back to when he was looking at her sister being violently tortured (it was torture stfu) and unable to do anything to help her.
Not true, as we know. In fact, We could say that the simple fact that gb saved the hero, was enough to have saved the world. And even if gb doesn't know it, many villages have showed their appreciation to him. But remembering his trauma, gs can't see all the good things he did. Only what he didn't. Making it his fault.
Sorry if it is written so badlyđ. English is not my first language, and i was going to sleep. But gb is a quite complex character, and I adore how much you can extrapolate by his actions. And seeing a openly weeping gs was probably a surprise for us all. I just couldn't describe how truly f*cked up our poor gb is. Only try. So if anyone thinks otherwise, don't take my words for guarantee, alright?đ
P.s. does anyone else think gs under his armor is just a big dork uncomfortable when in companyn other people? It is difficult when you speak to someone and are unable to see their face. Mostly because you can't see their expressions, and are unable to figure what the other people is thinking. I don't doubt GS is wearing his armor for strictly pragmatic reason. But could it be that his many years by his master, left him unable to converse normally with people? And let's not forget that even after, he would pass most of his time alone hunting goblin. Leaving precious few times to speak with others. And even then, he would just hurry back to another quest. So he may be socially stunt? It is called like this when a child can not form a social self to relation with others?
P.p.s i will probably give this thing a second look later. I already dread to how many mistakes i will find when I will read this tomorrow đ -Ăđ§ą
Yes, because of your arrogance or stupidity, you got caught in a trap, endangering your companions. But finally, you learned your lesson, you little (bleep)!
OH NO! The wizard who got killed in the beginning was his sister?
Oh, no. đ
If I recall, his sister and their companions (including the priestess) were Porcelain ranked who take a goblin slaying request WITHOUT any plan. They just headed straight to the goblinâs lair. Also, they got killed because they underestimated the goblins. Well, not all of them.
His sister, the wizard, gets poisoned by the dagger the goblins stabbed her with, and Goblin Slayer killed her out of mercy because she will not survive for so long.
And now, Goblin Slayer felt guilty for killing his sister.
Itâs the first time we see Goblin Slayer cry ever since his whole village were raided by goblins.
Will that guy finds out the truth?
I think It should be "it's a party!" By cyanidesins
and wooooh boy was it fucked up to see a thousand plus year old man manipulate ruby and whittley into loving him so he could further his plans. still makes me feel nauseous just thinking about it. which speaks well for the author of the story at least. but yeah that was really messed up might have soured rose-garden and rich-farmers for me forever.Â
it also gave a believable break down of bumblebees so it fell apart (because blake is racist and decided to side with robin since she said she would help the fuanas and politicians never lie) and showed a yang and weiss desperately trying to save their younger siblings.Â
it also killed nora and ren off to just throw more shit at jaune (like the guy needs it) but then it turns out theyâre alive and simply hiding out from ozpin and cinder while working with jauneâs family to save everyoneâs favorite noodle and jauneâs rapidly approaching fuck it levels that will result in him destroying everything if a fit of nihilistic furryÂ
If you are reading this comment your curse is lifted forever and your parents will live.
I love my mom.
I am risking nothing
I AM SORRY FOLLOWERS, I LOVE MY MOMMY
Will not risk.
sorry followers :(
More bittersweet, as Hans many stories are
Oh, so if we summon her in the real world, everything would just go fine. So this story has a happy ending, then.
This would have been perfect for Halloween
Who gets masterâs soul?
That's Just adorable
Premise - Ten years after the defeat of Salem, Remnant is at peace, or at least itâs foot is out of the doorway of destruction. Team RWBY is world famous and making the world a better place, Nora and Ren have started a family and found peace, and Jaune is living his dream in Argus⌠with his son Achilles and their dog Heracules.
In otherwords Jaune is a himbo single dad trying his best, while going on misadventures with his son and dog.
Achilles Arc
Ten yearâs old
Long crimson-red hair, sapphire blue eyes, tall for his age, but barely comes to his dads chest. Hasnât hit puberty yet, but is pretty gangly. Has a tan skin tone.
Semblance:?
Heracles Arc
Breed: Tibetan Mastiff: (Grimm Hunter Hound)
A puppy Jaune found in a overrun village, and took in. View Jaune as his papa, and Achilles as his brother. Has been trained by Jaune to protect Achilles, and Achilles trains with him to be a huntsman.
Semblance: Brother Bond - Creates link between him and his brother, creating a pool between the two of them, allowing them to share memories to senses to aura, to possibly anything between the two of them.
When I was little, i had always had a fear, but let's say a distaste? of sea.
I would always cry and ask to go back every 10 minutes, or about.
But i was little so no one cared about what I said.
Everytime we went back home, i would sleep terrorized and constantly having nightmares.
Being tied and thrown in the water, sometime with a web, sometime by algae and pulled inside.
The normal kind of nightmare, till now.
One night, i dreamt of being in a canoe in the middle of the sea, with no land in sight.
With me there was a fisherman, who menaced me of various suffering and that he had me once again, and that i wouldn't never run away again.
Now bear with me, because this is a bit weird.
At his words I remembered i saw him in a dream, that i didn't remember for anything but his presence. Nothing else.
And so i realized that that must have been a dream too.
Suddenly i tried my hardest to open my eyes, all the meantime, the fisherman kept mocking me an my efforts to wake up.
And here happened the strangest thing, that if someone know something about, I'd like you would share it with me.
I opened one eye while with the other, i kept dreaming. It was a so surreal sight, of the blue of the ocean and the dark of my room, that both me and the fisherman just stared at each other with a stupified expression in our face.
But the silence ended with his laugh, followed by him saying: "Ah! I told you" and some other rambling, before I opened my other eyes.
Honestly, i was less scared when I was being covered every night for a week by spider coming out of my closet, that meet that thing again.
I mean, i still dislike sea till this day, but if i see a spider on the ceiling about to be murdered, i would always tell off any spider killer. They eat mosquitoes, they basically make lord work for me.
I didn't dream about him never again, at least for what I remember. I like to think that he was so disappointed or ashamed that he had lost the courage to show back his face.
i just had the weirdest moment, i was feeling my front teeth with my tongue because theyâre the tiniest bit crooked, and then i had the thought âiâll check if theyâre also crooked in my other mouthâ and then i realized to my shock and confusion that i have only one mouth, leading me to believe that in a past life i was a terrible monster with two mouths
You May Be forgetting the danger if One of these animals get Lost, or, even worse, if down the reproduction cycle some of the descendants show a mutation, since there seem to be a bond between body and aura that keep it's presente in the following generation. Beside It takes a long time to train an animal, and with super intelligence and strenght they must be twice more careful over Every single animal. So MayBe Even if he can't create an army, maybe a small handful could be used and given to a select Number of trainers.
P.s. of course if doesn't exist a semblance or some others BS Power on remnant that would allow blind obedience, but i doubt they would use It then. In the game we play by ryuugi jaune adopted a dog and gifted aura and something more, but in that case the dog became smarter than me in Little less than a month so i dunno if he counts.
Remnant is pretty much a death world, so the wildlife must be pretty insane too having to deal with things like Grimm, whatever arcane things the Brothers left behind, humans, Dust and itâs effect on the environment, and likely ghosts.
That said most animals can be tamed, or at least trained to an extent. All living things from the smallest bacteria to the largest whale, to the smallest algae to the largest grove of trees is capable of aura.
Jaune is an aura amplifier, see where Iâm going?
Jaune is strongish on his own, heâs strongest when working with others. Heâd be at his pinnacle commanding an army of beasts, going full druid, on his enemys.Â
Sending murder after murder of Ravens, Crows, and Rooks at his enemies to scout information, and harass supply lines, and take out lightly armored units like beowolves with sheer numbers or even better⌠Send one murder of crows of over the battle field carrying flour, coal dust, gun powder, or even just packets of oil, then send one higher flying murder dropping lit torches. Or they could be lame and make carry small flechettes. Huh, they could even step the battlefield by dropping caltrops and other small traps that could injury feet on unsuspecting enemies.Â
Sending in his packs of armored dogs, wolves, and hybrids to further harass and distract enemies, using hit and run tactics to take out weaker units then pulling back and hiding when outmatched, stalking them and whittling down forces. Or sending them to take down larger solo larger units like alphaâs or elder Grimm, attacking them in swarms then retreating while sending in the next pack, not giving the Grimm rest, not letting them heal or learn eventually killing them with a death by a thousand cuts.
Sending in passels of armored boars to break enemy lines, or Grimm packs. Younger Grimm being killed instantly under the weight of the war pigs, while older Grimm are gored as they charge pass them. Clearing entire areas of edible plants to decrease supplies for enemy forces, while feeding them.
War elephants to deal with super-heavy grimm, to break enemy fortification, to transport supplies and arms. Carry lighter animals like crows or foxs, or even allied humans, humans who can fight from ontop of the elephants.Â
Having a pride of lions as his honor guard guarding his flank and back.Â
WHALE SQUAD! ORCA UP! Dolphins to deal with underwater threats, Orcas to deal with heavies.
With each and every animalâs aura unlocked, boosted, and possibly with semblance, itâd be a massacre. That said Iâm sure most animals would have simple semblance that are easy to find and master. But, simple does not equal bad, no, if anything it just grants greater chance for growth.
The potential is endless, yeah, itâd be a time investment to tame those animals, but start with the Crows and work up, get people to help.
Sure you could argue, oh no way he has enough aura for that! Youâd be right, at first. But, semblances evolve and change based on how they are used, and Jaune in constant aura dynamo state would increase his reserves, as his semblance is natural the giving type, so to give more itâd increase his already large reserves until heâd have enough on tap to supply his beast horde. Then itâd increase his aura regen speed to keep up with the damage they take in. Hell, itâs not outside the realm of reason that Jauneâs semblance could evolve in the following line of thought, like a creating a link between him and living be allowing him to give aura from a distance, then it further evolving allowing a two way connection via thought, and then allowing him to telepathically control his armies from miles away while still boosting them
Also, food? Like 90% of Remnant is unclaimed, give him time to build his power base and heâll figure it out.
Anyway, I think Jaune should be Remnantâs equivalent of a pokemon master.
Yes he's a God. Just "it's a party" has been a clusterfuck of Surprise by beginning to the end, and you can Always See the study there Is behind his characters, even though Is the only finished story. Beside "dies irae", "a Grimm tale" and "broken fangs" are all completely different by One Another, while the most of Fanfiction today Is Just a variation of "jaune goes to Beacon" with adds-on. In His stories there Is never "they Met, they fucked-the end". He explores the racism that was Just mentioned in the show in a complete new light, and probably I could keep going for a bit, so i'll Just repeat that his characters are constants. If they are not well in the head that's Just It, It doesn't change in five minutes with a pair of magic words by the MC of the story. I mean look at blake in broken fangs or Cardin in a Grimm tale!
P.s. if you haven't read It yet, i won't spoil It for you.
Btw that part Is One of my favourite, immediatly after his speech to mantle.
And ozpin Is depicted like a true Immortal should act, not Just a troll, i mean, look at the show, the most despicable thing he has done Is having caused the unspecific reason for Hazel's sister death, and that part we don't even know if it's true or Just hazel's obsession, but living so long must mess with the head.
CyanideSins is a based God, example when Blake talks about Robyn Hill:
âShe wishes to do good things for Mantle! She has a Semblance that can tell whether youâre telling the truth or not, so I trusted her and told her about the Amity project. Sometimes, if you trust those who are fighting for what is right, you will-â
âAh.â
The wild and naked anger on his face as he rose, and Blakeâs gaze went up, his mailed hand grabbing her throat and raising her up. Blakeâs legs kicked against his armoured form, the man in the armour not letting go of her as he brought her face close to his, snarling lividly at her. Blake's heels kicked at him as he held her, whilst they stared and the wrath in his expression made her cower.
âYOU TOLDÂ THATÂ WOMAN ABOUT THAT? ARE YOUÂ INSANE?!"
His teammates shifted, muscles tensing, ready to interfere if things got violent. It was something Weiss noticed, as the man she liked's voice turned angrier.
"ARE YOU OUT OF YOURÂ MIND, YOU SICK FAUNUS BITCH?!â
Spit hit Blake in the face as the cat ears flattened on her face, Jauneâs grip pressing against the Faunus girlâs throat, Weiss up from her seat after she'd gathered herself, as was Yang.
âJaune! Calm down, she didnât mean anything with it! I was there with her, we both did it!â
Blake was struggling against the hand, as he didnât look away from her. Jaune ignored Yang, looking at Blake's face with eyes that were full of emotion.
âBeacon fell because of YOU and your fucking people, Blake. Your whole âWhite Fangâ maniac band of Faunus murderers just went out and MURDERED THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE! THOUSANDS, BLAKE! And you know what the best thing is, Blake fucking Belladonna? Pyrrha died because of Cinder Fall and her White Fang flunkies. All because of you. You couldn't just leave that mad crusade for 'Faunus rights' alone, could you?â
His anger was visible on his face as Yang grabbed a hold of him, trying to wrench her girlfriend free. Weiss could use a Glyph, but there was nothing that could stop Jaune without impacting the others.
âShe was innocent of that! She had nothing to do with the White Fang, and Adam was-â
Yang shouted, and Jauneâs eyes turned to her. Yang actually flinched back, the blue eyes looking angry and tired.
"SHE HAS EVERYTHING TO DO WITH THE WHITE FANG, YANG! HER FATHER CREATED THE ORGANISATION AND SHE WAS A PROUD MEMBER!"
His breathing was heavy, as his grip on Blake's throat increased, the gauntlets holding her tightly, as his voice calmed somewhat, speaking in a harsh tone.
âAdam chased the two of you down, simply because this little pussycat couldnât keep her mouth fucking open for FIVE FUCKING SECONDS and tell all of us about what itâs like to fight with him. Information, Blake Belladonna, about his fucking semblance wouldâve been nice. Do you think this is funny? Do you? How many of us need to die before Blake Belladonna gets it in her fucking skull that not everything revolves around the people who are oppressed?â
Blake was starting to turn purple in the face as his grip dug into her neck. The armoured gauntlets were hard to pry from a neck, she could guess. She didnât get closer, looking at her team leader, Ruby looking scared and indecisive between the two of them.
âYou handed out information to a known political opponent of Ironwood, simply because âBlake fucking Belladonna, Faunus terrorist supremeâ wants to see her girlfriend Yang lose another arm. âOh no, Iâm so sorry for dodging every damn fucking consequence Yang, even thought they cut off your arm! They can replace it!â, and I donât want to see my friend like that!â
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