En Los Talleres Se Trabajan Las Esculturas, Se Dan Bosquejos, A Veces Riman Otros No, A Pulir De Nuevo,

En los talleres se trabajan las esculturas, se dan bosquejos, a veces riman otros no, a pulir de nuevo, a sacar ideas desde otras perspectivas, y asi son los talleres. Lugares donde se trabajan ideas. Y a reemplazar, reeditar y asi. Darles nuevas luces al trabajo y asi, la idea es ciertamente empezar a escuchar el mercado por donde las ideas y los trends van, para tener un producto ajustado a una necesidad, y donde las ideas personales se ajustan, y complementan con los demás, para tener un producto que llame la atención.

Reeditar es importante , sobre todo cuando no se le quiere poner mucha mermelada a un sandwich, que después desparrame todos sus elementos y se están engolosinados, echando a perder la obra. La obra debe tener un equilibrio en sus plots, en sus caracteres, en sus world views para hacer un edificio elegante que guste su presencia por lo que ofrece. 

Los amores en los plots no hacen nada, a menos que no estén rodeados de una historia convincente, que mueva los caracteres hacia un propósito central concentrado y desparramado en toda la obra.

EL PUBLICO

Otras cosas a considerar es que la obra, o el publico al cual se dirige la obra es a las parejas de recién casados, jóvenes que fluctúan entre los 16 a los 24 anos, (representan el mayor segmento de matrimonios) con sus castillos de ilusiones, y cuando sus percepciones todavía no llegan a la madurez de parejas entre los 40 y 50 (cuyas pasiones, e intereses y emociones y situaciones variarían diametralmente). Esta obra esta dirigida a D’Bodas & XV Anos, en sus contenidos (por ahora) y sus publicaciones están enmarcadas dentro del espacio de D’Bodas & XV Anos para su distribución y venta por capítulos. La dinámica de valores, conceptos, situaciones para recién casados difiere de los adultos, por lo que los temas también difieren. Creo que la idea es darles a los recién casados ideas de mas o menos lo que pasa en las relaciones, pintarlas, y darles más o menos como una oleada de situaciones -entre aventuras- que se presentan en pareja. Me pregunto en voz abierta, si pudiera traspasar esas fronteras de edad y dejar una obra que pudiera meterse en todo publico, pero siento que perdería el propósito de una obra, porque toda obra debe tener un propósito dado que se invierte mucho tiempo y esfuerzo en su conjugación para perderlos sin un sentido y un propósito, y finalmente si vamos a ser algo, que finalmente sea de valor.

Still working in my shop. Getting ideas.

How can we develop a plot, mixing real young couple dynamics, into the story. That would be the greatest asset!

VALENTINE SCHLEGEL & IRIS MURDOCH

VALENTINE SCHLEGEL & IRIS MURDOCH

El arte dice la única verdad que en definitiva importa. Es la luz por la cual las cosas humanas pueden ser enmendadas. Y más allá del arte no hay, se lo aseguro a ustedes, nada.

-Iris Murdoch, El príncipe negro. Ed: DEBOLSILLO. Traducción  de Camilla Batlles Vinn.

- Valentine Schlegel, Primera escultura de yeso, taller de Sète, 1955.

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Scene Checklist

Does your scene include everything it should?

「 note: this is for the editing stage; remember, first draft is for the writer & editing is for the reader; get it down before worrying about these things unless it is just for practice 」

ACTIONS

↦ are the actions necessary?

↦ are the verbs as descriptive as possible?

↦ do the actions match the character? why did the character take those actions?

↦ are the actions clear?

DIALOGUE

↦ what is the purpose for each statement?

↦ does each statement move the story forward?

↦ are the dialogue tags as descriptive as possible?

↦ does the dialogue match the character? why did the character say those things?

EMOTIONS

↦ are each character’s emotions clearly stated or implied?

↦ are the character’s emotions justifiable?

↦ how does the character’s emotions affect their actions?

LANGUAGE

↦ are you showing or telling?

↦ does the scene have clarity & coherence?

↦ does the scene have the desired tone, mood, & voice?

PURPOSE

↦ is this scene necessary? (if removed, would the story still make sense?)

↦ are there stakes at risk in this scene? is there tension?

↦ has something changed from the beginning to the end of the scene?

↦ possible purposes: advance the plot? reveal character goal? increase tension? develop character? reveal conflict? react to conflict? explain backstory? foreshadow? build world? reinforce theme, tone, or mood?

SETTING

↦ will your reader clearly know the setting throughout the scene?

↦ room? house? city? state? country? planet? galaxy?

↦ time of day? season of year? weather?

↦ chronologically within story?

STRUCTURE

↦ is there a distinct beginning, middle, and end?

↦ is the chronological order of events clear?

↦ does the scene smoothly transition from one to another?

DWIGHT SWAIN’S SCENE VS SEQUEL

↦ Swain believed scenes should repeat these sequences in order to keep the interest of the reader piqued

↦ Swain says “a scene is a unit of conflict lived through by character and reader” & “a sequel is a unit of transition that links two scenes”

↦ scene: goal, conflict, disaster

⟿ goal: character’s decision to do something for a purpose

⟿ conflict: something opposing the character’s ability to achieve goal

⟿ disaster: a disruption or turning point to keep the readers hooked

↦ sequel: reaction, dilemma, decision

⟿ reaction: character’s emotional/analytical reaction to the disaster

⟿ dilemma: what should the character do now

⟿ decision: what does the character do now

↦ does your scene have one of these three-part patterns?

DWIGHT SWAIN’S MRU

↦ MRU: motivation-reaction units

↦ these are for alternating sentences or paragraphs

↦ motivation: objective thing your character externally senses (what happens?)

↦ reaction: subjective response your character internally has (how does your character react? feeling, reflex, action, dialogue?)

↦ this is very difficult to follow, especially without practice, but it is a way to guarantee your reader’s interest & attention

4 years ago

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Story Endings

Importance of the Ending

↣ readers invested their time into your publication ; make it worth it!

↣ the conclusion turns readers into fans

↣ endings should be memorable & satisfying ; this will make the readers want to indulge in more of your work

Choosing Your Ending

↣ know your genre ; different genres can get away with different endings

↣ a thriller novel ending unexpectedly or ambiguously would be more satisfying to readers than a romance novel ending that way ; and vise vera, a romance novel ending emotionally and with happily ever after would be more satisfying than a thriller ending that way

↣ make it unpredictable but fair ; readers should feel like they could have seen it coming

↣ find a happy medium between what your readers want and what is unexpected

↣ be careful with unresolved or ambiguous endings ; regardless of the ending, the readers need to feel satisfied or they won’t come back

↣ be careful with expanded endings ; most editors frown upon relying on epilogues to reach a satisfying resolution

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Types of Endings

⤷ ambiguous

→ an ending open to interpretation ; allows readers to come to their own conclusions

⤷ dialogue

→ ending with a quote from one of the characters

⤷ emotional

→ leaving the readers feeling some intense emotion ; negative, positive, or bittersweet

⤷ expanded

→ expands past the events of the narrative to resolve aspects that may not be explained in the main chapters ; usually takes form of an epilogue with a time skip

⤷ happily ever after

→ type of resolved ending where everything works out in the end

⤷ humorous

→ ends with a joke or in an ironic way

⤷ lesson learned

→ ends with clear, profound character development

⤷ reflection

→ ends with characters looking back on their choices, achievements, and experiences

⤷ resolved

→ leaves reader with no questions or loose ends ; all aspects have been clearly & satisfyingly resolved

⤷ tied

→ brings the story full-circle so it ends where it began

⤷ unexpected

→ a twist the readers did not see coming but also makes sense

⤷ unresolved

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