Quick Tips For Writing Protective Tension

Quick Tips for Writing Protective Tension

One character immediately steps in when something happens, overprotective much? The other one is like, “Chill. I got this.”

They stand just a little too close, constantly checking if the other person’s okay, but trying (and failing) to be subtle about it.

“Be careful,” “Watch out,” or “Don’t do that,” every two seconds, like they’re babysitting, but it's all about concern.

One of them puts a hand on the other’s shoulder, almost possessively, like, “Don’t worry, I’m here.”

They instinctively move in front, even if it’s something minor like a crowded street or a heated argument.

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11 months ago
Here's What It Should Have Looked Like...

Here's what it should have looked like...

It's the prologue in a nutshell.

On top of this, her blueprints for said blimp also get stolen.

Just A Meme I Made For My Thieves In Time Rewrite. It's On DeviantArt.

Just a meme I made for my Thieves In Time rewrite. It's on DeviantArt.


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11 months ago
Penelope Doodles. 
Penelope Doodles. 
Penelope Doodles. 

Penelope doodles. 

11 months ago

I think I finally understand why people write fanfiction. it’s so aggravating when a piece of media doesn’t engage with its premise - like maybe the implications were too dark, maybe if we followed it to its logical conclusion the main character would be irredeemable, maybe it’s too complicated, maybe it’s too flavourful (weird, horny, unflattering) so we only get a liiiitle bit of it sprinkled on top of an otherwise generic story

whatever the reason, we end up with a diet lite homogenized version of what the initial story promised us. it makes me pace around my house biting at my thumb, going “no…..no it could’ve been better…..I could’ve made it better…..”

11 months ago
Bentley, Penelope, And Murray

Bentley, Penelope, and Murray

I just felt like drawing these guys as a cute BFF trio (again)

1 year ago
Please Imagine With Me The Potential For The Contessa To Make A Comeback. Imagine Her Forcing Penelope
Please Imagine With Me The Potential For The Contessa To Make A Comeback. Imagine Her Forcing Penelope

Please imagine with me the potential for The Contessa to make a comeback. Imagine her forcing Penelope into a hypnotic, spice induced state where both her and Bentley’s intelligence and knowledge were stolen/abused for Cyrille Le Paradox’s scheme for time travel. But the only reason The Contessa was on board to work for Cyrille was because she wanted to get back at Bentley. He was the one responsible for ripping Sly, Murray, and Carmelita out of her control. She had some interest in getting back at Sly too, but Bentley was her main target.

If only Thieves in Time was written better. :’( Penelope and Bentley did not deserve what happened… And there were so many cool opportunities WASTED.


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1 year ago
Me: Draws My Mouse Dortor Because She Is Too Pure For This World And I Love Her 

me: draws my mouse dortor because she is too pure for this world and i love her 

6 months ago

sex is fine but have you ever thought about all the ways you’d rewrite a flawed piece of media that shaped your life and holds a special place in your heart despite its unfulfilled potential


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10 months ago

Ask me anything relating to my Thieves In Time rewrite, and I'll be happy to answer.

Reblog if you'll PUBLICLY answer anything in your ask right now.

Im game


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1 year ago

I would like to officially classify the Cooper Van as a clown car. How in the actual heck does it manage to carry that much stuff without crushing everyone inside?


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