Thieves In Time Redux: Full Story Preview
Thieves In Time Redux: Full Story Preview
I thought I'd repost one of my full story previews from DeviantArt. A few months back, I posted this there. It's set during Episode 0, during Sly's portion of the tutorial in Chapter 2. We open just after Sly's little accident crossing over to the museum building...
It wasn't too long before Sly happened upon a small rat guard with a gas mask. Somehow he looked familiar upon a close inspection… Sly brushed it off and picked his pocket before taking him out. "Nah… It couldn't be." Just a coincidence, right? He didn't dare tell Bentley. What would he think?
Almost immediately afterwards, Sly started hearing voices coming from inside the museum. He could hardly make out what they were saying, but he did see shadows in the window. Among the figures he spotted was a strangely familiar… skunk? He didn't bother staying long enough to hear what they were talking about. There was a job that still needed completing.
Sly almost swore he could have heard a squeak coming from Bentley's end of the line, followed by a splash. "Something happen in there, you two?"
This time, it was Penelope, the mouse, talking. "No need to worry about us, Sly. We're fine! Just a literal rat!"
A smile escaped from Sly, followed by a small chuckle… "First-timers are the best, aren't they?" He pressed onward, happy to have someone other than just Bentley and Murray on the main roster for a change. He fondly remembered Bentley and Murray's first time way back in Cairo… Those two had come so far since those humble beginnings…
But whenever he recalled that memory, he couldn't help but remember Neyla, the traitorous Interpol officer/Klaww Gang member… Things were different now. She was purged from this world. Surely he'd never meet anyone like her again, right?
As it happened, Penelope had never been on a full scale adventure like this before. Not from the very beginning, at least. Her experience level easily dwarfed everyone else's. Not that it was her fault. Sly had the gall to retire before she could gain any real experience as a full time member.
He started to regret that decision as he kept going… How could he do that to someone he recently hired? Still, Sly looked forward to seeing what Penelope could do beyond what she had initially been hired for. Better later than never, he thought.
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Just a meme I made for my Thieves In Time rewrite. It's on DeviantArt.
I ain’t no dumb blonde, I ain’t no stupid barbie doll!!
I haven’t used pencil crayons in so long. Drew Penelope, just cuz her redesign was really cute, even with all the shit that happened.
So, since Murray calls Penelope "Sis", Does that technically make her and Jing sisters?
I'm not planning on shipping Murray and Jing.
It's not off the table... I just haven't planned anything for them yet.
until we get a sequel sly 4 isn’t canon
Are Penelope's parents still alive and if so, do they approve of Bentley?
Her parents have not met him yet.
Update of my Sly Cooper shipping chart now that 2019 is on the verge of ending!
There's a little change, and I fitted all thd lines in this time instead of making all the shipping tallies last filled.
So if you're confused as to who goes to who, all the lines match up to the tallies on the right.
Also I find that some of my ships have changed while some remain. This chart below was my earlier shipping chart:
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"Mad"
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"Nice"
amiable, charming, cordial, courteous, delightful, favorable, friendly, genial, gentle, gracious, helpful, inviting, kind, lovely, obliging, peaceful, peachy, pleasant, polite, swell, sympathetic, tender, welcoming, well-mannered, winning
"Pretty"
alluring, appealing, attractive, beautiful, charming, cute, delightful, desirable, elegant, eye-catching, fair, fascinating, gorgeous, graceful, intriguing, lovely, pleasing, striking, stunning, sweet
"Said"
alleged, argued, asked, asserted, babbled, bellowed, bragged, commented, complained, cried, declined, demanded, denied, encouraged, expressed, giggled, growled, inquired, moaned, nagged, rebuked, rebutted, replied, rejected, retorted, roared, scolded, shrieked, shrugged, stated, taunted, vowed, warned, whined, whispered, yelled
"Went"
avoid, bolt, bound, depart, exit, escape, flee, fly, hike, hop, jaunt, jolt, journey, leap, leave, lurch, march, mosey, move, pace, parade, pass, progress, retreat, saunter, scoot, skip, split, step, stride, stroll, tour, travel, vanish
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Why don’t you like sly 4
Bad story
Good charcter was completely rippsd apart for plot
Carmelita has a right to be angry and Sly has a right to explain his side of the story, they should've had a better resolve to their relationship than fucking "Sly I..." "I know."
Le Paradox
The entire story stood on a throwaway idea left on Sly3.
Lazy plot convenience with time travel
The ancestor(s) romance subplot. Fucking nasty
Penelope was made the villain cause they couldn't inplement the mole charcter that was supposed to be Mice and Mech's main baddy
Le Paradox
No villain (but Toothepick) feels like they're trying to slide by nonchalantly when they take over. It's "hey we're in the past and now we gotta conquer it" and no one (but again Toothpick) uses any time relevance to fit in or influence the surroundings.
Le Paradox
Fucking Le Paradox
This prick is a fickle fart compared to the sheer thunder Neyla made in Sly2. You want a family rival? Make a family rival that uses his established smarts instead of making him "ohohohoho so predictable!!hahahaha"
Also his boss fight, Sanzaru you shouldn't of brought back all the ancestors for one long fetch mission. Get cane, return to the past???
Honestly how did the ancestors just phase back into their own timeline they got to the present with the van.
Miss Decibel is the weakest female villain and only is ber boss fight in same difficulty as Mz Ruby cause goddamn as if the slow down power was mandatory.
AND TOOTHPICK WAS RALEIGH 2.0
El Jefe needed to chaange up his tactics cause why keep the Cooper you were sent back to capture, alive???
Grizz need to get on a grill and never leave
Penelope my baby what have they done to you.
She went down doing ugly fisticuffs with Bentley in a mecha.
Cooler option would've been to make the Mole, and have Penelope the Balck Knight STILL- but she was trapped in there without any control to the mecha.
Episode could've ended with Bentley beating the mecha, and the chest plate popping out, startling everyone as Penelope finally climbs out sweaty, disoriented, and tied up with extension cords. Cue Bentley vehemently apologizing as the Gang move on.
Sly is a dick to Murray and Bentley. And his suit sucks.
Dmitri never got a speaking role in game. Or missions.
Carm only got ONE MISSION.
Murray oh dear lord was the food gag pushed to an eleven.
Also Sly and Bentley being creeps.
What the fuck was up with the Ice Age episode.
Why wasn't Sly4 about Le Paradox trying to get Sly to slip out of his amnesia act so he'd get busted by Carmelita and start massive trouble.
But so why wasn't Sly4 not affected by any time alteractions. Sly could've been erased from existance, Bentley could've walked for a time before realizing he wasn't supposed to, Murray being a fraidy cat again.
How come Penelope and Dmitri didn't get any love in this game.
Why the fuck did a member of SuckerPunch say want the ping-pong minigame in there. Why.
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