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unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?

unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?

It’s the voided postttt

unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?

unrelated to my last post what do you think each sinners dynamic would be in the omegaverse?

Cahaya: This year, I won’t be seeing my friend again…

Fang: Quit telling everyone I’m dead!

Cahaya: It’s like I can still hear his voice

Just have a though of this new streaming au .

We have Amato being one of the secret fan , then I think Fang will be in the line of Cahaya's fan too .

Have the image of Fang watching Cahaya's and Daun's streams to see how are they doing or have a secret account just for Cahaya . While during the space training in TAPOPS.

Or

the Fans know about the existence of Fang through Cahaya and they just wonder who is the " Fang " that Cahaya have misses . That a person have never got in front the camera before but always hear him mumbling the name unconsciously .

Something like :

" Sweets ? I don't have any favorite- Oh you mean this carrot donuts ? Um.....It's a old habit . I have a friend who loves to eat this and sometime I'll grab some for him . '

" Why I do this ? Pff- He's a carrot donut lover that he had to eat it everyday , if he don't he will sulk very hard . "

" He's my best friend and he wasn't here , he just go to.....have further achievements far from here ."

" ......I miss him."

"......I miss Fang."

Its like he died but he didnt

I think that one thing people fail to understand is that unsolicited literary criticism coming from an online stranger who is reading with no knowledge of what the authors intended goal is, is not going to be received the same as say: the authors beta reader or friends who know what the authors intended goal and has the sufficient knowledge and input to help the author reach that desired outcome.

"But I'm only trying to be helpful" How do I know you have the knowledge and literary skill for you to be able to actaully do that when we don't know each other and you are essentially a stranger to me? Are you applying this criticism based out of personal biased experience and desire to see the story or characterization be driven in another direction or tweaked, or do you know the author's intentions for the character? If the story is incomplete, are you basing your criticism of a character on the incomplete narration with only partial information available of them or are you building up a report until the story's completion? Did the author provide you with the information needed to make a fully informed criticism?

Have you discussed with the author what their plans are or are you assuming them based off the narration, especially if the narration is proven or implied to be unreliable or missing key points of the plot? Are you unbiased enough to help them reach their desired outcome for the characters and story regardless of your personal feelings towards the characters/antagonists and setting? Can you handle being told your specific input isn't wanted because you're a reader and/or have no written anything relating to their genre or topic? Do you understand and respect that the author's personal experiences might influence their writing and make it different than how you would have done it personally? Do you understand if an author only wants input from a specific demographic relating to their story?

If it's for fanfiction or other hobby media, are you holding a free hobby to a professional standard? Are you trying to give criticism because you feel like the author has produced 'subpar job performance' of their fic? Are you viewing their work as a personal intimate outlet or something that must conform with mass media? Are you applying rules and guidelines when the fic is shared for simple sharing sake? Is your criticism worded appropriately and focused on the parts where the author has requested input on rather than a general dismissal and or disapproval?

Have you put yourself in a place where you assumed you have the input needed for the story to evolve better, or have you asked what the author needs and what they're having trouble with? Can you handle having your criticism rejected if the author decides their story doesn't need the change and not take it as a personal offense against your character? Are you crossing that boundary because you think you are doing the author a favor? Are you trying to be helpful, or do you just want to be?

I think sometimes when people hear authors go 'please don't give me unsolicited writing advice or criticism' they automatically chalk it up to 'this author doesn't want ANY constructive feedback on their stuff at all' and not "i already have trusted individuals who will help me with my writing goals and- hey i don't know you like that, please stop acting so overly familiar with me'

Small lizard eats a bug in my room. He ran off with the remaining one when I wasn’t recording

Eyyyyyy- Thank you Zi. Your scenarios are wonderful too! I’m looking forward to reading the next parts of your story!

( Hmm 😐 it have been a while that I have seriously read the ask that Xoshi have replied and now I'm free so let's read it from the old one to the new one see if I can get some ideas for the next part 😆 ! )

( Also me after 10 minutes later . )

"......SP ANON IS NERIZYS ?!?!?! THE ANON THAT HAVE WROTE THE SCENARIOS THAT I LIKE AND INSPIRE ME ?!?!?!?!? "

" AND NERIALTER USER IS NERIZYS'S OTHER ACCOUNT ?!?!? "

"......."

"......."

" I HAVE BEEN CHECKED MY SCENARIOS ASKS NOTES IF NERIZYS HAVE LIKE MY STORY !!!! "

"I ALWAYS TAKE IT AS A PRIZE BECAUSE I LIKE THEIR FIC IN THEIR ACCOUNT AND ALSO THE PERSON WHO MADE ALL THE AU'S LORE WITH XOSHI WHICH IS CANON IN THE AU STORY!!! "

" AND YOU TELL ME NERIALTER IS THE SAME PERSON HAVE BEEN LIKE MY STORY I'M SO HAPPY AND FLATTERED !!!!! "

@nerialter seems like you have a big fan😌

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