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Particularly, I have to commend you on how you write Ian; many stories have written him more or less on the babyish side, which might be excusable if the story takes place in the boys' childhood, but not so much if it takes place after the events of the film. I appreciate you remembering that Ian actually grew during that film; even if he still doesn't have everything figured out, that's okay, because now he's more willing to learn and try, and he's become braver and wiser for it.
Wow, thank you!!! I’m still not 100% in tune with these characters so it means a lot to see this. I wanted Ian to seem strong, but still uncertain and still with elements of how he was before the quest. Thanks SO much!!! 💖💖💖
I just read your Onward minific, and I LOVED IT. I think you oughta consider writing more; both Ian and Barley felt in character, and the talk and interactions were so good (THE FEET, AAAAAAHHHHH--)! You don't have to feel pressured to write any multi-chapter fics, but I'd like to see you write some more one-shots if you like--I think you have a talent for it!
Oh my goodness, thank you SO MUCH. It means a crazy lot to see this comment, I am literally on the moon right now. I’d love to start writing more one shots, and don’t be surprised if you see more of them in the future!! Onward really inspired me and I definitely want to continue writing with these characters!!!! ❤️❤️❤️