There Are Other Ways To Create Tension Without Completely Relying On Your Main Character 1)deciding Nothing He Knows Is Important - Blog Posts

warriors text post like why warriors dotc warriors tpb cat rambling WHY SO MUCH FIREHEART KNOWS EVERYTHING BUT OOOO HES TO NOBLE TO BRING UP IMPORTANT FACTS absolutely unhinged plot there are other ways to create tension without completely relying on your main character 1)deciding nothing he knows is important and 2) being fucking stupid and don’t get me started on petty shit like cloudpaw saying that starclan isn’t real?? after reading DOTC before the first arc that is just vibration worthy yes the funnyhaha about it being a cult are pretty accurate in a shit ron of ways and if you assume dotc is the myth rather than an actual retelling or something then it makes sense but i’m assuming dotc is just point blank cannon history so that means their religion is completely real and therefor that cloudpaw is fucking annoying so he’s really taking after his uncle in that way i’m in the middle of the 5th book of tpb series so i’m holding out hope it’s all wrapped up satisfying but i don’t think i’m ever going to be able to read it all the way through again because it is teeth grinding i’ll be adding to this post