“The characters in my novels are my own unrealised possibilities. That is why I am equally fond of them all and equally horrified by them. Each one has crossed a border that I myself have circumvented.”
— Milan Kundera
Rice farmer becomes Emperor and now must balance global politics and the magic that keeps his world together at the same time.
i’ve had quite the break from writeblr. now i’d like to join some wip tag lists, read, and support others who are actively writing!
reblog / like with a comment describing your wip in one sentence (i know it’s hard) or link to your wip so i can check it out!
bonus if it’s fantasy, rivalry-themed, or has some world-building.
holy shit, the archives has gotten to 100 followers!!!
i am beyond grateful, it's so amazing to see so many people pass through, reading the stories, engaging with tag games, and simply existing here. i am so touched and incredibly thankful, this feeling is really beyond compare. you are all amazing <3
i won't tag everyone this time, because that is a lot of people and i haven't slept properly in three weeks, but just know i am so happy you've stopped by, even for just a moment.
thank you so much everyone.
I started Part Three today. Progress still in progress.
Part Three will be particularly hard to write because of how loosey-goosey it is right now, but I'm nailing the plan down. At least the first several thousand words should be planned-out, for now. This part may be very long, like 30-40,000 words.
But it starts off in a particularly dark place. Spoilers ahead, for anyone who cares.
Part Three begins with Iziser reconsidering why he ever trusted Lozerief to begin with, and why she would turn on them. He initially believes its his fault. He also jogs a memory from being back in the only place he ever called "home," and he realizes Lozerief was fighting for him on the sidelines all the while. Why, now, would she go and take his magic?
But Lozerief comes around out of necessity in the end of Part Three. Will I use Lozerief to answer every question? Definitely not, there's still one more Part! And she doesn't have all the answers, only most of them. Including some of the biggest ones that she keeps hidden away from everyone...
Wow, three weeks and ~27,000 words. Time flies.
Today I added double my normal word count to Part Two. I finally started writing the Hero of Life into this nonsense.
I will also provide an Odapir translation for today, used in canon:
Omoi odáo o tavishy ko. Wá áso asiren omoi táotsoi ko. Ymaktaviji tá taviji umak.
The translation is "Arriving in Tavishy. Take care when exiting the train. Ymaktaviji is the next stop."
friendly reminder to everyone that first draft just needs to exist.
it doesn’t need to be good, it just needs to be there. stories go through so many different drafts that nobody is gonna care if your first draft is a little messy.
you can’t edit and clean up something that doesn’t exist, so make it exist!
whether you’re proud of it or not it’s words on the page and that alone deserves praise
Yeah I finally wrote the Izi and Taguchif meet with governor Bunthun scene, which I decided was a lot shorter than I originally thought it might be?
Like, I make it very clear that she's pretty much just a power-hungry warlord who's jumping at the chance to assume complete control over Zenée adn start turning it into an enthostate and consolidate power by knocking out Tolftorrijv and the Middle States/Sedroste.
She's also a hard-ball. She demands control over Ir Nouzonif City only to immediately call back and be like "yeah, actually, just reparations and bordering land is fine."
The Usual Suspects: @oldfashionedidiot@quillswriting
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Gang, I might make a YouTube video about Javanese (from the perspective of an American conlanger) because you can't make this shit up.
(Tl;dr: Javanese register is very complicated and very fascinating. Also, what's up with slack-voiced consonants?)
I didn't write a lot today, but that's okay. Any progress is progress.
I'm still thinking about Izi's speech in Tolftorrijv, and about what he might say. For the three-man band that is the "New Heroes," Izi fills both the Heart and the Leader, and Taguchif overlaps with him in the roles of Lancer and Smart one. I guess that makes Hota the tank, while also fulfilling some leadership roles because they're good at making plans. A well-balanced team.
I now plan on breaking that balance in Part Four, though, splitting them up. It's time for Zeneste to come under new management, anyways.
Groups of thirty days are easier to count than pure groups of seven days, so I will now be implementing an extended base 30 where the first digit will go up to 42 (30 in base 10) and the next digit will count in base 12. A complicated way of approximating the number of years:months:weeks-days I've been writing.
Today I remembered that I'm writing my novel and can do what I want, so I added a pretty direct form of foreshadowing by mentioning that Mostijv was going to find a huge lava monster (named Tev) who would help her rebel against the oppressive, Odapir government and form the White Army.
Today, I fleshed out more of the Western Zenestian languages, but I'm not done with sound changes and grammar yet, so be on the lookout for that.
Also,
they/themConlanging, Historical Linguistics, Worldbuilding, Writing, and Music stuffENG/ESP/CMN aka English/Español/中文(普通话)
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