Today I wrote a lot more of Part Two. It's officially >5,000 words, so the whole thing is >16,000 words now. Nice.
Have another 'bagnin'' line from my alpha-reader:
Sinezo 'na asispijenen sineen Nuwrrite piste, I thought, repeating the words of the chef in my mind. When a rice farmer has become the Emperor.
Mau sispijnen, I finished. Anything can happen.
I don't know if I've already posted this translation or not, but have at it.
My alpha reader pointed out how wonky the pacing is in the first 1,000 words. And how much of an underwriter I am. Maybe once I finish Part Two, or Three, I'll go and review the whole thing.
I still haven't figured out how to deal with the ending of the story yet, but yeah.
Y'know, it's weird how the Egbert house doesn't have a garage or a carport or anything. Surely a paragon of fatherly responsibility like Mr Egbert would know better than to simply leave his car exposed to the elements at all times.
why is france called the hexagon when its abundantly clear that it’s a pentagon
In the context of Meiste, absolutely. It's only now that I realize I've never described the names of the characters, nor how they relate.
Iziser - A borrowing from Classical Zispoel "Izilseor," which is a name found in the Epic of the Hero of Life. It was once used to mean 'one who eats,' and metaphorically extended to 'one who is in love,' then 'one who loves.'
Hotautebz - Hotau is to literally ascend. It's an Old Ytos word for to ascend, plus "tebz" which is another old word for person.
Lozerief - Classical Zispoel for 'life,' definitely supposed to be a pun since she's the Hero of Earth, not life.
Are you the writer who carefully chooses OC names for their meanings, or are you the writer who picks whatever sounds good?
Day 3 (? 4?) of writing my novel and I actually wrote a bunch today! But today I wanted to do something different: present on the most-used conlang in my novel: Ipol.
Ipol ['i.pol] is an Eastern Zenestian language descended from Classical Zispoel by way of Old Ipol. Ipol is actually the word used for the accent spoken in Ir Nouzonif (Ip. I Nusnif [i.'nus.nif]), the capital of Zeneste. Most other dialects, including several languages, are lumped together into Ipol Sinezo (literally: Rice-farmer Ipol.)
Ipol has 16 consonants:
Oral Stops: p, b, t*, d*, k, g*
* t, d > tʃ, dʒ / _ i
**Nasal Stops: **n, m
Fricatives: f, s*, h
* s > ʃ / _ {i, e}
Semivowels: j, w
Liquids: l
Rhotics*: r*, rr
r > /ɹ/ / _ {#, consonant}
r > /ɾ/ / (everywhere else)
rr is the uvular rhotic /ʀ/ found in French
Ipol has 12 vowels.
High: i, ij, u, uw
Mid: e, ee, o, oo (/oː/), oh (/ɔː/)
Low: æ (/æː/), a, aa (/aː/)
Ipol is a (C)(S)V(C)(C)(C) language:
C = any consonant
V = any vowel + r
S = semivowel + r
Excerpt from Part One:
Dr. Este grunted, wrinkling her nose at me. "If you know what's good for you," she rephrased, "you'll stay far, far away from the attic." I gulped. Then, I shook my head. What were a bunch of sticks going to do to me when I wasn't looking. "Why? The Sensonif isn't hiding up there, is she?" I realized that the first stained glass window depicted the three Heroes: the Heroes of Life, Earth, and Language. Then the other window depicted the Hero of Earth killing the Sensonif-a monster said to be fifty-feet high and filled with lava. One touch from her is said to kill a person in seconds. My comment stiffened the Vice President, who stopped. Then, hanging her head, she gripped my shoulder and looked up into my eyes, her gaze lifeless and cold. "Nerte treste ésispijen," she whispered, "Sispoh sispijz la eheempijz." If you care about yourself, you mustn't go into the attic.
Nerte - you.ABS
Treste - you.ACC
sispijen - believe in, care about
Sispoh - must
sispijz - (negative modal verb)
la - in, into, towards
eheempijz - attic (literally house-up, or the top bit of a house)
Given that Dr. Este is the Hero of Earth who sailed around the world with the other two Heroes (of Life and Language,) what do you think is in the attic that she's so worried about?
This idea was too cool not to reblog, especially from my nerdy combinatorics perspective.
Had an idea for a conlang in which instead of pronouns having the standard person/number setup (basically the cartesian product of {1, 2, 3} and {SG, PL}), it uses only the persons of the referents, not caring about how many there are (basically the powerset of {1, 2, 3}).
For example with this you would get a second person pronoun I'll gloss as just 2, but all it means is that the referents are a subset of the audience, independent of whether there are one or many people in that audience. However you'd also get another “second person” pronoun 2.3 which just means the referents include the audience but also people elsewhere (this is definitionally plural).
You'd end up with one third person pronoun (3, can be either plural or singular), two second person pronouns (see above), and four first person pronouns (1 – just singular, 1.3 – exclusive plural, 1.2 – partially inclusive plural, and 1.2.3 – inclusive plural). Additionally you'd also get an empty pronoun ∅, which could be used as an indefinite or impersonal pronoun like “one” or the dummy “it” (perhaps adding an animacy distinction to the system could help here).
It's interesting that the only thing you lose in this system compared to English at least is equivalents to the non-epicene third person singular pronouns “he/she/it”; because both “you” and “they” can refer to singular and plural they map directly to equivalents here. In first and second person you're purely gaining distinctions.
Wow, three weeks and ~27,000 words. Time flies.
Today I added double my normal word count to Part Two. I finally started writing the Hero of Life into this nonsense.
I will also provide an Odapir translation for today, used in canon:
Omoi odáo o tavishy ko. Wá áso asiren omoi táotsoi ko. Ymaktaviji tá taviji umak.
The translation is "Arriving in Tavishy. Take care when exiting the train. Ymaktaviji is the next stop."
My oil painting of Gatorade Arctic Blitz
Four weeks officially! This is so exciting!
Part Three is coming along greatly and I'm still so excited for its completion. As a follow-up to my post earlier today, let's talk about the Great Coalition.
The only change to the flag was the black background on the right being added as symbolism for the Hero of Earth.
With the sole goal of recapturing Ir Nouzonif, Zenée, Tolftorrijv, Atepsi, Ytos, and Itaush all form the Great Coalition.
The White Army and Atepsi stage their armies at the Odapir border. Rebel groups in Pisteeks stage the Tolftijv army, and in Sedrosteks the Zenée army will set up on the border with Ir Nouzonif.
The Hero of Earth revealed that the President stole her technology to put an anti-magic barrier around Ir Nouzonif, so nobody will have their Gift once inside the city limits.
Ytos, Itaush, and the Atepsi navy are sent to guard the Eastern Sea and ensure that the President doesn't escape that way. Everyone knows her goal is to escape with the magic and the Heros of Life and Language's bodies. None of the four remaining Heroes can let that happen.
I may fill out one of these later… be prepared for some spoilers!
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you really believe in that "Han Dynasty" crap?
What?
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