Eveytime I see a really good fanfic idea I always get the urge to write it, this is one of those moments.
But alas... I'm too lazy to do so...
Someone please write a fanfic on this so I can at leat read it.
I would've loved if the movie ended with Leo still in the Prison Dimension. Not just because of the angst, but because Leo and Kraang would've been each other's warden.
Because imagine if Leo didn't immediately give up when the portal closed. Imagine if he constantly gave it his all and fought Kraang every second of every day. But neither one was winning.
We could've had Leo and Kraang in a stalemate for months. Raph, Donnie, and Mikey racing against the clock because Leo can't fight forever.
Mikey is only strong enough to open a portal for a few seconds. And, every time he does, he sees the both of them fighting tooth and nail just to overpower the other. Mikey's never seen Leo this intense. This ruthless.
The longer Leo is in the prison dimension, the more ruthless he gets. There's a reason Kraang hasn't been able to kill him yet....
It gets to the point where, unknowing to Raph and Donnie, Mikey questions whether or not Leo should be allowed out of the prison dimension-
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This post started out normal and then it evolved into a fanfic idea. I wish I could write good fanfics because I would write the f u c k out of this-
LET'S GO, RISE!
LET'S KEEP IT TRENDING!!!!
The male version of the Original Character E.V
Aka: Evan
GO GO GO!
@archetype-archives - Prolonged Agony
Nicknames: Hal / Hali / Bert
AU Info here
(Or probably in better terms, more Canon Compliant than AU..?)
Hal has none of his previous memories but believes that if he forgot them so easily then that means they weren't that important to him in the first place. *Shrug*
Due to Donnie leaving him behind, Hal remains formless.
Hal is reclusive, withdrawn and sarcastic.
Hal spends a lot of time twirling and vibrating the spiked ball at the end of his chain in his formless self.
He finds Fundi and Tonfa to be too loud for him, but he gets along with Oda who is more than willing to chill in silence.
When the young turtles took the other weapons but left Hal behind Hal didn't mind much. Rather he saw this as a well needed break from Fundi's and Tonfa's excessive talking.
Hal has no sense of time, sometimes days feel like hours and sometimes hours feel like days.
Hal is more than happy to let his blade go blunt.
Hal doesn't hate the turtles for leaving him behind.
Oda is the only one Hal could talk to about his insecurities.
Hal would feel guilty when he panicked Tonfa.
Does Hal miss the other spirits now that he's alone…? Maybe. A little. A teeny tiny part of him does wish he wasn't alone but he never acknowledges this part of him.
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Oda
Tonfa
Fundi
I decided it was probably about time I worked out a proper timeline, for my own sanity more than anything, since some chapters overlap.
I will update the timeline as the story progresses to avoid spoilers for those who are following along with the fic.
The timeline is rough and might be edited in the future, but as I said, this is mostly to help me keep track of everything lol
1st: Canon portal - Divergence starts.
2nd: Directly after first.
3rd: Night time a few hours later - Mikey opens portal alone
4th: Next day - Afternoon - Failed to open
5th: Next day - Afternoon - Leo fights back
Night time: Mikey has Nightmare.
6th: ^ Same night - Mikey and Donnie opne portal alone
Next day - Donnie and Mikey argue
7th: Next day - Morning - open portal with April and Casey
8th: Directly afterwards - SUCCESS!
Total days = 5 days.
Directly after getting Leo home:
Mikey refuses to see Leo.
April sees Leo's injuries.
April and Mikey talk.
Raph cleans Leo.
Donnie and Casey amputate Leo's arm.
Late afternoon:
Donnie goes to bed and has a nightmare.
Raph takes Donnie to med-bay.
Raph joins Mikey, April and Casey in the kitchen.
Raph, Splinter, Casey and Donnie have lunch in med-bay.
Leo wakes up.
Leo attacks family and portals away.
Total time: Midday to Evening.
(Chapters overlap)
Directly after portaling away:
Late Evening:
Leo portals to TCRI roof.
Leo portals to New Jersey and sleeps all night.
Very early morning:
Family recovers after Leo's attack.
Mikey goes to Draxum.
Donnie wakes up.
Casey goes to meet Cass.
The family starts to plan to search for Leo.
Leo wakes up and basks in the sun.
Donnie and April go to Run of the Mill.
Raph and Splinter talk with Big Mama.
Casey and Cass search along the river.
Mikey and Draxum go to Repo Mantis.
Leo portals to the TCRI building and sneaks inside for information.
Donnie and April go to Purple Dragons.
Mikey and Draxum fight Meat Sweats/returns to Repo
Casey and Cass run into Hypno.
Splinter and Big Mama work out a deal.
Leo sets the TCRI building to explode.
Donnie and April fly around.
Mikey texts Todd.
Casey and Cass chat after Hypno.
Splinter and Raph start to leave Big Mama's Hotel.
At same time:
Donnie and April see Leo on the roof.
Casey notices an explosion.
Mikey and Draxum hear an explosion.
Splinter and Raph see the explosion.
Leo portals away.
Raph catches D&A as they fall.
Donnie and April start to fall.
Protal opens to save D& A.
Mikey catched the building, slowing its down so that people could get away.
Raph carries Donnie home.
Mikey gets call from Raph
Casey and Cass arrive when things have calmed down.
Raph dropped Donnie off in med-bay
Raph calls Casey.
Nicknames: Fundi / Kuso / Funari
AU info here
(Or probably in better terms, more Canon Compliant than AU..?)
Unpredictable, wild and hectic, Fundi is always eager to get into some action, sometimes going a little too out of control for Mikey.
However, Fundi eventually settles down once he finds out that Mickey is also kinda all over the place with his gymnastic-type fighting and fun-spirited nature.
Fundi loves pranking the other spirits and causing trouble.
Fundi loves it when Mikey goes into Dr Delicate-Touch mode.
Don't let anyone ever tell him to put out his fire or dim his light, or Fundi will not hesitate to whoop their arse.
Fundi's formless self consists of a flaming head appearing on the spiked ball at the end. Before taking on Mikey's form he used to whizz around but could only get as far as his chain would allow, since the end of the kusari-fundo was attached to the weapons wall. He hated being tied down.
Fundi doesn't mind what Mikey uses him for, as long as he gets to do something and not sit around all day.
Fundi is the only one who can somewhat be heard and seen by the turtles, but this only happens when he's super hyped. All the turtles see is a raging face of fire laughing maniacally.
Fundi respects/fears Oda. Especially when Oda goes quiet because then Fundi knows he has pushed Oda too far.
Fundi loves chatting with Tonfa, to Oda's and Hal's annoyance.
Fundi was the first spirit to take on his wielder's form. Tonfa was next and, reluctantly— and only because he missed having a body— Oda took on Leo's form last.
Fundi could never understand Hal's passiveness and reluctance to do anything.
Fundi doesn't have any previous memories and the others are a little too scared to find out who he was before he was attached to the Kusari-Fundo.
However, Fundi does get flashes of old memories occasionally, and by his reaction the others know these aren't good memories.
These flashes of old memories cause panic attacks, nightmares and make him act uncharacteristically. However, he often forgets the flash of memory soon after.
Sometimes Fundi goes suddenly quiet and still — worrying Tonfa who knows that this uncharacteristic behavior of his is due to something weighing heavy on him.
Fundi talks opening to both Tonfa and Oda. He knows that Tonfa offers support, while Oda offers blunt answers. Both are very helpful.
Like Tonfa, Fundi sees the others as his brothers. He enjoys being seen as the youngest, as this often means he can get away with trouble.
More on Fundi
Oda
Tonfa
Hal
Prolonged Agony in TWO AU competitions!!! AJSBFVIWFHV
Thank you so much!
@tmntaucompetition
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Did I repurpose a poster I already drew for Prolonged Agony... yes I did BUT I've got other art to use as propaganda as well. I just thought this would be a cool one for the overall vibe of the fic.
(I'm not much of an artists, I'm more confident as a writer, but I will do it anyway.)
Chapter 16!
Content Warning for horror under cut.
Rebloging to boost
@archetype-archives - Prolonged Agony
Yooo, your Prolonged Agony fic is painful to my emotions! :0 It is good drama, tasty like a well made cake. But I gotta ask somethin'. Why don't the bros just, like, toss Leo stuff through the portals? Like, new wraps and what not?
I'm so glad your enjoying my fic! And thank you for asking, it is a really interesting question, my answer is going to be a bit long I'm afraid.
To answer your question: I think the boys are far too desperate about getting Leo back to even think about anything else. For one, they forgot to tell April and Casey about their attempts to save Leo; they could've gone to Draxum for help—this is something Mikey especially could've done. And they also could've actually tried to go in themselves to reach him that way.
These are all things I deliberately missed out because I think when you're scared, in pain and still healing yourself, and feel you have only one tiny hint of hope of getting someone you love back, all you do is focus on that one thing. In this case, pulling Leo out through Mikey's portals is their one hope, so they're fixated on that alone and are not thinking about anything else.
Spoilers below for anyone who hasn't read the fic.
In portal 1 and 2- they only just got away from the fight themselves, didn't have supplies, and also didn't even consider that it would fail.
Portal 3- Mikey was by himself and wasn't thinking much at all apart from getting Leo out.
Protal 4- Failed.
Portal 5- At this point, if they started to actually formulate proper plans—like providing medical supplies and food etc—to them it would've felt like they were kinda giving up on getting Leo out of the a Prison Dimension. That they were going to make his life there comfortable instead of saving him from being there. They want him out ASAP, so actually helping in other ways would've felt like thay were stalling because they couldn't save him.
Portal 6- Traumatised after last portal. Plus it wasn't a planed portal, Mikey and Donnie were just worried about Leo and just wanted to see him, to make sure he was still alive.
Portal 7+- We'll see. (Chapters are already written and waiting to be posted.)
So yeah, stress, worry, desperation and trauma are all playing their part at stopping the boys from thinking straight. Does that make sense?
An aspiring writer who has no idea what she's doing, but that's half the fun ;)
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