One of the first stories I posted on wattpad.
On there I'm at 71 short horror stories right now, I'm not sure if I will ever post all of the stories I wrote before on tumblr, but here is one.
Word count: 1105
TW: Psychological horror
I look up at the old school building, just for a second I see the cracks. The surrounding plants around it have started growing inside. Some of the windows are broken.
The broken bell goes off and it almost sounds like a muffled scream.
I quickly go inside.
Inside the right classroom I take a seat at my table, it is a scratched old table with graffiti, not done by me.
Slowly the classroom fills with my 'classmates', these dolls with keys in their backs. They enter with their rattling keys and stiff movements. Opening and closing their wooden mouths, like they are talking to one another. I can't hear them, but I'm not interested anyway.
Lastly, the 'teacher' enters leaving its books on the desk and 'starting the lesson'.
I don't care to listen to the clacking of its mouth. It doesn't matter anyway, ignoring is for the best and pretending.
At some point the 'teacher' points at me and stops.
Carefully I stand and walk towards it, followed by the empty stares of the other painted wooden faces.
It is quiet.
It has always been quiet.
My 'teacher' seems to have stopped working, so I stand behind it and gently turn it's key until it starts working again.
Then just as quietly as before, I return to my seat.
I stare out of the window, without actually observing what is happening. Well nothing is happening really. Nothing ever is.
Just nature taking over this school, this empty building.
Even during break I just stare outside, while those dolls are clacking to each other.
If I go anywhere the dolls will be mean to me, they will sometimes throw things at me or clack mean things about me. So it is better just to remain in one place. They are defective.
I return home without looking back.
I live in an old dollhouse, it's almost completely empty and always silent.
I love the silence.
I enjoy the emptiness.
The rest of the house is just like the city with plants growing everywhere, inside and outside the buildings.
All buildings are slowly breaking apart and I just ignore it.
It's all fake anyway.
It's all useless anyway.
Nothing matters here, just that I do what I have to do and return 'home'.
The next day when I go to 'school', something strange happens.
The 'teacher' introduces a new 'classmate', another doll.
With a key and a painted face, just like any other.
It takes the empty seat next to me.
The new student seems to try to get my attention, but I just start doodling in my workbooks. Pretending I don't see or hear her.
The day passes by quite quickly, and I return to my old dollhouse.
I walk up the creaking stairs and past the rotting woodwork.
In my room I stare out of the hole in the roof, at the dark, starless abyss, most people call the sky.
And just like always, another day has passed.
The next day I do the same as all the previous days.
Stare out of the window, turn a key and return to my seat.
Then lunch comes around.
The new student is getting more annoying.
It has even started jumping in front of me to get my attention, which made the other dolls clack their mouths like they were laughing.
It's becoming more and more difficult.
Then suddenly it locks it's wooden hands around my wrist.
No matter how hard I struggle, It won't let me go.
Then it started walking and I am forced to follow.
We go up to the rooftop.
"I need you to listen." The voice coming out of the doll sounds vaguely human.
While blocking the only exit, it let's go of my wrist.
What does this thing want from me? None of them ever try to contact me as long as I ignore them, why does this one do?
The new student puts a hand under its chin, then a short click could be heard.
She removes her face, I guess she was wearing a mask.
I look at her face, her nose, her eyes, her eyebrows... Everything about her looks too familiar.
She looks like...
me...
Why does she look like me?
"I need to speak with you, please listen." She pleads with my voice.
I don't like where this is going and I take a step back. She doesn't seem to mind though.
"I need you to start looking around you and not ignore everything."
I remain silent.
"Remember what the doctor told us, about the ignoring of bullies and unfortunate situations? Well he was wrong."
I stay quiet and stare past her at the door, so close yet so far away. I just want to ignore her and continue my day.
"You can't ignore everything, you've already done that too much. You need help. You need to tell others about what's going on and learn not to just take everything."
So annoying.
"I don't care... I can just ignore it." I mumble to myself.
"Please don't." the other me pleads, her eyes starting to look red and watery.
I don't answer and take a few steps closer to the door.
"No you can't leave!" She yells.
I glare at her: "You're not supposed to exist. The doctor wasn't the only one who told me to just ignore it. Everything is better this way."
Defeated, she moves aside, her head hanging down: "S-so it has already gone this far... I see, it really is too late."
In silence I continue towards the door.
As my hand brushes the door handle she suddenly seems to want to give it one more try: "This whole city will collapse on top of us! It will kill us!"
"Then let it collapse. I can't go back to the time, when I still observed, when I still listened and I still felt everything. That time was hell. It was worse than death."
"But it is not too late. You can still get the help you need, before your world will collapse!"
"I don't want it."
I shove her aside and return to class.
The classroom looks more in disrepair than before we left, but I ignore it.
As school continues on, more cracks start appearing and I haven't seen the other me since I left her.
She probably won't return.
She must have left.
Given up entirely.
Well it's not like she could change my mind or anything.
She has no power over this place, unlike me.
I don't want to leave this place.
Yes, it's empty and it's lonely.
It might all be breaking apart, but this is my only safe haven. My own place of peace and quiet.
My own safe little world.
When the teacher stops working while pointing it's finger at me again, I turn the key on his back and return to my seat.
See, it all works perfectly fine.
I'm perfectly fine.
Nothing is wrong.
As long as I just ignore it all
And then at last the cracked walls can't hold the ceiling anymore.
I can hear its creaking.
But like always... I just ignore it.
A short horror story I wrote.
If you enjoy it, I have a wattpad account with more of them:
https://www.wattpad.com/user/Ardenla
TW: Gore, depression & psychological horror
Perhaps it's just my world, but it might also be yours.
Everyone here wears a mask.
A real mask, maybe the one given from the beginning or one changed or even stolen.
Our masks decide everything for us: our emotions, jobs, school, friends, relationships, chances in life and even crimes. Our whole identity really.
Without our masks, we can't live since there isn't really anything underneath it.
We all get our first mask just after birth after all.
My life has always been rather uneventful, boring even. Oh how much I wished to be another. Everything about me has been determined from the start, written in stone, from beginning to end.
So I am done.
I don't want to continue this miserable life.
I stare up to face the sky, silently cursing its ways. Raindrops drip from my mask, falling down, making circles in the puddles beneath me.
The sudden sound of a door creaking behind me, awakens me from my self-pity and dark thoughts.
Quickly I turn to see who just invaded my space.
"Ah, sorry." A man softly mutters when he sees me: "I'm sorry for intruding."
I look at him slightly annoyed. Why can't people just leave me alone?
He looks a bit gloomy, but I must look worse.
From his mask I can see that he is one of the people born more fortunate, a higher class.
How can someone like that-
"Are you also bored?"
I sigh, it must have been written all over my mask.
But I ignore him.
Then he asks me a question, so very strange.
"Do you want to swap?"
Swap? Is his life that bad?
"Isn't that dangerous?" I carefully ask.
"If we do it quickly, no." he answers calmly.
"But it is illegal, right?!"
"Yes, but no one will notice."
It is quiet for a bit, only the sound of the rain surrounds us, soaks us.
I am the one who breaks the silence first: "Before we do, tell me about yourself! I won't make a deal without knowing what I might be up against."
"Then I will." He says with a sad smile and tells me his story.
He was born into a wealthy family, but wanted to leave to understand the rest of the world. To have the freedom to travel and not be stuck to the rules of the rich.
After he told his, I told mine.
I was born in a 'normal' family, but want a life less boring and not bound by the rules of the normal. I want to see things from another side, and a more meaningful one.
It was as if some deity had made us for this moment.
After this conversation we knew what had to happen, we counted to five and then quickly swapped our masks.
I was him, he was me.
His memories flooded mine, my memories flooded his.
He had told the truth, I had told the truth.
Both happier, we shook hands and left the building.
He went to the place I came from, I to the place he came from.
I lived a happy life, one where all wishes could be granted by money. One where I was very important.
No one noticed that I wasn't the original, but the mask held the most power, so I really must have looked like him. No, I really was him.
After a couple of years I suddenly found myself... bored.
Bored of the parties.
Bored of the people.
Bored of this way of living.
After being bored for a while, I took a walk in a park and found a man sleeping on a bench.
I asked him about his life and he told me a wonderful story of his travels, but also the tragic moments that led him to this life.
Then I asked him the question that was asked to me years prior.
"Do you want to swap?"
Strangely enough he refused, wanting to keep his mistakes and dreams for himself.
Something strange happened, I felt angry with the man's answer and decided to just take his mask, without swapping.
The man died right in front of me, no I was him and I didn't die. Neither did the man born rich, his mask was in my hand.
It didn't take long for me to get bored of this life and I took another mask.
And another.
And another.
And another.
And another.
I lived life as all the masks I could get my hands on and lived old and young lives. I lived as any gender and in any condition.
Sick and healthy.
Good and bad.
I had gotten myself a secret room, where I kept the mask I didn't use often. Surprisingly there aren't that many that freely wanted to swap with me, but the first hadn't stayed the last either.
One day I sat in my secret room and looked at my trophies, my masks.
A loud knock sounded on the door.
I swapped my mask for a quiet person, but that didn't stop the outsiders getting in.
They broke down the door, so I put on another mask of an innocent.
It was the police, they had found my hideout. They didn't seem to understand why I enjoyed what I did. Angry at me and disgusted at the masks they took me with them.
How could they be so disgusted, all those people were wonderful and lived wonderful lives.
All unique, all special.
All beautiful stories.
Arriving at the prison I had gotten the name: 'The masked killer'.
Why? I hadn't killed anyone. All of them were alive as long as I wore their masks. I was them, they were me.
Then one day someone wanted to speak to me.
I sat in a room, chained to make sure I didn't do anything.
It took a few minutes for my guest to come.
When the door opened, I recognized the person immediately.
It was me.
Well the one with my original mask.
So, he kept it.
Me?
I?
He?
He sat on the other side of the interrogation table and looked at me with sorrowfilled eyes.
"What the hell have you become?" He whispered.
"You and many others."
"Why have you killed them?"
"I didn't, they are still alive." I smiled.
He shook his head: "No, you killed them."
I laughed at him.
Doesn't he know better?
Across me sits the one whom I once swapped with, he seemed unhappy with his life, with his mask.
The Masked Killer.
I was the same, so the swap seemed like a good idea, but I see now that I couldn't be any more in the wrong.
He doesn't seem to know that I am here to end him.
With this creepy grin he stares at me, unknowing of the chaos he has created nor that of the lives he ended.
His hands are bound and he seems distracted.
Now is my chance!
Almost at the same speed as that of an attacking snake I swipe the mask of his face.
.
.
.
Underneath is not like it is supposed to be, something horrible is in the place where nothing should be.
Something dangerous.
The man on the other side of the table laughs maniacally.
Cold sweat runs down my back.
"It seems that sometimes these masks protect the world from what's underneath it."
Here's the most recent short horror story I wrote:)
Word count: 772
TW: Gore
Many years ago the harsh summer heat had killed most of the crops needed to feed a small town.
All were coloured brown and mushy even before being picked.
Autumn was quickly approaching and the people had to come up with a solution in order to save up enough to be able to live through the soon to arrive winter.
The town had gathered to speak of the matter and to find a possible solution.
"Maybe we should ask the other towns for help." One of the men offered.
"No, their crops have all perished as well. If not they must have the devil in their grounds." Another shouted, refuting the other.
Idea after idea was being turned down with refutes like 'too dangerous' or 'against all that is holy' or 'just plain stupid'.
This conversation that existed mostly of panicked yelling continued on for a bit, almost turning into a fight.
"Maybe we should try the sea?" A young child offered, it was a wonder that they were even heard. Their tiny voice was so soft, yet somehow still being audible to the people.
The room turned silent.
Perhaps it was the idea itself that had spoken the loudest, attracting everyone's attention.
The town usually fished during winter, but perhaps this was their only option right now.
Without food, they just wouldn't last.
And thus the decision was made.
All the capable men of the village would be sent out with the few ships they had, one to fish and another to travel further.
It didn't take long before departure.
Women and children stayed behind and wished the travellers 'See you soon'.
One of the families that was split that day was that of the shoemakers. The husband and oldest son went on the ship, while the wife and four other children stayed behind in the village.
The oldest son was about fourteen, back then seen almost as a grown-up and had to help at the ship like everyone else.
Their ship was the one traveling further.
At first all seemed to be going well.
For food they fished and in their first catch, the shoemaker found a beautiful seashell. He immediately knew that he wanted to give it to his wife when he would return, so he hid it in his pockets.
A couple of days went by and then it all went wrong.
A storm had caught the ship and its crew before they could flee.
Waves as high as castle towers threw themselves at the ship, causing the ship to make an eerie hollow sound at first and then the sound of something breaking could be heard.
One wave after another crashed the ship further, making it move sideways, causing the big wooden construct to lie down in the water.
The panicking crew ran around, tumbling, screaming.
The shoemaker dropped the shell he had found and tried to jump after it.
Just in time he caught it from falling off, but a piece of splintered wood impaled him and dragged him into the hungry ocean.
He was not the only one to succumb to this fate.
On the golden beach the shoemaker's wife looked towards the dark clouds in the distance.
Are they okay? She wondered, would the crew come back all right with a solution for the winter?
The woman stopped walking, while the wind gently blew her hair and skirt into a dance.
She bowed down, something in the cold, wet sand had taken her attention.
Something stuck out.
It was a beautiful seashell, one foreign to the village people.
It glistened welcoming in the sunlight, its smooth service almost seemed to reflect herself back to her like a mirror would.
There was just something soothing about the object lying before her.
The woman reached down for the shell and felt the cold touch her fingers, she was going to take this with her.
Would the sea take it back if she didn't take it?
Or would another be captured by its beauty and take it with them?
The shell had appeared before her and only her, so it's hers now.
Arriving back home she placed it above the fireplace in the living room.
As she put it down, she heard something strange.
Was it the rain?
She quickly glanced outside to the darker growing sky, yet no drop of water had shown itself.
Was that the sound of wood breaking?
The woman looked around, but found nothing breaking. Neither by child nor wind.
The dark clouds started to swallow the land.
The woman picked the shell up again.
The shell was making the sounds.
She held it next to her ear.
At first she heard nothing.
But then she heard the voice of her husband.
"Dearest, the ship went down." He spoke as if he was in the freezing cold.
"Our son is still at sea."
"If not saved quickly, he too will join the rest of us."
The most recent short story I wrote.
I wouldn't call it horror, but to some it might be seen as frightening or dark. Personally I find it to be closer to fantasy.
Word count: 2298
This place, if I can call it that, feels like the strangest place I’ve ever been.
It’s so very cold here, although that might also just be my own body temperature, coming from within me. Am I cooling down this place? Though there still remains the slight chance of me being wrong about everything.
It’s far too dark to see, pitch black, darker than any place I’ve ever been .
Darker than the most cloudy of nights.
Darker than my room with the curtains closed at night.
I quietly wonder if I’m still asleep after all and decide to take a step forward to test this theory.
Unexpectedly I drop onto an unfamiliar floor.
So… I was standing when I awoke?
Not lying down?
With my hands I blindly scan the texture of the floor.
It’s colder than the air, my fingers run over something that feels like old tiles.
Damnit, why does it have to be so dark in here? If I could just see, I could have avoided falling.
Then the real question hits me: How the hell did I get here?!
Abduction?
I don’t remember a thing.
A nightmare?
It’s too real for that.
Should I wait? Would that be better? Maybe someone will rescue me.
Or perhaps this is a dream in which I must first die to wake up again?
But then I would need to get up and walk around…
After a couple of minutes of contemplating my choices, I finally decide that it’s time to get up again.
Almost embarrassingly childlike I stumble around in the dark.
Tripping over my own feet and at times an alien object, I finally reach something that could possibly be a wall.
Gently running my hands around me, I find another wall that seems to be made of something like metal bars, like those inside a prison cell. Too tight too escape from.
Still following this one might bring me to the exit.
I use the cold, rusty bars in order to move around, they feel old.
Taking one after another I carefully make my way forward.
Had this been a prison at some time? I question myself in silence.
Right, the silence.
This place seems to almost be completely without sound.
No noise of the wind, not even a little bit. Though I guess if I really want to hear it, I can just wave my arms around really quickly and create something like it.
Furthermore, there are no voices, no breathing from any other possible creature within this place.
I wonder if this might be normal or abnormal here, though both fill me with a sense of fear.
I feel my way out of the room, it seems like I’ve not been imprisoned.
Still I don’t feel any relief, because it seems to be terribly dark everywhere around me.
I find myself in what I believe to be a hallway, the walls stretch out always further than I anticipate and are made of a different kind of stone from the walls inside the cell.
I’m starting to lose hope and am just able to stop myself from panicking.
I don’t think I will get out of here.
And perhaps that might be for the best.
My thoughts turn darker than wherever I am, like it’s trying to swallow me whole. Dragging me deeper down with each desperate escape I try to make.
Perhaps I’ve been eaten by some kind of giant creature…?
If it was a creature, it would probably still be warm.
Finally I decide it’s enough and sit down hopelessly on the floor.
Yet no tears leave my eyes, they’re useless anyway.
I sit.
I wait.
I pluck my clothes, until it tires me.
I wait.
My body has now almost completely turned as cold as the floor.
My thoughts, only turning darker and darker.
I close my eyes. Well I’m not sure, perhaps they’re still open. It’s too dark to see.
I wait.
Suddenly something wakes me up as it tumbles over me. Something moving.
“Ouch.” I say even though it doesn’t hurt.
“Oh my gosh, I’m so, so sorry!” The voice breaking the silence startles me.
Echoing, I can make out that the voice most likely belongs to a girl in her late teens.
“Wait, someone else is here?” She asks frightened: “I thought I was all alone.”
“I thought so too, but I guess that’s not the case.” I answer as calmly as possible.
I feel a warm hand helping me stand back on my own feet.
“You’re so cold.” The girl whispers: “How long have you been sitting here?”
I shrug: “No idea.”
I hear her hair moving, most likely she’s turning her head to face me.
And then, I finally see something.
In the eyes of the girl, I spot what seem to be two little flames.
Two blue dancing little flames.
Two little flames that seem to have not lost hope.
Two little flames that want to escape this darkness and return back to the world of light.
“What’s going on with your eyes?” I ask without thinking.
“What do you mean?” She asks surprised.
“It’s like there’s fire coming out of them.”
She giggles: “Yeah sure, the chances of you starting to see things thanks to lying on this cold floor for so long, is pretty damn high.”
Ignoring her I ask: “Do you happen to know a way out?”
“What do you think? I almost can’t see a thing.”
“Almost?”
“Yeah, sometimes only a wall when it’s near and of course my own hands.”
I move my hands, but don’t see them. I can’t see the walls either.
“Really?” I ask.
Could it be that she’s somehow able to see more in this darkness?
She giggles again: “You really can’t see anything? You should be able to see your own hands at least.”
“No…” I hesitatingly answer, shaking my head: “But I can see your eyes.”
“That’s weird, maybe you're imagining it?” It’s clear as day that she’s not taking me seriously.
Ignoring her tone I ask: “Should we try to get out together?”
“Yes please, I’m super glad I’m not alone anymore.” I can hear a sense of fear in her voice, she seems desperately trying to hide.
The girl takes my hand, probably that there’s no way I would be able to find her once lost.
I mumble a thanks and we start walking.
“Are we inside some kind of labyrinth?” The girl complains as we find another wall.
“That might just be the case.” I answer now slightly annoyed by the girl.
“You know, it would help if you weren’t so cold all the time.”
“Sorry.” I apologize. I’ve been told this many times before. That I should act warmer if I want to have a good life. Yet, I’ve found it to be rather difficult. I’ve known what it’s like to be too warm and kind. You often get used by others.
I’ve learned my lesson and cut people off, blocked them away from me. It’s safer that way.
Feeling around with my free hand I suddenly notice a crack inside a wall.
“Hey, could you check this out?” I ask the girl.
“Sure.” In my mind she shrugs as she answers, perhaps she really did it, perhaps she didn’t.
“I think… we can break this down.” She whispers as she lets go of my hand.
I can hear her rummaging around, most likely taking out loose bricks.
“Do be careful that it won’t fall on us.” I warn her.
“Leave it to me, I can see it… though slightly. I believe this should be able to be opened up.”
I take a step back and let her handle it.
She takes out brick after brick.
“I think it’s big enough for both of us to fit through now.” She finally whispers.
She takes my hand again and leads me through the narrow hole in the wall and we enter a new place.
Probably the same as the one before.
“Is this just like the rest?” I ask.
She takes me further away from the hole and touches another wall: “Yeah, we’re still stuck in this labyrinth.”
Suddenly I spot something out of the corner of my eye and quickly take the girl further back, to the other side, away from whatever that is.
“What’s wrong?” She asks slightly frightened.
“I think… someone is there.” I whisper to her.
I see two large flames welling up in the distance.
“Are you sure?” The girl asks.
I nod, but of course she won’t be able to see that.
Carefully I try to lead the girl further back, but am only greeted by a cold wall against my back.
Too late.
The flames look our way.
At first I believe to hear something crackle, only to realise that it’s laughing. Laughing of an old woman.
“You don’t have to hide for me, dear girls.” She laughs in a sweet voice: “I may be old, but my eyes can still see very well.”
I can feel the girl trembling: “How… how is it possible for you to see us?”
“What do you mean, dear child? There is enough light to see everything.”
“No, that’s not true… it’s pitch black, I can barely spot my arms before me.”
Still holding onto each other we slowly walk towards the older woman with her flaming eyes.
Her voice turns to me and so do her flames.
“Can you two really not see anything?”
The girl answers for me: “She can’t, I can just see a little.”
“Do you know a way out?” I ask the older woman.
I see her flames moving, almost as if shaking her head: “No, unfortunately not. Though I believe that now that we’re not alone anymore, we will find a way out much easier.”
I guess she isn’t the one who has brought us here, if it even was someone.
“Let me come with you, we might find our way out quicker.”
I look at her flames and nod.
“My child, how were you able to see me, if you can’t see anything else?” The old woman asks questioningly.
Before I can answer, the girl does it for me: “She keeps saying that she sees the flames in other’s eyes. Still it’s probably just-“
“So you can see the flames of other people’s souls?” The older woman doesn’t allow the girl to continue.
I shrug: “I don’t know… it’s probably just all in my head. I’ve never seen anything like that in my ordinary life outside of this place.”
“Here’s a mirror. Can you hold it by yourself?” The old woman shoves a cold and heavy object in my hands, almost having me slip it out of my hands. Hurting my fingers to keep it steady.
I try to look at it, but there is no reflection of my own flames, if I even have them.
“Well, do you see them?” the lady asks, way too enthusiastic.
I shake my head and answer with a plain: “No.”
Both of them take a stand next to me, probably looking in the mirror.
Then I see something inside of it.
The flames.
Their flames.
So… I don’t have them?
Could it be that… I’m soulless?
“So? What do you see?”
“I see nothing, but the reflection of yours.” I answer honestly.
“That’s unfortunate.” The woman says, sounding deep in thought: “Could it be… that you had a not so fortunate life?”
As I remain quiet, she apologises: “I’m sorry, it’s not my place to ask such questions. But if you need someone to listen to you, I’m more than willing to help you lighten that burden of yours.”
“Thanks.” I say, though slightly annoyed. I don’t like people poking into my problems.
The old woman leads us through the hallways, making sure, neither I nor the girl end up falling over something.
“You two should be thankful that you can’t truly see this place. Something horrible has taken place here.”
“I see.” I answer coolly.
“Don’t be like that!” The girl starts panicking.
The woman laughs joylessly: “I’m sorry, I’m sorry.”
“Why did you have to say that? Now I can only imagine all the shapes as dead bodies.”
The woman remains quiet.
So that must be the case.
Still, there don’t seem to be enough to cover the entire floor. Since the older lady is able to guide us through them so well.
“Gosh, this seems to be a dead end.” The woman sighs.
“Really?! I don’t want to go back there!” The girl cries out.
Carefully I let go of the girl’s hand, something has taken my attention.
There is something shining dimly straight ahead of me, it’s unlike the flames of my two companions.
Somehow friendly and familiar.
“What’s over there?” I ask while straying away from the others.
“You shouldn’t go there!” The girl calls out, but even though her voice sounds terrified, I don’t listen.
I feel like the light is calling me.
“My child! You shouldn’t venture there!” The old woman calls out to me, her ancient voice trembling in anguish: “Terrible things have happened there!”.
But I ignore her as well.
I feel myself walking into something like a puddle, too thick to be water, but I decide not to think about it.
The light is getting closer and closer, brighter and brighter.
“Ma’am, please get back here!”
“You’ll hurt yourself if you continue!”
I feel something sharp digging itself into my right leg.
Quickly I kneel down to push whatever it is away, but it starts digging deeper into it.
It hurts.
It hurts so fucking much!
Every time I try to reach it, my hands seem to slip away, whatever I’m standing in is way too thick to be just water.
Don’t think about it.
Don’t think about it!!!
As I’m finally able to take out whatever it is, I notice that little lights are dropping down.
I try to look at what I believe to be up, only to find out that the small lights are coming from me.
I smirk, I guess I’m not soulless after all.
I hear both women behind me yell at me to return, screaming for the fear I might get hurt or lose my life.
I don’t pay it any attention and continue.
The light I see behind that door.
My own tears seem to be leading me there as well, dropping quietly without sound, slowly they turn dark like everything around me, just showing small pieces of my path.
I reach out my arm for the light.
But instead of holding something warm, it’s something cold.
It’s an old door handle.
Very, very old. Something I would expect to find inside an ancient castle.
As I hold it, all the light fades once more and I open the door.
A short horror story I wrote last year, I'm surprised to find out I hadn't posted it here before.
Word count: 1848
TW: psychological horror
The sound of the gentle tapping of the rain on my window awakens me.
Just by glancing over at the window I can see the dark autumn sky even though it must still be around noon.
Slowly I get up from the couch, I must have dozed off for a minute or so.
I walk over to my kitchen to see if there is anything to eat.
Opening all the cabinets and finally the freezer, I discover that I'm all out of food.
Damn, I forgot, it's grocery day today... and I still have to go out with this shitty weather.
Still I ready myself to go outside, I take my dark green raincoat and a bag.
I put on my shoes and finally leave, locking the door behind me, walking towards the nearest bus stop.
I know I'm being lazy, walking that distance can be done in about half an hour, but still this weather seems to only be getting worse.
As I turn around to face the weather I feel the cool breeze going through my coat and the water gliding off my face.
A greeting from the outside, a cold and wet greeting.
Quickly I make a run for the bus stop.
Each time one of my feet hit the middle of a puddle, the water flies around me, making me feel like a little kid playing in the rain.
It takes a couple of minutes for me to reach the small square hut, known locally as the bus stop.
I live in the middle of nowhere anyway.
As I finally lay eyes on it I almost dive for cover under the roof.
I know it doesn't really matter, I'm already soaked, but still, it brings me comfort.
Immediately I notice that I'm not alone.
Someone else is standing beside me.
Most likely also waiting for the bus to come.
Their face is obscured by their coat... Their dark green coat.
Did he get it at the same store as me?
For a while we awkwardly stand next to each other, not speaking a word, or perhaps letting the rain itself do the talking.
Cold seconds pass slowly and eventually I can't take it anymore.
"So... uhh... the weather is pretty bad, éh?"
I know the question is bad, small talk is not everyone's favorite, but worse than that, I don't get a response at all.
And we are back at listening to the rain and just standing next to one another, but this one more awkwardly than before.
The person next to me didn't show any sign of even hearing me.
Finally the bus arrives and I get on.
I look back, but the person behind me doesn't seem to be moving in the slightest.
Does he even breathe? I really can't tell.
"Hey man? Didn't you need to take the bus too?" I call over to him, gesturing that he can go in, but again he doesn't move at all.
I shake my head and then turn it towards the bus driver.
Unlike the usual uniform, they seem to be wearing another dark green raincoat. Almost exactly like mine, or perhaps it's completely the same...
I show the chauffeur my ticket, but he doesn't move a muscle.
Quietly I turn around to look further inside the vehicle.
It's almost completely empty, except for a few strangers dressed with the same dark green jacket.
For a moment I hesitate.
Do I really want to be on this bus?
But then the squeaking doors behind me close, cutting off my only escape route.
Obediently I take a seat, trying not to look around me and just stare out of the window.
When the bus finally comes to a halt at my stop I get out as fast as I can.
Strangely enough this is the first stop it made, no one got on and no one got off.
As I step outside, I am greeted by more rain, falling down even heavier than before.
Quickly I race towards the store and feel a sense of relief wash over me as I finally reach the entrance and hear the familiar chime.
The bright light hurts my eyes, it's a lot brighter than outside after all.
I let out a shivering sigh from the cold. It might be less warm here than outside, or perhaps it's because of how wet my clothes have gotten.
The water has gone right through my coat after all.
I notice my breath leaving my mouth in small clouds and rub my hands together for some warmth.
I guess it must be cold here after all.
Carefully I look around, it seems that I'm the only customer inside the store.
I should probably hurry up, I'm not sure if there will be many buses leaving after I'm done with shopping.
I take a shopping cart and start to move around the store.
Taking with me things for breakfast, things for lunch, things for dinner and of course some snacks.
Eventually I find myself next to an aisle that's entirely empty.
"How strange..." I mutter to myself: "I was sure these were filled just last week..."
I take a few steps back, towards the fridges where they keep milk and stuff.
Something about it seems off.
Carefully I take a closer look.
It looks like all the cartons of milk from the highest shelf to the lowest have all been cut in half in a straight row.
No, cut isn't the word.
More like half of it has been melted off.
The contents are spilled all over the floor.
As I inspect the next row, I see that these all have half-faded packaging.
I look up to find a huge dark stain on the ceiling above it, water is slowly dripping down onto those products and the floor.
It's almost as if the rain is washing it all away.
Quickly I leave for the check-out and find another one behind the counter.
A person, dressed with the same raincoat as mine, somehow still with a faded nametag on their chest, too faded to read.
Honestly it looks a bit silly.
Their hood is up and they look down, causing me to be unable to see their face just like with the others before.
I greet the 'worker' like normal even though he doesn't move at all and I hand them the money, which they don't take either, so I place it before them.
"Keep the change." I say, trying to joke away the fear I feel inside.
That is the truth after all.
I'm scared.
I'm terrified.
I'm terrified, but I don't want to let it show.
Everything about this day has been strange.
Normally I don't fall asleep during the day, normally I don't take the bus to the store, normally I don't stand waiting for a bus with a stranger...
Then there's the fact I haven't seen a single familiar face since I woke up. Why isn't anyone here when usually this store is filled with people I know?
I pick up the pace, too scared to look behind me.
What if they did move?
What if they did move, but only if I wasn't facing them.
What if they were right behind me, staring at me from underneath those hoods?
What if they wanted to do something to me?
I shake my head and enter the rainy and windy outside world again.
The rainfall has gotten even heavier.
I can barely keep my eyes open from all the water pouring down, only able to open them again as I blindly enter the bus stop.
This time I'm alone.
Though I doubt if that really is the case.
I mean, what if they're watching?
While waiting for the bus to come I look at my sleeve.
The dark green fabric has been completely soaked.
Why is it that we all wear the same? I think to myself.
Where and when did I even buy such an ugly thing?
I have another one, a blue one... right?
No, now that I think about it I'm not so sure.
This rain... it's making it difficult to remember.
The bus finally arrives for me to go home again.
Trying to avoid the spats coming from the sky, but failing, I enter the vehicle.
It's cold here too.
Like in the store small clouds leave my shivering mouth.
I look at the driver.
It's one of them again.
Or am I supposed to be one of them?
My coat shows our resemblance.
My hood is still up too.
I take it off and smile at the driver.
"Good afternoon sir, bad weather we're having, don't we?"
Suddenly I hear something moving in the back of the bus.
Multiple people dressed like me are sitting there, more than before.
All of them seem to stare at me from underneath their dark hoods.
I smile at them too, but now that I'm looking at them too they have stopped moving again completely.
The door behind me closes and I take a seat.
Everything feels so unwelcoming, it makes me feel a bit sad.
Looking outside of the window I appreciate the beautifully dreary scenery from my home.
It looks like the water levels have been rising far.
Much further than it normally would.
Almost like the water is trying to swallow it all up.
I'm glad I live up high.
We drive past a small cliff.
I look down at the water through the window.
The rain is still relentlessly hitting the windows, coming down unforgivingly at the windows, making me scared that it could shatter them any moment.
It has become a droning noise overtaking any thought I might have had as suddenly, I feel light.
Everything starts feels like going in hyper speed.
The bus has made a turn.
A turn off the cliff.
And we hit the water before I even realized what was going on.
It's all going so fast and yet, none of them moved even an inch.
All of the other 'passengers' keep sitting the way they sat before, not even trembling because of the fall. Making it look like they were plastic figures glued to their respective benches.
Windows break and water starts to pour in even faster than the rain.
Loudly I curse and get up from my seat in a daze.
My head is pounding terribly, did I hit something?
I'm not sure.
It just hurts.
The vehicle starts to sink and I start to panic.
A heavy tree branch falls through one of the small windows in the ceiling.
I jump back, but then see that it has shattered the entire window and created a way for me to get out.
The water is rising higher and higher and I reach for the window.
Now the people in the bus do start to move.
In a strange and shocking way.
Moving like they have never used a limb before.
Crawling around, stumbling around, a strange form of swimming.
Shit!
They're coming for me!
They're coming for me!!
They get closer and closer with their strange movements.
Trying to wrap their arms around me.
As I feel their freezing cold fingers touch me I kick around me as hard as I can.
"Stay away!" I yell: "Stay the Hell away!!"
Desperately I hold on to the branch.
The first few already have their hands wrapped around my ankles.
"Let me go!!!" I yell, kicking and screaming.
More hands.
And then they start to grip and pull.
The gray light from the sky starts to grow distant, my head is getting closer to the water.
The heavy rain has started pushing me down now too.
Pushing back my hands, letting me slide back down.
I've never seen or even felt a rain storm this heavy, it feels like it's trying to get rid of me.
Trying to clean this place by getting rid of me.
Like a ghost town being washed away by the rain...
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Cats
Metal music
Hiking in nature
Horror Stories/movies/games
Doing something creative
Books are scary...
A story I wrote about someone stuck in a strange library.
TW: Psychological horror, gore
Only darkness.
No memories.
No thoughts.
No feelings.
No 'me'.
All of a sudden a bright light fills the place.
It is so bright that I can't see anything.
I?
Me?
As my eyes adjust to the light, I notice that I am in a library.
It is not a normal library, the bookcases look like trees, with their branches reaching far up.
Their leaves, all different, give the room a dreamlike feeling.
The roots which are growing all over the floor are connecting all the trees together.
The floor where I awoke is covered in a beautiful mosaic.
The light is coming from two big windows with stained glass, one above me and the other on the wall I'm facing.
It is not like how it is in a church, the stained glass is in much more colors and the image is something I can't really understand
It looks really vague, but maybe that was the intention.
Carefully I stand up and walk towards the nearest bookcase.
There are many, many books.
None of them seem to be sorted in any way, the genres couldn't be any more different and none of them are in alphabetical order. Not the titles or the writers.
It's a bit of a mess honestly, some of the books aren't even placed properly on the shelves.
As I walk around the room, I notice that there are no doors present.
How did I even get here?
I have no bruises or wounds and I don't remember being kidnapped, so that probably isn't it.
But neither do I remember coming here out of free-will...
I should investigate more.
As I look around I notice one other strange thing, it's one of the bookcases.
Just like the others it looks like a tree, but it looks like it has been dead for a long time. There are no leaves on the finger-like branches and it almost looks like it has been burned.
Still it is connected to all the others by the roots.
When I take a step closer, I can unexpectedly feel something...
Something bad.
An emotion?
A memory?
I don't know, but for now I shall leave it be.
I walk to another bookcase, this one has many children's books.
From bedtime stories, to those of wild adventures.
From fairytales to informative books.
And then there are the books without an author.
Carefully I take one out.
It is heavy and rather dusty, so I clean it off and open it with care.
It is someone's childhood.
Mine maybe, but it could also be someone else's.
I just don't know.
The pages are filled, everything is written to the furthest detail.
Every day, what happened, what they ate, people they met.
As careful as I took it out, I place it back in the bookcase.
I take out another, but similar book, again it is about the same child. Most of the other characters in it seemed to be the same as in the last book.
I can see now, why there are this many books, they must all be about this person's life.
So all these books are sorted! Not by genre or writer, but by date!
Quite proud of myself for figuring that out all by myself I continue on to another bookcase.
In it are a lot of schoolbooks and a couple of story books, these don't look as much for children as the previous. Most of them are too difficult or scary.
And again I open a random book from the ones without an author.
It is about a teenager, I think this might have been the child from the other bookcase before.
The same as before, everything is written to the finest detail.
The places they went to and the lessons they learned.
The bookcase after is about an adult, whom most likely has been the child and the teenager at some point.
This is by far the one with the most books, they must have enjoyed reading very much.
Same as before, the authorless book I take of a shelf is written into the smallest details.
About where they traveled to where they bought a house.
About losses and new lives.
I truly wonder who could have written these and all I am left with is the ability to wonder about who all these people are or were.
Although all of this is quite nice to read, my curiosity grows towards the 'dead' bookcase.
It has started making noises.
Scratching.
And something like speech.
I can't understand it though, it is all too muffled.
Quietly I walk towards the tree, step by step I get closer.
When I am close enough, I can see that none of these books have an author.
As I stand close enough, the sounds suddenly come to a halt and I place my hand on one of the books to take it out.
Slowly and with as much care as the others I take it from the dead tree.
This book is different from the rest, it is way heavier than it looks and the cover has been all scratched up. I am not sure if it was done with a knife or fingernails.
Or maybe it could have been teeth?
Vigilant of anything I can think of, I open the book.
As soon as I do, the scratching starts again and the muffled noises sound more like screams.
In this book are bad memories.
Fear.
Discomfort.
Sadness
Jealousy.
Pain.
Hate.
The handwriting in this book is terrible, more like someone scratched it in.
As I try to read what the words say, the tree starts to shake.
Quickly I take a few steps back.
Veins start to appear in the tree, filled with a strange growing color.
The roots of the other connected trees start to die, causing them to all drop their leaves.
Before they hit the ground they turn red and then turn into blood as they fall, splashing and making the mosaic disappear underneath the dark liquid.
Suddenly the first bookcase catches fire, burning all books with it in an instant.
Then burns the second and after that the third.
Before I can do anything, all the bookcases have been burned to ashes.
The blood washes over them, making even the last bits disappear.
All the books are gone and now I am only left with the dead tree.
The roots grow rapidly and start to cover the windows, until I am back in complete darkness again.
Only this time with all the awful memories.
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TW: Gore, psychological horror
My brother has always been very kind. Not just to me, but also everyone and everything around us. We live together with our uncle in a nice house with a big garden. Honestly, the house might be a bit to the bigger side. I'm pretty sure we could fit another small family here, but I'm happy with just the three of us. My uncle is a pretty good cook too! And my brother and I do quite good at school and both have some friends.
Even so, something is wrong.
It has to do with my brother.
He is special. Unfortunately not always in a good way.
The first time it happened was during the accident that robbed us of our parents.
The car got crashed horribly, after it had been upside down a couple of times. It all happened somewhere in the middle of nowhere. I don't know exactly what happened, but at some point in time I had flow out of the car. I don't really remember, but I was surrounded by white. Someone was holding me and protecting me.
This was the first time that I saw my brother's angel.
They look alike. Both have the same face and body, but their eyes, hair and clothes are very different. The angel mostly looks calm unlike my brother, who shows a lot of his emotions. I'm not saying that showing emotions is bad. I honestly prefer my brother's emotional side, to the angel's cold side.
When the ambulance arrived, it took them a while before they were able to save my brother from the wreckage, he had been unconscious and didn't remember anything about the accident. Our parents unfortunately didn't make it. I don't remember crying so much as I did back then, it all still feels like a haze. That maybe in a few minutes the doorbell will ring and that I can see their faces again, that it was all just a horrible nightmare.
When the paramedics asked me about what had happened, I told them that my brother saved me. Or at least someone who looked like him. They looked at me with pity in their eyes, they carefully told me that it wasn't possible, but I insisted until they shrugged and gave up.
Are you familiar with the story that everyone has an angel and a demon on their shoulders? The ones you sometimes see in old cartoons or read about in old books? My mother always loved to tell me those stories. When they were still alive we would go to church quite often, but uncle thinks it's useless to go. Now we only go with our grandmother from time to time and with Christmas of course. Our mother believed in angels, I hope she is in heaven now.
I'm telling you this, because my brother doesn't only have an angel... He has a demon too. One that almost looks exactly like him, but like the angel is just slightly different. The demon is scary and seems to always be angry and full of hate. He hasn't hurt me, but he hasn't been nice either.
They're both just as tall as my brother and when they appear they are always standing close to him.
I wanted to tell our uncle, but my brother didn't want me to tell him. So I promised to keep it a secret. Pretty cool secret, huh? That is what I thought at first too, but I was wrong to think that.
The first time that I saw the demon, was when an older man tried to kidnap me. It happened close to the empty playground that we actually aren't allowed to go to. The man grabbed me by my wrist, it hurt, so I screamed for my brother who fortunately was just inside the hut we had built before.
My brother ran towards me, also screaming. Then it happened. His demon appeared, right before the man could take me inside a building. My brother's demon grabbed the man's arm. He squeezed it. He kept squeezing and didn't let go. The old man started screaming, burns started to form everywhere on his body and he let me go.
I ran to my brother, who then took me back home as quickly as possible. We never played anywhere near there again. We didn't tell uncle either. We just couldn't. My brother was scared, and because he didn't know yet, I told him about his angel, who saved me. This was when we made the promise to keep it a secret.
From this experience I learned that my brother has none or almost no control over his angel and demon. They usually just do some of the things that he was planning for even a second and come out when they 'feel' needed. Unfortunately this has cost the life of the neighbor's dog, the demon killed it.
Another thing that seems to be bad about my brother being able to somehow summon these two, is that it takes a lot of energy out of him. He gets easily tired and when they are both out, my brother will most likely pass out soon after.
Even though this has made my brother's life significantly difficult, he is always there for me and always ready to protect me. His kindness and strength makes me feel useless sometimes. So I always try to take extra good care of him too. I talk to him when I think he needs it or bake him cookies.
Last week something bad happened, something really, really bad. A friend of our uncle came by, or at least he claimed he was and us being the stupid kids we were back then let him in. Our uncle is a cop and this guy claiming to be his friend was actually a criminal, that wanted to emotionally destroy him. After my uncle arrested his friends. He wanted to kill us. That was supposed to be our last day. The day we might have joined our parents. But of course, the man had it wrong all along. He didn't know anything, he didn't know my brother and what would happen if he would hurt me.
One of the first things the man did when he closed the door, was stab me with a knife. It all happened too quickly, even though I screamed my lungs out, I didn't feel anything. I couldn't even hear my own screaming. My brother rushed to my aid. Both his angel and demon appeared.
His angel came to me, took the knife out and healed me. The demon on the other hand, went rampant. He ripped the scared intruder into a thousand pieces and when he was done he burned his screaming face beyond recognition. It was terrifying, I have never seen something as brutal as that and hopefully never again. I have never seen so much blood, it was everywhere. My brother who had tried to stop his demon, had collapsed and lied passed out on the floor. There was blood on the windows, guts even on the ceiling and some wall's had just turned completely black. For a few minutes I didn't even know where we were. When slowly some of the blood dripped down from the window, I could see the room. A couple of small beams of red light shone into the room.
Hell.
The only thing I could call that room.
Did a human really die in here? There is almost nothing left.
When my uncle came back, he of course, was very shocked to see his traumatized cousins covered in blood, in his ruined house, with bits-and-pieces everywhere from some unidentifiable person. The room, dark from blood. So much blood...
The police were quickly alerted and we were questioned, when my brother was back on his feet again of course. I was surprised when my brother told them the truth, he was crying and said he was afraid of what he might do to the people he cares about when the demon goes out of control again. Our uncle's colleagues had a difficult time keeping in their laughs at first, but soon after one snickered, the demon came out again. Attacking them. They were shocked and some of them froze up. Just in time my brother jumped in front, which caused him to get some really nasty burns.
My uncle didn't know what to say or do. He just stood there and stared with a horrified expression.
I ran to my brother first, I saw his wounds and tried to calm him down. While the officers looked terrified, I begged them to please not take him away. This fell on deaf man's ears unfortunately.
Another kind of police group was sent soon after what happened. A group that deals with the more 'special' kind of incidents. They weren't as nice as our uncle's friends. They took my brother away, the entire time he didn't want to look us in the face. Even when our uncle found his composure and tried to comfort him. He was taken, cuffed in a special van. I watched helplessly as they drove off.
I know it has only been a week, but I've not had a good night sleep yet, nightmares plague me day and night. I am getting counseling so it should get less with time.
My uncle and I are staying somewhere else, because everything still needs to be further inspected and of course deep cleaned. I honestly don't want to return there, I don't believe that, that place can ever be called 'home' again. Just thinking about it gives me chills and makes me want to puke.
Since nobody I know well enough died, I still have to go to school. My uncle did call me in sick for the first few days, but since the day before yesterday I go to school again. I don't like it, but we don't have a choice, the school is very strict. Uncle also said that it might be good for me, that it might take my mind off those terrible things that happened just a week ago.
My first day of school went as normal as if nothing ever happened, I lunched with friends who still believe I just got a cold and did the work that was given to me by my teachers. I'm not ready to tell them what happened just yet, how would I even start?
My uncle has brought me to school every day. The car has never felt this empty as I looked at the place my brother would sit. We don't talk much anymore and when I asked him about my brother, he didn't answer and just shook his head. He didn't want to believe what happened yet. I know it was hard on him too, no matter how much he tried to hide it.
I wish I could see my brother again, but I haven't even gotten any message from him or the officers who took him. I don't know if he's even alive. It makes me really worried.
Something strange did happen to me yesterday, I could feel someone watching me the entire day I was at school. I looked around everywhere, but there was no one.
Today was different though, well I could still feel someone watching me and following me around. But this time, when I looked carefully enough, I could see him.
It's my brother's demon.
Watching me without a break. Every time he notices me looking he starts smiling with this creepy, distorted smile.
It's still following me.
Here is the most recent (short horror) story I wrote:)
Word count: 2825
TW: Blood & gore
Vigilantly I take one last look around the house.
Making sure again not to miss any little sound or the movement of someone or something, making sure that there really is only me.
My mother should be at work and my sister at school, double checking really won't hurt me.
If I want to do this ritual, I need to be all alone, or at least I don't want anyone to find out or intrude.
Right... the ritual... I hope it works.
I recently found a strange ritual while surfing around on the internet. Well there are many of those to be found, but this one stuck out to me.
It's a ritual to summon a doppelganger.
I know the dangers that come with it, I know that I probably shouldn't, but in a way I can also not, not do it.
I'm tired, school and work are a pain, all those birthdays of family and family friends have been taking more from me than I'm able to eat cake. So I could definitely use some assistance.
I know that there's a high chance of this ritual being one big hoax, that it won't work at all, but I have to at least give it a try.
If my mom found out she would probably be mad at me, saying things like: "Luna, you're sixteen. You're too old to be believing such nonsense!"
And she's probably right.
As I've finally concluded that I really am alone, I let out a sigh of relief and close my bedroom door.
Quietly I take out the stuff that I have to use from underneath my bed. Thank god no one noticed, I should find better hiding spots for things like this.
It takes me longer than I hoped to set everything in place.
A mirror in the middle huh...
I let the darkness swallow my room, and slowly light every candle.
Yesterday I had already drawn the circle that was meant to be around the mirror and me and it seems to still be there underneath my carpet, still intact luckily.
I'm going to have to clean this before my mom decides to snoop around.
Meaning, ASAP after this ritual is finished.
As I finally finish my preparations I take my place in the circle right before the mirror and say the spell I memorised.
I'm glad I prepared everything far in advance.
After having finished speaking I quietly stare into the dark mirror.
The whole house is silent, but not even that, it's almost as if everyone in this town has decided to hold their breath.
Even the wind has decided to remain silent.
Is it because of what I'm doing right now?
I can't help but secretly smirk.
The dark mirror seems to reflect only the candles back at me, but then it gets strangely dark.
Even so the candles still remain as bright as ever.
I see, so it's time...
I take another step forward and slowly reach for the cold object.
Well, it's not the only freezing object right now, it's as if my entire room is in an ice age right now.
I spot little clouds leaving my mouth every time I breathe out.
The tiny flames of the candles flicker as a cold gust of wind leaves the mirror.
Though the flames quickly fight against the wind and become bigger than before.
I can finally see something inside the mirror.
Something is moving.
I feel a sense of dread, but I try my hardest not to show it outward.
If something goes wrong now, it could be disastrous.
Suddenly something shoots out of the mirror, grabbing at whatever it can hold onto.
Right, if this happens....
I hold the cold and slimy hand coming out of the mirror.
"Good morning." I say, making sure not to let it know my fear: "I'm Luna, you will be my assistant from now on."
The hand is still far from human as it clasps onto me with fingers far too long and thin.
I can't help but shiver from its coldness.
"L-lu...N-na." It says in a voice no human ever would.
I nod slowly: "Yes, that's me... but soon also you."
"Luna." It's voice is mimicking my own, slowly sounding more like mine.
So creepy...
Its monstrous face slowly comes out of my mirror, looking at me with still empty eye-sockets.
I want to scream, but keep myself from doing so.
So close, so close, so close....
By the light of the candles I can see how the monster slowly takes on my form.
It's truly a horrifying thing to witness.
Something taking your form, taking your identity, something that has never been human before.
Still, I feel glad that it works.
I have tasks for this future doppelganger.
A couple of hours later, the thing in my room still isn't really me completely, but the resemblance grows closer by the minute.
I try to teach it my manner of speech and my manner of movement, something it seems to have difficulty with.
Slowly I teach it how to help with the cleaning up of my room as well. I mean, it's part of the reason for summoning it in the first-place.
"Luna, are you home?" I hear my mother call from downstairs.
"Be quiet...!" I hush the monster, hiding it in my closet: "Yes, mom, I'm coming!" I call to my mother.
I rush downstairs to greet her.
She smiles at me.
"I don't feel like cooking tonight, so we're going to order pizza. You wouldn't mind that, right?"
I smile back: "Of course not. I do have a lot of homework though, do you mind if I eat upstairs?"
"Hard at work I see, well then, it's okay. But take it easy, alright?"
I nod and head back upstairs.
Back to my doppelganger.
I try to teach it as much as possible and as the pizza arrives we eat mine together.
After finishing it I go downstairs to bring the empty box.
My mom is sitting in front of the tv with my sister, she turns to me.
"Hey Luna, how's your homework going?"
I smile: "Pretty good, I think I'm almost finished."
I see her face suddenly turning grave: "Luna dear, please be careful whenever you're going out with friends."
I wonder why she's saying something like that: "What do you mean?"
"There's been a murderer going around, that's what the news has been telling just a couple of minutes ago."
"I see., I'll be careful."
"Thank you." My mom smiles and turns back to the TV to continue watching the show they were watching.
The next morning my doppelganger looks the exact same as me and I decide to send it to school. It shouldn't hurt too much, it's a short day, perfect for training to be me. Meanwhile I can do the things I want to do.
Side doppelganger:
On the second day of my existence I'm sent to a place human beings call 'school'. Supposedly it's a place where older humans send their young ones to learn about the world and working in it.
To be honest I seem to be feeling the emotion humans call 'anxiousness', supposedly it's normal for doing something for the first time. Or at least that is what my master has told me.
I've been given a 'phone', a device meant to 'call' other humans and I'm also able to use it to find 'the way' with the help of a 'map'.
How peculiar.
I've memorised all the 'students' Luna has told me about and has shown the pictures of.
Supposedly she doesn't talk that often with others, so I shouldn't try too hard to befriend everyone.
I take the bag given to me with me and make my way towards the building called 'school'.
It doesn't take me long to find it, many people from around my masters age are walking inside one-by-one like ants.
When entering the room I'm supposed to be I'm greeted by her classmates and I greet them back in the way that was taught to me.
After about four hours it's time to go 'home' again, Luna told me that four hours was a short day and 'home' is the place where you live.
I enter the house with the help of a 'key', a small object that can open 'locks'.
"Hi Luna, how was school today?" A lady Luna calls 'mom' greets me.
"Hi mom, it was nice."
She looks up a bit surprised: "Not just okay?"
Was this not what my master normally responds with?
I hesitate for a moment, I have to make it look natural... Yet I wasn't informed how to handle this situation.
"It was nice, I had English literature." When I was summoned yesterday I learned that Luna likes to read, so she probably does not dislike that class too much.
'Mom' laughs: "You look so shocked, I'm just glad to hear that you had a nice day. Did you read something nice?"
I nod and quickly think back to the book we read: "William Wilson." I answer honestly.
"Ah, I didn't know you enjoyed such classics."
"I didn't know either."
She smiles at me, I guess this is a sign that I have to ask something back.
"How was your day?"
'Mom' smiles and tells me about it. Supposedly it's normal for humans to complain about their days, I do not understand why, but I will remember it for future reference.
A couple of days end up going by, almost each one I'm going to school or visiting my masters family.
I feel like I'm doing something wrong, my classmates seem to be getting closer to me. Luna always says that they don't care about her, but it seems like she has been mistaken. I remember their likes and dislikes and talk about it with them, causing me to learn a great deal about them. Something which they seem to appreciate.
Honestly I might even be able to call them what humans call 'nice' or 'kind' even. They show a great deal of care after all.
Luna decided to remain in her room, going out unseen from time to time. Though there are also times when it is my turn to hide and for her to fulfil the role as herself.
I wonder what she does whenever I'm at school or working at her job or even when I'm visiting her family.
I'm able to fool every one of them almost perfectly. Though I do have to be careful, I'm not fully human yet after all. My blood still has to gain the right colour and I have the ability to go through mirrors, but I know I will soon lose it.
One of the longer days at school I talk with some of Luna's... no... I guess it would be better to say 'my' friends. They didn't seem to have spent time with the real Luna after all.
"Luna, what do you think about it?" One of my friends asks.
"What do you mean?" I didn't really follow everything.
"Well y'know. The recent murders."
I look at her: "They do scare me a little."
My friend smiles back at me in a slightly concerned manner: "Me too girl, me too."
"If you want to, I don't mind walking together, we do need to go the same way for a bit after all."
A brighter smile appears on her face: "That would be great!"
In the back of the class I can hear some people whispering about me or about Luna.
"Luna has gotten very sociable recently, hasn't she?"
"Yeah, it's almost as if she's been replaced with a completely different person."
"Well she changed for the better if you ask me. She always seemed way too proud of herself and her little bubble."
I can feel my stomach turn as I hear the word 'replace' leave their lips.
I know I shouldn't let it get to me, but I also need to convince everyone that I'm really Luna.
My friends seem to have noticed the whispering too and that it makes me uncomfortable, so they make their way to those to have a 'stern-talking to' with them. Truly just telling them to shut 'the hell' up and mind their own business.
After school I walk with my friends until our ways split.
When I'm on my own again I suddenly walk into my master.
Shocked, I look at her, she looks angry and starts walking towards me rapidly.
"I told you...!" She whispers threateningly: "We should not be seen together!"
I nod.
"You enter the house first, I will take the window." Luna hisses to me as she finds herself a place to hide.
Obediently I enter the house first, I'm greeted by Luna's sister.
"Hey sis..." She greets me with a sombre look.
"Hey, is something wrong?" I ask in a kind tone I was taught by my friends.
The girl gives me another sad smile: "Yeah, have you seen Nibbles anywhere?" Nibbles is her hamster, or so was I told.
"No I haven't" I shake my head while answering.
"I see... He's still missing, if you find him, please bring him to me."
"I will." I answer, for some reason the look on her face makes me 'sad' too.
The first time I felt that.
Something about this whole thing is wrong.
It's like a little voice in the back of mind is constantly 'nagging' in the back of my mind. Telling me that something is very, very wrong.
I decide to go against my master's wishes and do my research on the ritual that summoned me.
I need to do it in secret, so as not to let her know.
Back at school I start searching on one of the computers about the ritual.
After school, I walk back with my friends again. I begin to fear for their safety, but I try to keep it to myself.
It's getting dark outside and Luna has yet to return.
Against her wishes I use with great difficulty a little of the power left in me to see around what part of this town she could be and sneak out of the house.
It's really dark now, even the moon seems to have hidden itself behind a cloud, fearing for the worst.
Within about half an hour I find myself at the abandoned warehouse.
She really is here... isn't it?
Quietly I slip inside, making sure not to make a peep.
As my eyes get used to the even darker inside of the building, I see something that scares me.
A shadow, my height, my body type, standing above a smaller shadow, someone that seems to be lying down.
The shadow that looks like me, plunges a knife into the body beneath her.
"What the hell?!" I can't help it, I've given away my location.
The shadow turns to me.
There's no mistaking it.
That's Luna.
That's my master, the one who summoned me into this world.
I'm her alibi.
My hunch was right and the horrible memories of my research come back fresh into my mind.
"What did you sacrifice?!" I start yelling, unable to control my own emotions any longer.
Luna just smiles at me, somehow in a way I never believe I myself could. Crooked, horrid. Are some of the words that come to mind.
"It is said that a sacrifice has to be done to complete the ritual! So who or what did you kill?!" I continue my rant.
The shadow lying on the floor has long stopped moving.
I have to let someone know what's going on! But how?!
Without putting any real thought into it, I decide to throw the object known as 'phone' towards the shadow that I look like.
Luna avoids it without problem.
"That, dear doppelganger, was the last thing you should have thrown away in this situation."
Just what does she mean with that?
Luna continues: "And they said that you would be the 'perfect' doppelganger. Bullshit. You are just getting in my way. You were summoned to serve me and only me. How come that you decided to make your own decisions?"
Her speech is quiet, yet threatening, somehow making my body turn cold.
Right, if I were to find a mirror... I look around, scanning my surroundings quickly.
As if reading my mind, Luna laughs: "There are no mirrors in this building."
She's almost within arm's reach, so I swiftly take a couple of steps back, bumping with my back into a wall I didn't know was there.
Suddenly her face changes from smiling to one of hatred and she slashes her knife into my shoulder.
I scream in pain, but am able to get further away from her.
I press my hand against my wound.
Running for my life, I find myself cornered again.
"I know this place better than you." Luna says in her threatening tone.
She pushes me down without problem.
She's clearly used to killing people for a long time now, yet I've never even come close to learning about it. Not that I would want to.
I look at my hand that was pressing the wound.
My blood slowly starts to turn red.
I've lost my powers.
I'm now completely human.
There couldn't be a worse time.
The one whose likeness I am to represent bows down before me: "Don't worry, to summon you I didn't kill a human. Animals work pretty well too, they leave less of a mess."
Her bloodstained blade glittering in the little light entering the building.
My body has started trembling uncontrollably.
What was this emotion again?
Fear?
My master readies herself and then slashes me one last time.
The last thing I say is something I don't have any control over.
"Please..." I mutter: "I don't want to die..."
And then the blade plunges itself into my body, spraying red all over the room.
It hurts and yet I don't feel anything.
It's all going too fast.
Finally the place turns dark.
The continueation and final part of a story I wrote.
Word count: 2151
TW: Death and cursing
A sudden shock awakens Drew and he opens his eyes, only to find himself inside some sort of machine.
The space is small and he almost can't move anything, turning around is out of the question.
Luckily since he's used to working in cramped spaces, he's able to keep himself calm.
His head seems to be in a fog, he doesn't remember what happened to get him inside the big object.
Carefully he tries to move his arms, but not much happens, he is completely confined within the machine.
After a while of trying not to panic Drew hears a strange mechanical hissing sound.
It's the door.
The door is opening.
In the opening stands a man in rags with a zombie-like look on his face, suddenly he grabs Drew by his arm and hisses in his ear: "Act like the rest or you'll be dead."
At first Drew doesn't understand at all, but as he looks around he sees in the dark many people moving around almost robotically.
All of the people are working.
Drew quickly looks back at the machine he came from.
It takes a second, but then it dawns at him...
He had been revived.
Trying to remain calm he follows the man before him, trying to take the same slow dead steps.
He thinks of Clara, who must be grieving terribly right now. The reason for him being here must be because she wasn't able to pay for the revival fee.
The day or perhaps the night, there's really no way to know, starts horribly.
People looking like old corpses are walking like slaves with other machines keeping watch if they're working good enough.
Drew is forced to work on broken machinery without break, being monitored almost non-stop.
Thankfully he does quite well, since he has been chosen to do a job he had done last he had been awake.
As the moment finally arrives that the security weakens and no camera's look at Drew, he is completely exhausted.
He feels a hand on his shoulder, it's the man that had warned him before.
"Hey buddy, you gotta keep going, if you don't want to die that is."
"What is this? Why are they doing this?" Drew almost begs the man to answer his questions.
"Once pronounced dead, your rights as a human being are lost. You will be nothing more than an object, a slave. We are supposed to come in here as mindless, but some of us, like you and me, come with one still intact."
"This is a different machine than the one used on the commercials, right?"
The strange man laughs: "Of course, you think people would write a good review if they were to wake up in a dump like this? This place is for those that are too poor or have relatives that don't want them anymore, but the people here are chosen because of having certain skills."
"Skills? Do the mindless even possess those?"
"Bare fractions, but that's all they need. A person's build can also go a long way."
As the monitors return they quickly get back to their work again and after a while Drew learns that the dead down here really don't get any rest.
Still he tries his best, causing him to almost faint.
Slowly it gets even darker before his eyes and he feels himself stagger and the ground seems to be dragging him closer.
Just in time, the strange man pulls him up and hands him something.
"Get up buddy, if you fall now, we're both fucked."
Drew takes the object closer to his face and recognizes it as old bread.
He takes a bite and swallows.
It's absolutely disgusting, but it helps him to continue again.
"How long have you been here?" Drew asks as they have a moment to talk.
"Not so long either."
"Then do you know how you died?"
"Not sure..." The man hesitates for a moment: "But from what I heard, this damned company sometimes picks people and sends others after them to kill them. I believe that at least happened to you."
"What, why?"
"You can't see it right now, but you had a really big scar on your back. They don't patch us up as good as the people who pay for it."
Drew doesn't remember what happened, one moment he had been working and the other he had woken up inside the machine. This information of him possibly being murdered strikes him hard.
"I need to get out of here." He mumbles.
"Don't we all?"
"If I don't they might kill her too."
"You got someone, buddy?"
"My wife, she works here."
"On the bottom I presume?"
"Yeah..."
"Well that explains it then."
"What do you mean?"
"Why were you picked?"
"Do you mean to say that they screened everything about her? And all the people in her life?"
"Yeah..."
Drew firmly places a hand on the man's shoulder: "Just how do you know all this information?"
"Buddy, let go."
"I want to know!"
"Buddy, you're hurting me."
"Just answer me, please!"
The man sighs: "I used to work at the top. I was one of those fuckers at the top. One that could see the sun rise, one that could see above the smog."
"Then why are you here?"
"You really want to know everything, don't you?"
Drew grips the strangers shoulder even harder.
"Ouch! Damnit, I fucked up you know! I didn't agree to their shit!"
Drew lets the man go.
"Thank you." He says annoyed.
"I'm going to get out of here." Drew says while picking up something he things that might be useful as a weapon.
"You're going to get yourself killed going like that."
"Better than dying here. If you want me to survive, maybe you could help."
Defeated, the man sighs: "Fine, then I will."
"So what are we going to do?" Drew asks, some of his old energy returning.
"We have to carefully follow the red lights."
Both drop their work and start their plan to escape.
It doesn't take long for an alarm to sound, the camera's must have noticed that they've left.
Thus the two start running.
As strange looking robots get closer and closer the two men finally reach a door, the strange man opens it and pushes Drew through it.
"You better get her to safety, buddy." The man says and closes the door immediately.
For a moment Drew stands unable to do anything, he had no time to thank the man before and now it was too late.
As his mind finally starts to process everything he decides that he can't do it all alone.
When he rushes outside the building, he notices that it is morning.
But even though the sun is out, seeing it through the thick smog is difficult.
People rush past him to go to work, like none know of what takes place beneath the big company that grants wishes.
Drew hurries home, but as he arrives, notices that Clara has already left for work. He stops for a moment to see hate mail on the floor.
The mail must have been sent by those that knew about his passing.
Drew picks them up and throws them in the trash, might be nice for starting a fire later.
Maybe he can get help at the workshop?
He runs to the place he worked just before he died.
The door is closed and gravity has been sprayed all over the walls.
Vile words are written on the walls, did the boss take Clara's side?
Drew tries to open the door, but it seems to be locked.
He knocks.
No answer.
He knocks again, this time louder.
Then the door finally opens, the boss appears, at first he doesn't notice and wants to ask if he came to harass him, but then he looks up and recognizes Drew.
He takes his arm and almost drags him inside.
"Drew? How can that be you? You look horrible."
Drew starts to explain everything that he knows.
It takes a while, making Drew tumble over his words, trying to get it all out at the same time.
When he finally finishes he says: "So I have to go get her now!"
"Drew, you just came back to life. Please, be careful."
"I'm sorry sir, but I can't, they probably already know that I was the one who left after all. I can't stay here too long. They might even come after you if they know that you kept me here for a while. You sided with Clara, didn't you?"
The older man on the other side of the table sighs in despair and old grief: "Don't let yourself get killed again, son."
The boss turns around to see if he can find Drew something to use as a weapon, but as he hears the front door open and close again, he knows that it is too late.
Drew finally reaches the building again, trying to rush and hide at the same time to get inside quickly and efficiently.
People do tend to stare at him, probably because of old clothes and the fact that even though he's been revived, he still doesn't look much different from a corpse. Possibly a side-effect by the machine at the bottom.
Drew opens door after door to find the room in which his beloved should be working.
A lady walks up to him, asking: "Sir can I help you?" She looks like a normal employee.
"Clara, have you seen her?"
She shakes her head: "Not since she was sent downstairs."
Drew glances at an old staircase that is mostly dark, too dark to see the floor below it.
"Thanks." He mumbles and continues down further.
He rips open a door not knowing if it's the right one.
It shows a big grey room, lighted by white ceiling lights and the many blue screens on the many desks.
At a glance some of the people here look close to dying themselves.
But something else is wrong with the room.
Something very wrong.
Perhaps it looks too clean?
Drew starts to look around, looking for Clara.
The illusion gets shattered the moment Drew accidently pushes a button.
A short glitch appears, like a flash all disappears.
The room is not clean at all, there is even a small layer of water covering the ground.
Drew can see something that looks like a bridge without handrails and on it he sees her.
"Clara!!" He yells at his beloved: "Clara, get away from there!" Blindly he rushes towards her, but it is too late.
She falls, plunging into the murky water that embraces her with its cold deepness.
Without a second of hesitation Drew jumps after her, uncaring of the coldness of the water.
He sinks after her, but loses sight of her quickly.
As he finally reaches what he believes to be the bottom, he frantically searches for her.
With his hands he feels around, but feels a strange object lying underneath his feet.
Unable to hold his breath any longer he swims to the surface and climbs onto the platform.
Even though the illusion is gone, there are still people typing away at the computers, still working even though they should be able to see the real working conditions.
Drew runs up to one of them and pulls them close: "Where are the lights?! Any lights, flashlights, I don't care!"
Panic has wrapped its claws around the desperate man's throat, almost choking him, as is to kill him again.
Unfortunately the yelling doesn't help getting the worker out of his state, only staring blankly at Drew or perhaps through him, unable to see him at all.
Angry Drew tosses the worker aside and starts searching on his own again, quickly opening random drawers without closing them.
As he wants to kick something a hand gets placed on his shoulder: "Here son, use this."
It's the boss of the workshop, handing him an old flashlight, he must have come after him.
Drew takes it saying a quick thanks and uses a useless fire-extinguisher to sink faster to the bottom.
The old flashlight luckily seems to work underwater, it doesn't show much, but it does so for the bare minimum.
As Drew reaches what he believes to be the bottom, he quickly puts his hand before his mouth to stop himself from choking on the water trying to invade his lungs.
This is not the bottom at all.
As Drew slowly moves the flashlight to look around he slowly shines it on many corpses that lie around.
Some new, some almost entirely bones.
It's a pile.
So many people.
And if Drew isn't fast enough, Clara will join them forever.
Slower than he wants to he swims closely to the bodies, trying his best to find his beloved, made worse by the look of all the dead down there.
The water is still murky, but Drew has an idea of where Clara could be.
Soon he finds himself at a deeper hole, one with less bodies.
Using the fire-extinguisher he tries to get to the botom quicker.
.
.
.
Then he finally finds her.
She seems almost deadly pale, almost like she has already joined those deep down.
Swiftly he takes her in his arms and lets go of the heavy object, causing them to slowly rise up again.
As they finally reach the surface, Drew's boss is already awaiting them helping them up.
"Son, what took you so long?"
Drew, completely out of breath, tries to explain: "All... are... all are dead... down there..."
"What do you mean?"
Drew shakes his head: "Please... please, save her."
Clara has gone awfully cold and doesn't seem to be breathing anymore.
Both men feel at a loss, until at the same time they know one way to get her back again.
I recently decided to challenge myself to write a non-horror short story.
This is my first time attempting to write a story that is supposed to be funny.
When I told my family about this they asked me if I was sick...
Without any further ado, I would love to hear what people think of this attempt at a comedic story:)
Word count: 2076
TW: Profanity (Doesn't go much further than 'shit' though)
“And this is detective Jayden Falkenstein.”
My boss has his hand on one of the shoulders of some kid, while looking like a proud father.
“That’s your nephew isn’t it?” I remark.
The chief looks astonished: “Oh my, you’re already familiar with him?”
“No.” I answer honestly: “But I feel like there’s something you too have in common.”
The man laughs as if I was giving him a compliment: “Oh well, he’s actually a lot brighter than me.”
“You wouldn’t say.” I scan the child before me with my eyes, there’s just something… terribly annoying about him. His clothes are made of many bright colours that don’t go well together, making me believe that he might be color blind. He looks unprofessional and attracts way too much attention.
His face bears the expression of a terrified child trying to hide his fear, with a look of fake confidence that is way too easily shattered.
There’s just no way that he’s a detective.
“So, sir, is he going to work here with us? Like an intern or something?” Or is he here to be baby-sitted by one of us? I secretly add.
“Oh, no, no, no. We need my dear nephew here to help us solve something.”
“Is he good with computers?” The chief is old, maybe that’s the problem? Was an IT-guy too expensive?
“I told you before, he’s a detective.” The man’s face turns serious, he must have noticed that I’ve been having difficulty with believing him.
His nephew must really want to play detective, there’s no way he went to school for it. Let alone leave with diploma in hand.
“You two are about the same age, so I expect you two to get along.”
“Around the same age?” I ask dumbfounded. I know the chief is getting old, but does he really have such difficulty with discerning 15-year olds with those in their twenties? It’s just impossible, he doesn’t even look close. And his terrible sense of fashion…
That and I don’t believe he would even be allowed to take his first driving lessons, let alone be allowed to step inside a bar.
The kid smiles at me: “I’m twenty-five, you know. I heard that you’re two years older.”
What…?!
I shake my head: “You’re not allowed to lie to a police officer, show me your ID.” I gesture to him to hand it over.
“Officer Coldon!” The chief calls out to me in frustration.
But the ‘detective’ hands me something “Here.” he says in a kind tone.
I take the object not really taking it seriously, until the picture and text reaches my sight.
…
…
He really is…
I feel utterly flabbergasted and it takes me a bit to finally find my composure again. While double checking if the ID is real or not.
I cough: “So chief, what’s the plan?”
The man in question looks at me still slightly annoyed: “Well, we got a message from the art gallery asking for help. Someone is threatening to take down the building.”
“I see, have they had the thread on paper or via mail?”
“Paper. The author of the note mentioned something like ‘sneaking inside like a snake’.”
“Can I see it?” I unconsciously reach out, hoping for him to give it to me.
Instead the older man shakes his head: “It’s being analysed by the lab right now. And it’s almost time to go.”
“Already?” The detective asks pouting.
That really can’t be an adult…
Both me and Jaiden get sent back home to change into more formal wear.
I’m lucky that I live quite close by to the gallery itself, I can head straight to the building.
After quickly finding something I believe to be fitting for a guest, I leave my apartment behind and walk to the place the chief wants us to meet up.
It’s in a park close by, I see they were able to get a normal looking van.
Then the other thing that I notice…
As if someone had eaten rainbows and puked them back out…
I frown and try to look away from the almost glowing thing standing before me: “Hell no, you’re not getting in there dressed like that!”
Surprise, surprise… It’s Jaiden standing before me, dressed in a manner even a freezing and naked hobo wouldn’t want. That hobo would most likely prefer to die.
Unconventional, torture to the eye itself. That describes it at best. I can feel the shame… Yet he does not seem to show that at all.
He’s comfortable in that?!
Detective Falkenstein looks at me with a smirk: “Well you’re dressed way too fancy for someone just visiting a museum.”
The audacity.
Suddenly the chief pulls both of us by our collars: “Damnit, both of you, get changed!!”
Both are forced to change on the spot for more casual looking clothes.
As we enter the building I glare at my colleague that did get his way by secretly keeping his God awful looking shirt underneath, slightly better looking clothing.
The chief had decided that the two of us have to partner up. There are others that are doing the same, but are given different routes to walk.
“So, one ticket for an adult and one for a child?” The lady behind the counter asks, taking my thoughts of annoyance to another place.
“I-I’m sorry ma’am, could you repeat that?” I’m pretty sure I heard something wrong.
“One adult.” She nods towards me, speaking almost in slow motion: “And one child.” She nods to Jaiden.
Immediately I shake my head: “That’s a grown man.”
A mischievous smile crosses my colleagues face, one I don’t like the look of.
“Sorry ma’am, my dad is only joking.” He takes my arm and I do my best to resist the urge to slap it away.
The lady behind the counter smiles a little, though clearly with murderous intent when her eyes rest on me.
Then she turns back to Jaiden, a soft smile crosses her face: “Would you like to participate in the scavenger hunt?”
The idiot smiles brightly: “Yes please.”
We get the tickets and I hear the lady whisper to one of her colleagues: “He’s so polite, he really did not get that from his dad.”
The other nods, “Yeah, he probably has a much better mother.”
When we’re finally out of hearing range, I pull the detective closer to me in anger: “That’s illegal!” I whisper-yell: “With our job we need to set a good example!”
Jaiden smiles carefree: “We also aren’t allowed to stand out.”
I hate to admit it, but in a way, just a tiny bit, he has a point. I better talk it out with him later.
Or perhaps I should set him the good example.
Engrossed in the piece of paper that was handed to him earlier, he mumbles: “Hmmm… where should we go next?”
It really isn’t the time to go on a scavenger hunt.
We soon find ourselves inside a long hallway, the walls are neatly lined with many paintings each in slightly different colours and moods.
I can understand why people calls this true art, the way the emotions are showing, the dreams and ideas of their creators all come together in one-
“That one looks super ugly!” My colleague bursts out in a loud laughter.
I look at him threateningly, but he doesn’t seem to notice at all.
“That…” He points at it: “Is truly the ugliest thing I’ve ever seen. No one would want it on a t-shirt. They did call this art right? Is this the collection of the ugliest man-made squirts?”
“Jaiden!” I hiss his name at him to quiet him down, but it only seems to show him that I’m still here.
He turns to me, ignoring the emotions that I’m clearly showing and asks a question in an annoyingly casual way: “So, the scavenger hunt is asking me to give this one a name. I’m thinking of ‘barf in the barn’ or ‘shit cow exploding’…”
He’s asking me.
Damnit, how clueless can a person be?
I take a deep breath to calm myself down: “We should continue to the next.” I try to remind him. There’s no time to be loitering around here, we have a criminal to catch!
I cannot truly see what this painting means, but I bet it has something to do with the painter's hidden anger bursting out. I think to myself as we’ve entered another hallway and a painting has taken my attention.
“Ha, a six-year-old could do better.”
I’m a cop. I remind myself. Murder is a crime.
Though I need to repeat it multiple times in order for it really to seep into my mind.
Continuing on I suddenly notice someone in the crowd acting strange.
A man is staring at a painting, without moving or even blinking at all.
Is he even still breathing?
Carefully as to not get his attention I glance his way a couple of times.
Trying to concentrate, I think about what I should do.
Should I let my other colleagues in- and outside know?
Or should I-
Crunch…
Crunch……
The sound of someone eating right next to me takes me out of my train of thought.
Guess who it is…
Jaiden…
Again.
Yep. That’s right…
He’s eating a bag of chips.
I’m thinking of ripping the thing out of his hands, but he walks off just before I’m able to.
You’re not allowed to eat inside this part of the gallery! I want to yell, but he’s already stepping towards the man I’m suspicious of.
I can see him say something to the suspect and then hold up his bag of potato chips.
The suspect is taken out of his trance and smiles, accepting the offer and taking some of the chips from the bag.
The detective comes back to me: “You know officer Coldon, not everyone is a suspect. That man was simply entranced by the painting. It isn’t pretty, the painting, but to him it feels like something special.”
I would love to be allowed to hit this kid over the head.
I remain silent, trying to show in this way that I still don’t agree.
“We should go this way.”
“Why?” I ask.
Did he suddenly have a good idea?
“The scavenger hunt continues down that hall.”
I follow him, tired out by my own anger and frustration.
I want to be part of what saves this gallery, but now I’m unsure if I can really do it.
“This has to be it!” Jayden suddenly calls out.
“Please lower your voice…” I feel too tired to lecture him again.
He picks up a random looking, empty piece of paper.
“This piece of paper must have another message… like with invisible ink.”
I swear I’m done with this guy.
“There’s no way…” I say, knowing that it’s clearly bull.
Not paying attention, while taking a few steps back, he accidentally bumps into someone.
“Ah, I’m sorry.” He immediately apologizes.
I guess he does have basic manners.
“Don’t worry, it doesn't matter.” The man he walked into answers in a kind tone: “It still happens to me from time to time as well.”
“Still I’m really sorry.”
Are these two going to keep doing this or are they finally going to stop and move on?
We still have to catch someone.
“Oh right, sir, do you happen to have a lighter?” Jayden quickly asks: “I need it for the scavenger hunt.” He points at the piece of completely ordinary paper.
“Oh yeah, I have one.” The man starts digging through his pockets: “Please do return it to me.”
“Thank you.” My babysitting job answers politely.
Carefully he lets the small flame from the dark metal object lick the paper.
As his face turns sour he finally turns off the lighter.
The paper really was just a piece of random paper.
Before returning it, he takes a quick glance at the small object in his hand. For a moment it looks like something clicked inside his mind.
With a smile on his face he returns the lighter to its owner.
“Thank you for letting me borrow this. Unfortunately it seems like this isn’t part of the scavenger hunt.” He hangs his head down showing rather theatrically his frustration.
“I see, well kid, I hope you find it.” The man takes the lighter and calmly walks away.
As the man has gone around the corner, Jayden suddenly jumps and pulls my sleeve: “That’s him!” He stops himself just in time from yelling: “The snake mentioned in the letter, it’s on the lighter! His means of destroying this place is by fire.”
Too tired to struggle, I press against my hidden earpiece and call for backup, giving everyone the best description I can of the suspect.
As we’re finally called back, the chief tells us that our suspects fingerprints matched that of the letter that was sent.
But a better investigation and court will be held later to find out what really happened.
I glance at my colleague.
I guess he might have his charms, solving a case might not entirely be beyond him…
Though dumb luck did most of the job.
But I still can’t get over his horrible sense of fashion!
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