So, a God falls for a pirate...
vanoss: I need you to kill him and make it look like an accident
nogla: Got it.
[Later]
Detective moo: It looks like the killer stabbed the guy and then placed a banana peel by his feet
Bluffy, maybe one-shot ideas I'm thinking about possibly writing. idk yet
• Werewolf buggy x hunter luffy
• definitely the siren au buggy x luffy
• fem luffy x fem buggy
• witch luffy x ghost buggy
• wolf buggy x bunny luffy
Idk these are just ideas that I think would be neat to write
vanoss: What’s up? I’m back. panda: I literally saw you die. You died. You were dead. vanoss: Death is a social construct.
Vanoss: WELCOME TO BIBLE STUDY WE'RE ALL CHILDREN OF JESUS.
delirious: *snorting cocaine*
Vanoss: KUMBAAYAAA MY LOORDD-
Writing Tips
Punctuating Dialogue
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➸ “This is a sentence.”
➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.
➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”
➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”
➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”
➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”
➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.
“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.
“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”
➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”
➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”
However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!
➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.
If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)
➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“
“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.
➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.
➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”
➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.
“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”
➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.
“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”
evan: Guys, I think we should split up. We’ll cover more ground that way.
grizzy: Good idea.
evan: [leaves]
grizzy, to the rest of the bbs: evan is full of terrible ideas. Let’s not split up
panda: I am decayed. My lungs are full of thorns and mildew. My bones are held together by vines. I am fragile. Please be gentle with my corpse.
vanoss: Get out of bed. You're going on this adventure whether you like it or not.
panda: I refuse.
Evan: Wanna see what kind of trouble I can get into?
moo: Oh god, you're going to die, aren't you?
Evan: It's a Tuesday, I know how to restrain myself
moo: You absolutely do not