I Dreamed The Pope Announced A New Deadly Sin Called 'sluttony' And Everybody Was Really Excited To Try

I’ve wanted to draw this for weeks 🎃🍁

moo: Which movie are you and luke going to see tonight?

vanoss: Oh, I always go to whichever movie luke wants.

moo: Which one does he want to see?

vanoss: I haven't decided yet.

mini: I’m gau

mini: gag*

mini: gai**

jiggly: That’s okay, take your time.

mini: Boys.

brian: Are we going to do plan B?

vanoss: Technically, that would be plan G.

panda: How many plans do you guys have, is there like, a plan M?

vanoss: Yeah, but brian dies in plan M.

moo: I like plan M.

moo: evan, why are you naked?

evan: i...uhh... don’t have any clothes

moo: *opens closet* sure you do, you have shirts, pants, oh hi panda, that new hat i bought you, jackets

"You okay?"

vanoss: Look. I may not be a saint, but it's not like I’ve killed anybody. I’m not an arsonist. I’ve never found a wallet outside of an IHOP and thought about returning it but saw the owner lived out of state so just took the cash and dropped the wallet back on the ground. panda: Okay, that's really specific, and that makes me think that you definitely did do that.

Happy late halloween!! Drew some demon luffy au finally uwu

Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

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➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

tyler: I find it very unseemly of evan to start dating again. Isn't the customary period of mourning 10 years?

anthony: Die. Let's find out.