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1 year ago
@swsource Star Wars Week DAY 6 – LIGHT SIDE: Luke & Leia
@swsource Star Wars Week DAY 6 – LIGHT SIDE: Luke & Leia
@swsource Star Wars Week DAY 6 – LIGHT SIDE: Luke & Leia

@swsource star wars week DAY 6 – LIGHT SIDE: Luke & Leia


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4 months ago
A Chronological History Of All Sith (and Sith-adjacents, Such As The Inquisitorius And Knights Of Ren)
A Chronological History Of All Sith (and Sith-adjacents, Such As The Inquisitorius And Knights Of Ren)
A Chronological History Of All Sith (and Sith-adjacents, Such As The Inquisitorius And Knights Of Ren)

A chronological history of all Sith (and sith-adjacents, such as the Inquisitorius and Knights of Ren) in the current Star Wars canon, compiled after tedious research by yours truly.

Accurate as of November 2024.


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1 year ago

im taking media away from some of u guys until you can pass a 6th grade literary analysis test


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1 year ago
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series
ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages When They Enter The Series

ASOIAF POV Characters + Ages when they enter the series

Some characters’ ages are estimates.  Ages/estimates depend on which book they enter the series during, not necessarily their ages at a consistent time.  Calculated using | Fancasting 


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1 year ago

Yeah sure we’ve all binged a long fic, but have you ever read a WIP and followed someone’s life?

Tidbits of information - (“I graduated today!”) - and small joys (“It’s my birthday!”) and you get to be there to say “This chapter made me cry, happy birthday, thank you for gifting us this”.

I remember reading this fic of someone at the end of high school, older than me then. They seemed infinitely wise, spoke of their future career and getting into the college they wanted. I remember them posting on days they felt like nothing could bring them down - and on days the whole world did and it’s the aftermath of a hospital visit. Cancer, I think it was, their father. I got to the end of the story, I know their father was fine, but also they got to finish their WIP. I graduated three years later than them, still dutifully wrote thank you notes in every comment. I wonder if they remember me, or just the collective of people reading the story as it updates.

Four years ago I was into my first year of university, my first year of figuring out being out in public spaces. I made excuses as to why my name didn’t match my paperwork and read a fic on the train, the same five chapters over and over again for the next years as I thought the story abandoned. It updated this week after such a long hiatus, I left another thank you comment.

There’s an author I love, they update their stories like a clockwork. When they don’t, I check their blog, just to see if their doing alright, not because I feel like they owe me, just to ensure whether I better get out my laptop to write that really detailed university level essay chapter analysis to get them smiling when their day sucked.

And then, once, when I was 17, I read a fic that hadn’t updated in over a decade. I wasn’t even in primary school when it started posting. On the last chapter, I left a comment that, in retrospect, was horribly rambly and most likely full of grammar mistakes. The author replied and though I couldn’t see their face, I thought of them crying. They were married now, had children, and hadn’t thought about this fic in years. They went through their files again, found another half written chapter and an outline. I got two new chapters to read that year.

And then, recently, someone told me they got back into writing original fiction because of my comments. I get to read nearly weekly chapters.

I love binge reading a finished fic, but nothing is ever going to top the feeling of anticipation of waiting for a chapter, the pure joy when someone tells you I was done with this, but you made me think of it again, so this is for you.

Anyway, I think we should romanticize reading WIPs more, growing up alongside the authors writing the stories we love.


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11 months ago
Pov: You're Waking Up And It's June 1st

pov: you're waking up and it's june 1st

(happy pride month yall!)


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11 months ago
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters
A Song Of Ice And Fire + PoV Characters

A Song of Ice and Fire + PoV characters

“Nobody is a villain in their own story. We’re all the heroes of our own stories.” - George R. R. Martin


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2 weeks ago

how to weave subplots into your story without getting tangled in the mess

Subplots: the spicy side quests of your main narrative. They deepen your world, flesh out your characters, and keep things interesting. But if you’ve ever added one and ended up with a story that feels like it’s running in six directions at once… yeah. Let’s fix that.

1. your subplot should serve the main plot

Don’t just throw in a romance arc or a secret sibling reveal because it’s fun (though it is fun). Ask:  

- Does this subplot challenge the main character’s goals?  

- Does it echo or contrast the main theme?  

- Does it change something by the end?

If it’s just a cute side quest with no real impact, it’s fanfic material for your own story. Cool, but maybe not plot-essential.

2. intertwine, don’t parallel

Bad: your subplot exists in a bubble, running beside the plot but never touching it.  

Better: your subplot interacts with the main plot. Maybe it complicates things. Maybe it supports the MC in a moment of crisis. Maybe it explodes everything.

Example: your MC is hunting a killer, and the subplot is their failing marriage. Good subplotting means the stress of the hunt affects the marriage, and the marriage affects the hunt.

3. stagger your arcs

Your main plot might hit its midpoint twist at chapter 10. Have a subplot hit a *smaller* emotional beat around chapter 7 or 13. It keeps pacing dynamic and gives your readers something to chew on between big moments.

4. use subplots to develop side characters

Side characters are more than background noise. Give them wants. Give them stakes. Let their stories *collide* with your MC’s. That’s when the magic happens.

5. know when to shut it down 

Not every subplot needs a 3-act structure and a dramatic finale. Some are small. Some fade out naturally. Some just shift the perspective enough to reframe the main plot. If you’re tying up subplot #6 with a bow in the epilogue, maybe ask yourself if it really needed to be there.

6. outline the spiderweb 

It helps to map out how every subplot connects to the main story. Literally. Draw lines. Make a chaos diagram. It doesn’t have to be neat—just make sure those threads touch.

TL;DR:

Subplots are great. Subplots are juicy. But they’re not decoration—they’re infrastructure. Weave them into the story’s bones or risk writing 3 novels in one.


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notsoaveragebear - ramblings of a simple bear
ramblings of a simple bear

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