It’s Here! Thank You For Your Patience! Editing This Took FOREVER, But Now It’s Here For Your Reading

Already we got some art for the new chapter!! @axoltheartist has captured Bill’s EXPERT coin flip technique 😂😂

a very short comic of @sapphosscribe’s A Human Condition on AO3 (Ch 30, specifically) Bill’s coinflip spoke to me

AHHHH OH MY GOSH!! 😆💖💖 Guys, There’s fanart now! @ilay-snt has done an amazing job illustrating the prologue! Go check it out!

Chapter 1: Some sunny day…

Fanart for A Human Condition by @sapphosscribe

I’m in love with this story, so I was thinking, what if I did fanart for every chapter?

That’s the idea, let’s see if I can actually do it ahah… I’m going to die.

Anyway, read this fic, it’s really well written.

Writing Advice For Fanfics or Novels

Hello, my dears! As requested by @ilay-snt I thought I’d share my writing process with you all! I’m going to split this post into two sections of general advice and then how I personally construct a story.

Disclaimer: I’m no professional by any means. I’m basing this solely off two creative writing classes I took in college and what I find to be personally helpful so if it doesn’t work for you, that’s totally fine! Everyone writes differently!

General Advice:

1. First and most importantly: You Have to Write for Yourself.

Write the story that you want to read. Not only will it keep you motivated to keep going but it frees you to try whatever you want without being worried how it will be received by others. As long as you’re happy with your work, that’s all that matters. Your audience will find you.

(Hello audience! *waves excitedly*)

2. Write Everday

This one might sound a little daunting, but it doesn’t need to be a lot or necessarily “everyday”. It’s just a way to consistently practice, to help you find your author voice, and create a habit.

Writing everyday could be a poem or a paragraph or a whole chapter! It’s whatever you choose to make it just as long as you get something down. It doesn’t necessarily even need to be good. You can always go back and edit, but if you only write when inspiration strikes, you might never sit down to do it in the first place. Practice finding your way through the words to get at what you want, rather than waiting for the words to come to you.

If you’re REALLY really stuck. Then might I suggest you-.

3. Get Feedback

As a chronic second-guesser, I can’t tell you how helpful it is to have someone read your story and help structure the plot. I’ve had a lot of instances where something I’d been struggling with for days was resolved by getting coffee with a friend and having them look at it with new eyes.

Get yourself a beta reader or just someone who has good taste whose opinion you trust to help you work out problems. Two heads are often better than one!

4. Analyze media you admire

A lot of people like to limit it to reading authors you love and looking at the way they create stories, which is very helpful, but don’t neglect other forms of storytelling like movies and TV shows or even videogames! Think about what you like from your favorite things and why you like them.

As an example, one of my favorite pieces of media is the Mass Effect Trilogy. Mostly because it subverts the narrative of the Lone Hero archetype present in other franchises like Halo and Assassins Creed. The protagonist Shepard relies on their teammates abilities and support throughout the game to complete missions and eventually save the universe. Similarly, I like stories where there’s a cast of interesting and diverse characters surrounding the main protagonist who are essential to the plot.

Go dig through your own favorites and figure out what kind of characters you like, tropes you enjoy, and overarching themes that speak to you. From these, you can draw inspiration for your own stories and figure out what you want to write.

4. Take Breaks and Be Present

Writing doesn’t happen in a vacuum! If you feel like your inspiration is running dry or you’re in the middle of a block, go out and do things you enjoy or, better yet, try new things!

Be fully present in the moment and look at the world around you as if for the first time, talk to people you run into, or draw from your friends/family for inspiration. There’s a whole world of possibility out there just waiting to be written down or reinterpreted. Don’t be afraid to take breaks and have fun! Writing should never become a chore!

Now that that’s out of the way, let’s dig into my own personal process:

My Writing Process

1. Everything Begins with the Outline

When I have an idea for a story, I try to do a rough outline first of the big plot points: the beginning, the middle, and the end, then fill in as much as I can in between.

My chapter outlines are never very well defined up until I reach the point where I sit down to write. It’s only then I begin to flesh out what I want to do. I take everything from the previous chapter and what I know is coming up to shape what needs to happen in the moment. I work better with flexibility so I can wander off the path a little rather than rushing from point A to point B.

2. After the Outline, The Character Sheets

Character sheets are probably the most important part of my writing. I like to give my characters as much agency as possible and allow them to steer the story rather than the story steering them. Unfortunately, the only way to accomplish this is to know them inside and out.

Most of my character sheets start with the basics: what does this character want more than anything, what do they actually need, and what do they fear. From there, I can identify their goals for the story and for each chapter, their personality traits, their likes and dislikes, how they respond to conflict, etc.

When I’m writing, the character sheets are my own personal holy book. If I can’t make them move around the scene anymore, a quick look at that will normally get me back on track.

3. Structuring Each Chapter

Normally, I have a goal in mind (or several) I want to reach. Whether it’s progressing the plot or just one character’s arc, I allow those goals to drive the action, then set the characters loose like rats in a maze.

Often, I try to think “what can go wrong here?” and then how that character would react to the set backs or interact with each other based on that.

In a few cases, the characters just do what they want and then entirely new scenes develop I didn’t plot out beforehand from following after that instinct.

On the whole, I allow the characters A LOT of free will to shape the story while holding up the basic structure for them to work within and I’ve found it really makes the story come to life.

4. The Point of It All

Generally, everyone I’ve met who’s a writer has something to say and the story is the medium for that. The most important thing when I’m writing and I’m buried neck deep in the twists and turns of the plot is to not forget why exactly I’m writing it in the first place. So I have a little manifesto of sorts at the top of my outline, only a couple sentences at most, that strips the entire story down to the one central idea I’m trying to convey or an overarching theme.

For example, if I had to sum up the central idea of House in the Cerulean Sea by TJ Klune (Great book by the way, can’t recommend it enough) it’s that true family accepts you for who you are and can come from unexpected places. Also, it’s essential to stand up to unjust systems in defense of others.

I try to find my own my own theme like this to keep in sight for my story. So I don’t veer too far from the purpose of it.

Anyway, that’s my advice for any other writers who are starting out, hope this was helpful in some way! All of you have a good day! 💖💖

FANART GUYS!!! THEYRE TOO CUTE 😭😭

Come check out @dontjinxit18’s scene from ch. 29 of A Human Condition!

Sapphosscribe’s ‘A Human Condition’ chapter 29

Any excuse I can get to not draw a background would be greatly appreciated, thanks. @sapphosscribe

WE GOT FANART FOR Ch. 24!! Everyone gather round and feast your eyes! (Except for Bill cause he can’t see ☹️) @knockknockwhosthereartistism has done another great job!

He won’t drink it unless it’s silly

From chapter 24 @sapphosscribe

The vibes Mabel is bringing to her personal Bill Redemption Quest in A Human Condition. 😂😂

(Literally have a chapter note somewhere about Bill mocking her for thinking love conquers all. She’s great. Love her. 🥰😜)

I HOPE NO ONE DONE IT YET!!! The moment on the stream, (after Billford dropping) i was laughing so hard

(reapload the picture because i fambled with words)

FANART FROM @ilay-snt FOR CHAPTER 2 OF A HUMAN CONDITION! EEEEE!! Wowzers this is certainly keeping me motivated and jolly this season. I think you’ll all like what I’ve got planned… 😉

A human condition chapter 2

@sapphosscribe

School ended so I finally got the chance to finish this :D

A delay in this week’s update for A Human Condition:

Hello dear readers! 2025 is being feisty so far, I haven’t gotten much writing done this week since my cat got sick, needed surgery, and I have to watch so she doesn’t rip out her stitches. The fic will most likely be updated either mid-week or next Sunday.

Much love to you all!

Not to be a critic or anything, buuut I found some typos in AHC. If someone were to, sayyy, write up a document pointing them out as a poorly disguised excuse to reread the whole thing from the beginning, would you be okay with that? Would you *want* the hypothetical document????? If it were to exist?

Umm??? Absolutely, I’d love that!! 🥰 I always try to correct as many typos as I can while editing but, tbh sometimes ya girl is half asleep OR I add in scenes or tweak lines that create mistakes I don’t catch.

I was going to go back once it was finished to comb through and fix as many as I could, but if you’re volunteering I’ll gladly accept your services!

Thanks a bunch! 💖

We got some Billford and Fiddlestan parallels this morning everybody! @knockknockwhosthereartistism killed it with this piece! Come check it out 🥰

One last piece for Chp. 29! Ofc I had to draw some Fiddlestan in there

@sapphosscribe