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THE LETTER (by joud abu rashed)

Words: A single distinct meaningful element of speech or writing, used with others (or sometimes alone) to form a sentence and typically shown with a space on either side when written or printed. Words are a way to express one’s self, they show emotion, they might hurt someone, end relationships, start wars, they can be used as a weapon, since words are an important factor of both freedom and democracy, but most importantly words impact people, either negatively or positively depending on the situation. the war has ended a year ago marking a new age of democracy, it started since poverty was spreading like an illness due to the evils of monarchy so naturally the people protested their rights using their words but they weren’t heard the government was deaf to their pleas so a war eventually broke out in order to gain justice. Chaos and confusion that’s was how I lived after all I was a child an orphan who lost both parents and any sense of peace or security I ever had. I was lost, starving, with no will to live in this cruel world. Along with the bloodshed, something happened or rather someone came and rescued me. 

His name was Ashton Arlert, He was a kind man with a heart of gold. He took me in, provided me with every necessity. He taught me how to read and write, how to use a gun and protect myself just in case I find myself in a difficult position, but most importantly he gave me a will, a will to live. After years of suffering the war ended which lead me to decide to live a normal life, so I moved out to pursue my own career as a ghostwriter in a small company. You see after the war there was a huge decrease in people who knew how to write, which meant ghostwriters (especially for letters) became widely popular. My job required me to listen to people, to observe and analyze their emotions then find the right words that fit the message they want to present. I had my own life, friends, responsibilities, etc  yet Ashton never left my mind, he was like a father to me and I never showed him how much I appreciated what he had done towards me so I decided to write a letter to him. I was a professional writer with tons of experience yet I struggled with it (ironic isn’t it). For days and days all I would do is stare at an empty piece of paper with a cramped hand longing for words. Needless to say I was frustrated. I wrote and I wrote as if I was running out of time but nothing, just nothing. Everything I wrote would soon become another crumpled piece of paper in the trash, till one day while the smell of my morning coffee was mixing with the smell of ink coming from my pen I suddenly found the words that I longed for. I ran to the post office with the feeling of  relief in my lungs and a hint of excitement in my eyes. It was a quite night when he received the wax sealed letter, he looked at the handwriting a sense of nostalgia flooded him. He held it with his wrinkled hands as he read it with tears flooding his ocean blue eyes. The letter simply said “Thank you, Ashton, for everything. Sincerely Nadia” A simple phrase that’s all it took to bring a grown man to tears.

✶﹐STARS SECRET DIARY﹒ᶻz ☆

I just thought this would be a cool thing to do !! ♪

Hello everyone! My name is star (not really) but you can call me dreamcatcher if you want! I'm a Capricorn. My favorite colors are pink and yellow. I'm an infp and my favorite food is anything pasta!

LIKES :D

★ Art, painting, fashion, writing, creative writing, crochet, amigurumi, converse shoes, sparkly/flashy items, my room, food, avocados, horror movies, Stu Macher (my soulmate), science, biology, etc

DISLIKES D:

★ Ignorant people (like educate yourself), invading space, no respect for boundaries, racist mofos, transphobia, homophobia, math, people who can't mind their business, mean mofos, etc.

FAVORITES !!:

shows - I am not okay with this, the girl from nowhere and stranger things

movies - IT, as above so below, mean girls, kick ass, the taking of Deborah Logan, paranorman, coraline and kubo and the two strings

artists - tylerthecreator, melanie martinez, ashnikko, poppy, tierra whack, rico nasty, baby tate, sza, kendrick lamar and cavetown.

FAVORITE SONGS !?:

20 something - sza

after the storm by kali uchis (feat. tylerthecreator)

come on, let's go by tylerthecreator

pluto by melanie martinez

we'll never have sex by leith ross

love by kendrick lamar

hell n back by bakar

glued by melanie martinez

So I’m going to actually do something with this blog.

About me: I am 21 years old and I’m into a lot of things. My name one here is armchairthinker is mostly because the  knowledge comes from credible sources I find on my couch 😂 (Trey the Explainer, North 02, Biblaridion, etc)

I won’t be saying I’m an expert but someone who has some common sense.

I’m also a writer and planning to show off what I got.

I am into world building and speculative evolution/fantasy. So most of my topics will be on that. I am also into paleontology.

If I seem off I am high functioning

Hare with young, oil on panel, Henriette Ronner-Knip (1821-1909)

Whoosh, whoosh. This is, now, the time when sun holds its highest place in the sky. this is when you step through the warm field of blooming poppies, lily sprouts, and tulip buds.

On this path of nurturing life, growth awaits you, welcomes vitality. Make a wish for a spark of life. Whether you seek a bountiful harvest, the blossoming of youth or fertility, The path of the hare leads you to the temple. Encounter his effigy. Offer him your devotion. Present your prayer.

When your wishes align with nature’s rhythm, only the hare can satisfy it. Always leave offerings—young fruit trees, tender buds or fresh herbage—to display your gratitude.

- Aelenist

(Context : snippet of a story with different types of gods with different utility. Please give feedback !)

𝕊𝔼𝕃𝔼ℕ𝔼

Ch. 2: Bambino

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word count: 922

tags: found family, nothing much really just a kid telling his baby brothers a story :)

a/n: as always, i have no beta-reader, no proof-reader- we die like real men. also, the story is told from Monet's perspective while the turtles are at most 5 or 6 and they're a young teen so they're putting it in a way they might understand while also reminiscing on the past way too much. Monet is also the oldest and took after Splinter the most with the way they speak (this might also be an excuse on why reading this might feel cliche, I'm sorry, i'm stuck in 2017) and now, enjoy!

A lonely man walked into the pet store. I expected to see a child behind him- dragging him by the hand, demanding for a fish to keep as a pet that would probably die in a week or to play with the puppies that jumped around next to the window so that passerbyers would be tempted to adopt one. He seemed tired, heavy eye bags underneath piercing dark eyes and yet he had this gentle smile on his lips. I don't think I will ever forget that smile.

I watched as he walked towards the reptile section, the very section I was resting in underneath my flickering hearing lamp. He glanced around, his reflection bouncing off the glass of the terrariums full of the animals I have watched come and go. None of them seem to catch his interest surprisingly, not even the pretty ones with patterns so colorful they were overwhelming to the eye. He caught my attention, I wanted to follow him around just to see what he might be looking for, maybe he just wanted to see what pets were available for a later date or he was one of those strange college students who came to just watch the lizards and not buy anything at all. I felt myself overthinking so much that I didn’t realize he was standing over the new baby turtle’s enclosure until I glanced his way again. There was a soft glow in his eyes as he knelt down to look at them closely. I remember when those turtles first came into the store, these tiny little eggs with colored markings, watching them hatch and be fed their first pellets. Was he going to take them home? Hopefully, it would be better if he bought all four of them instead of them being separated because an irresponsible child wanted to neglect a pet turtle. I wonder if he might want a fifth, an older turtle who no one wanted. Probably not. 

The man smiled one last time before he walked away towards the counter, sparking up a small conversation with the owner of the pet store. She was an older lady, a nice lady, treats us well. I couldn’t hear their conversation from here so I just went back to munching on the fresh celery that was left in my bowl and on the shrub flooring. Someday, someone will want to take me home. I think about that day a lot, especially everytime the others get picked. 

Some time went by before the old lady and the man were scooping up all four of the baby turtles and into a smaller glass enclosure so he could take them home. At least, he didn't separate them but then they looked towards me. This strange man motioned his hands in my direction and I honestly sat there a bit confused, celery hanging from my mouth, if I was as sentient as I am now I'd probably be pointing a finger to plastron and going ‘me’?. The old lady started rambling about how I was an old turtle who no one wanted and she was kind enough to keep me around as her own pet but even she couldn't hang onto me for much longer, always making down my price to the point I could just be tossed into the arms of the next customer. I watched as he stared at me for a while before he turned his back to my face and asked to take me home alongside the baby turtles.

The old lady's face beamed with joy as she made her way over and scooped me up, pressing her lips to my shell. The smell of her cheap perfume and powder overwhelming my senses. 

“My dear, you're finally going home and with such a kind man” 

A chirp left my beak as she took off the scarf around her neck and bundled me up, handing me over to the man who accepted me with no hesitation. After so many years, so many strange faces and sighs, someone is taking me home. I watched as the transaction went through before he waved goodbye to the old lady and I listened as I heard the bell hanging above the door ring one last time. I was a pet. 

And then came the part Splinter has spoken about every single time Michaelangelo asks how we came to be. 

“Hey! It's a cool story, Momo, now tell us!”

“I know Mikey, I know, I'm getting there”

I don't remember much, just the heavy footsteps that caught up to the man after he had sneaked around trying to follow but I can remember the force of his punches as he fought back when he was cornered. The man held onto us as tightly as he could before being outnumbered and he dropped the enclosure and myself onto the concrete. First there was the sound of glass shattering and then suddenly this green ooze was covering our bodies including his own. He yelled out in anguish and I felt my body shift in so many strange ways that caused me to throw up on the concrete, I didn’t even know turtles could throw up. When I turned around, the man had turned into this giant rat and you were all much bigger than the baby turtles I had watched crack out of their shells, this ooze was the start of a new life for all of us, a life of running and hiding…until we ended up here, in our home. 

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1. Choose Your Topic Wisely

Selecting a topic for your dissertation is a critical first step that sets the foundation for your entire research endeavor. This involves a comprehensive approach.

Relevance to Academic Discipline and Personal Interests

Choose a topic that aligns with your academic discipline and personal interests. This ensures that you are passionate about the subject matter, making the research process more engaging.

Consideration of Career Goals

Reflect on your career goals and aspirations. opt for a topic that not only complements your academic journey but also contributes to your professional growth. This alignment can enhance the practicality and relevance of your dissertation.

Guidance from Supervisor

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2. Check What’s Required

Understanding the requirements and expectations for your dissertation is crucial for successful completion. This step involves a detailed examination of marking criteria, module guidelines, and additional instructions:

Scrutinizing Marking Criteria

Thoroughly analyze the marking criteria provided by your educational institution. This ensures that your dissertation aligns with the assessment standards, maximizing your chances of achieving a favorable grade.

Grasping Academic Writing Expectations

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Word Count and Submission Details

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Additional Components

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3. Conduct In-Depth Research

The research phase of your dissertation involves a comprehensive exploration of existing literature to inform and support your study.

Literature Review

Conduct a thorough literature review to identify relevant sources, articles, and studies related to your chosen topic. This process allows you to understand the existing research landscape and identify gaps or areas for further exploration.

Development of Research Questions

Based on your literature review, formulate clear and concise research questions. These questions should guide the direction of your study, addressing specific aspects of the chosen topic. Articulating well-defined research questions contributes to the coherence of your dissertation.

Note-Taking and Source Organization

Systematically take notes on each source, capturing key findings, methodologies, and arguments. Organize your sources for easy reference during the writing phase. Implement a consistent method for citation and annotation to enhance traceability.

Critical Evaluation with Advisor Guidance

Engage with your advisor throughout the research process. Seek their guidance on critically evaluating the credibility and relevance of your chosen sources. A collaborative approach ensures that your research aligns with academic standards.

4. Develop a Strong Thesis Statement

The thesis statement serves as the focal point of your dissertation, encapsulating the main argument or research question. Crafting a robust thesis statement involves several considerations:

Specificity and Focus

Ensure that your thesis statement is specific and focused, avoiding broad or vague assertions. The clarity of your thesis statement sets the tone for the entire dissertation, guiding readers on the scope of your research.

Arguability

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Realism

Consider the feasibility of your thesis statement within the allocated time and space. Ensure that your chosen topic allows for comprehensive research and analysis without exceeding practical constraints.

Feedback from Peers and Supervisor

Share your draft thesis statement with your peers and supervisor. Solicit feedback on its clarity, coherence, and alignment with your research goals. Iterative refinement based on feedback enhances the strength of your thesis statement.

5. Proofread and Edit

Proofreading and editing are integral steps to refine the quality and presentation of your dissertation. This phase goes beyond mere error correction and involves a holistic evaluation:

Thorough Proofreading

After completing the initial draft, engage in thorough proofreading. Reading your dissertation aloud can reveal nuances and errors that might be overlooked during silent reading. Pay attention to grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

Environmental Change for Fresh Perspective

Changing your environment before proofreading allows you to view your work with fresh eyes. This change in perspective facilitates the identification of structural or stylistic improvements. Consider reviewing your dissertation in a quiet, distraction-free setting.

Focused Editing

Focus on specific aspects during the editing phase, such as grammar, syntax, and coherence. Addressing one element at a time prevents overwhelming and ensures a systematic refinement of your dissertation’s overall quality.

Structural Review

Conduct a comprehensive review of your dissertation’s structure and flow. Verify that your arguments are logically organized, and ideas progress in a coherent manner. Identify any sections that require clarification or expansion.

Formatting and Referencing

Check your dissertation’s adherence to formatting guidelines, including font, font size, margins, and line spacing. Ensure that all references are accurately cited following the preferred citation style of your academic institution.

6. Seek Feedback and Finalize

Gaining feedback from your advisor or board members is a pivotal step in enhancing the robustness of your dissertation. This phase involves a collaborative approach:

Specific Feedback Requests:

When seeking feedback, be specific about the areas you want to be reviewed. Request input on overall structure, argument strength, writing clarity, or any specific concerns you may have. This targeted approach streamlines the feedback process.

Openness to Constructive Criticism

Approach feedback with an open mind, understanding that constructive criticism is aimed at improvement. Embrace suggestions for refinement, even if they challenge your initial perspectives. Incorporating diverse feedback strengthens the scholarly merit of your work.

Implementation of Feedback

Actively implement the feedback received. Revise sections based on recommendations, clarify ambiguous points, and strengthen areas identified as weak. This iterative process ensures that your dissertation undergoes continuous improvement.

7. Submit

The final submission of your dissertation requires meticulous attention to guidelines and deadlines. Proper preparation ensures a smooth submission process.

Guideline Adherence

Review the submission guidelines provided by your educational institution. Ensure that your dissertation meets all specified requirements, including formatting, additional components, and submission format (online or hard copy).

Timely Submission

Adhere to the submission deadline to avoid penalties or rejections. Plan your submission well in advance, considering the time required for any administrative processes. Late submissions may impact your academic assessment.

Submission Format

If online submission is the designated method, prepare a PDF file according to the platform’s specifications. Include any additional information, such as your student ID number or dissertation title, as required by the submission portal.

Hard Copy Submission

For institutions requiring hard copy submission, follow the specified procedures. Submit a bound copy of your dissertation to the department office, adhering to any additional requirements such as multiple copies, title page, abstract, and table of contents.

Consultation with Advisor

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Walter Moyer

A cowardly man runs away from his problems by joining the army. In the meantime, he befriends a peculiar man. Will he b...

Sent marking the lost boys + Star

How the boys and Star would react to you going up to them and rubbing up them to mark them with your sent ( NOT PISSING ON THEM )

No pronouns used

I %100 think they would do this to you first, but anyway...

Marko : is so confused. He thought you were coming over to cuddle with him so he opened his arms to you. But then you just started aggressively rubbing your skin on his, without a word. After like a minute you walked away and he was left there thinking 'what just happened?!?!'.(he looked to the others for an answer but they were all distracted by other things to see it happen)

Paul : is as horny as always.🙄 at first he's confused but figures it's a sexual thing so he lets it happen. He tries to do something back to return the favor but you shut him down. So he just tries his best to enjoy the attention from you. Then you walk away like nothing happened and he decides its best to not ask questions. ( seeing paul accept what happened so fast makes Marko even more confused)

Dwayne : likes it. It only takes him a second to figure out what your doing and he likes it. He thinks it sweet that you love them enough to mark what's yours. He enjoys every second of it but when you try to walk away he stops you. You think you can sent mark him and just walk away? Nope. He's pulling you into his lap holding you there with a bear trap like grip. Your cuddling for the rest of the night

David : is competitive. He lets you mark him for all of 2 seconds before he stops you and starts to sent mark you harder. You don't let that stop you, so you try harder as well. It looks absolutely ridiculous, but by the end you both smell equally like the other. Satisfied you walk away, but expect him to sent mark you alot more now that he knows your doing it to them.

Star : is ticklish. You walk up to her and within a few seconds all you can hear is her laughter echoing throughout the cave. She's also curious 🤔 so when your done she'll be the only one to ask you what you did and why. Once your done explaining it to her, she gets excited and asks to mark you back. You happily ablige her and laugh too as you feel just ticklish.

This is the 11th day of 

waiting. 

seated in the same spot 

grindling my hands 

to type

and 

what gets out is 

ddddhhhhdhdjdhdhddhkjsdhjdsh. 

Whatever part of the 

brain that platitudinized me to write 

is dead now. 

It made me fall in love, 

and now—kaput—it's gone.

Uuuuh what a devoid day ! 

I am dissolving 

into a desolate form.