Hello, So I Was Writing A Prologue For My Book And I Forgot How To Add Action In A Scene , Instead Of

Hello, so I was writing a prologue for my book and I forgot how to add action in a scene , instead of like ex. 'A drinking coffee and suddenly B comes crashing to the coffee shop thingy' but better ways to add action.

Thank you<3

Hi, there! While there's no one size fits all way to add action, we have some blog posts that I think could really help!

How To Write A Vivid Setting And Improve Your Story | Writer’s Relief
Writer's Relief
Here’s how you can write a vivid setting and improve your story—use these tips to create a memorable setting!
How To Write A Great Fight Scene For Your Story | Writer’s Relief
Writer's Relief
Write a great fight scene for your story using these tips that pack a punch!
How To Build Tension And Suspense In Your Writing | Writer’s Relief
Writer's Relief
Build tension and suspense in your writing using these 10 great tips! Here’s how to ramp up the tension and suspense for your readers.

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He has Fushimi sit down in a chair and sets newspaper around them, getting some scissors and Fushimi's hair gel (and probably being like 'since when do you like hair gel so much anyway'). Fushimi tells him not to go overboard and Yata's all I won't I won't, I won't do anything to make you look weird I promise. Fushimi rolls his eyes like he's not so sure about that but he still sits there properly while Yata tries to decide what to do with Fushimi's hair. Imagine him just running his hands through it and even though Fushimi doesn't say anything he likes the feeling of Yata's hands massaging his scalp. Yata quietly asks why Fushimi started changing his hair in Scepter 4 anyway and Fushimi is silent for a moment before he mutters that he thought 'that guy's' hairstyle seemed more appropriate.Yata says he always liked Fushimi's hair in Homra better and Fushimi says if Yata's going to do that to his hair then don't even bother – that isn't the person Fushimi is anymore. Yata says Fushimi isn't his father either though, so why not try and find something that's just his own. Fushimi's surprised to hear Yata say it so plainly and then he gives this rueful smile and is like 'I'm in your hands, Misaki,' Yata grins and is all careful or I'll leave you bald.

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