This Hits Right In The Feels

This hits right in the feels

Black and white comic with simple digital drawings.
Panel 1: Triangle head person talking to square head person. They say, "I just wish I'd been smarter, so I knew what to do.
Panel 2: Triangle: "Or kinder."
Panel 3: Triangle looks down.
Panel 4: Black space. "Mostly, kinder."
Panel 5: Triangle looking down.
Panel 6: They look up as a hand is put on their shoulder.
Panel 1: Square touching Triangle's shoulder and asking, "Did you try?"
Panel 2: Close-up of hand on shoulder with Triangle saying, "...I don't know."
Background turns black.
Panel 3: Triangle as a child attached by the hand to an adult. As an adult they say, "I don't think I thought to try."
Panel 4: The adult tugs the attached limb to get Triangle's attention.
Panel 1: Adult talking with one finger up in explanation. The speech bubbles fill the black background.
They show Triangle as a kid in various forms of danger, a house fire, falling off a building, a large person drooling and going to grab them...
Panel 2: Triangle looking up with their attached hand leading out of the panel.
Background back to white.
Panel 1: Triangle as an adult saying, "I was taught to be safe, first."
Panel 2: Triangle and Square looking at each other.
Panel 3: Square says, "...Huh."
Panel 4: Close-up of Triangle's face. From out of the panel Square says, "What do you think now?"
Panel 1: Triangle frowning and sighing.
Panel 2: Triangle closing their eyes in frustration and scratching their neck as they say, "...I think it's harder to do, but I want to be more than one thing."
Panel 3: The two standing, Triangle crossing their arms and Square smiling. Triangle says, "I want to try my best on purpose."
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The man

A man who could so easily kill you, torture you until death. Lulls you into eating his food.

For what need is there to tamper.

You eat the first bite, savoring it deeply, then start gorging on the rest like a ravenous pig. Your appetite is insatiable. You're starved.

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1 month ago

Got any Fics similar to this?

A Shadowpeach fanfic where Macaque observes Wukong and the pilgrims on their journey. Seeing how happy Wukong is and believing that he's been forgotten, Macaque decides to leave instead of dying.

Or maybe one of the pilgrims notices him and confronts him just before Macaque leaves

I need it pls


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4 weeks ago

Normal day

Normal Day

Macaque is just being a little shit

Also Macaque is so damn fun to draw!

I haven't had ths much fun drawing in a while.

Also who is someone you like to draw a lot!

And does anyone have any suggestions for anything LMK to draw?

It can be platonic or Romantic or just a character!

And sorry for yapping

Goodbye have a nice day viewer!


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1 month ago

This is so helpful!!!

Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”


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2 months ago

My SATBK fanfic

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An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Hope you guys like it,it is my first fanfiction That I posted


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1 month ago

What's up?

Hey, I'm Av

Here I share headcanons,theories and sometimes art

I do fanfiction a lot. But I will almost rarely complete them. Since I just get bored.

And I am always in fandoms even if it has been years since I have posted anything about it. Don't worry I still love it.


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