This is a really good article about how quickly people actually die from cuts and punctures inflicted by swords and knives. However, it’s really really long and I figured that since I was summarizing for my own benefit I’d share it for anyone else who is writing fiction that involves hacking and slashing your villain(s) to death. If you want the nitty gritty of the hows and whys of this, you can find it at the original source.
…even in the case of mortal wounds, pain may not reach levels of magnitude sufficient to incapacitate a determined swordsman.
Causes of death from stabs and cuts:
massive bleeding (exsanguination) - most common
air in the bloodstream (air embolism)
suffocation (asphyxia)
air in the chest cavity (pneumothorax)
infection
Stabbing vs cutting:
Stabbing someone actually takes very little force if you don’t hit bone or hard cartilage.
The most important factor in the ease of stabbing is the velocity of the blade at impact with the skin, followed by the sharpness of the blade.
Stabbing wounds tend to close after the weapon is withdrawn.
Stabbing wounds to muscles are not typically very damaging. Damage increases with the width of the blade.
Cutting wounds are typically deepest at the site of initial impact and get shallower as force is transferred from the initial swing to pushing and pressing.
Cutting wounds have a huge number of factors that dictate how deep they are and how easily they damage someone: skill, radial velocity, mass of the blade, and the size of the initial impact.
Cutting wounds along the grain of musculature are not typically very damaging but cutting wounds across the grain can incapacitate.
Arteries vs veins:
Severed veins have almost zero blood pressure and sometimes even negative pressure. They do not spurt but major veins can suck air in causing an air embolism.
Cutting or puncturing a vein is usually not fatal.
Severed arteries have high blood pressure. The larger arteries do spurt and can often cause death due to exsanguination.
Body parts as targets:
Severing a jugular vein in the neck causes an air embolism and will make the victim collapse after one or two gasps for air.
Severing a carotid artery in the neck cuts off the blood supply to the brain but the victim may be conscious for up to thirty seconds.
Stabbing or cutting the neck also causes the victim to aspirate blood that causes asphyxiation and death.
Severing a major abdominal artery or vein would cause immediate collapse, but this takes a fairly heavy blade and a significant amount of effort because they are situated near the spine.
Abdominal wounds that only impact the organs can cause death but they do not immediately incapacitate.
Severing an artery in the interior of the upper arm causes exsanguination and death but does not immediately incapacitate.
Severing an artery in the palm side of the forearm causes exsanguination and death but does not immediately incapacitate.
Severing the femoral artery at a point just above and behind the knee is the best location. Higher up the leg it is too well protected to easily hit. This disables and will eventually kill the victim but does not immediately incapacitate.
Cutting across the muscles of the forearm can immediately end the opponent’s ability to hold their weapon.
Cutting across the palm side of the wrist causes immediate loss of ability to hold a weapon.
Stab wounds to the arm do not significantly impact the ability to wield a weapon or use it.
Cuts and stab wounds to the front and back of the legs generally do not do enough muscle damage to cause total loss of use of that leg.
Bone anywhere in the body can bend or otherwise disfigure a blade.
The brain can be stabbed fairly easily through the eyes, the temples, and the sinuses.
Stabs to the brain are more often not incapacitating.
The lungs as targets:
Slicing into the lung stops that lung from functioning, but the other lung continues to function normally. This also requires either luck to get between the ribs or a great deal of force to penetrate the ribs.
Stabbing the lung stops that lung from functioning, but the other lung continues to function normally. It is significantly easier to stab between ribs than to slice.
It is possible to stab the victim from the side and pass through both lungs with an adequate length blade. It is very unlikely that this will happen with a slicing hit.
“Death caused solely by pneumothorax is generally a slow process, occurring as much as several hours after the wound is inflicted.”
Lung punctures also typically involve the lung filling with blood, but this is a slow process.
The heart as a target:
I’m just going to quote this paragraph outright with a few omissions and formatting changes for clarity because it’s chock-full of good info:
…[stabbing] wounds to the heart the location, depth of penetration, blade width, and the presence or absence of cutting edges are important factors influencing a wounded duelist’s ability to continue a combat.
Large cuts that transect the heart may be expected to result in swift incapacitation…
…stab wounds, similar to those that might be inflicted by a thrust with a sword with a narrow, pointed blade may leave a mortally wounded victim capable of surprisingly athletic endeavors.
Essentially, the heart can temporarily seal itself well enough to keep pressure up for a little while if it’s a simple stab. The arteries around the heart, while they are smaller and harder to hit, actually cause incapacitation much more quickly.
Thor Ragnarok Gag Reel via torrilla
RFA w/MC who can sing RFA(+V&Unknown) w/MC coming home drunk RFA helping MC with hw/studying RFA(+V&Unknown) playing horror games w/MC RFA w/Kpop dancer MC RFA w/MC who is scared of lightning RFA(+V) w/MC being Jumin’s security guard RFA w/bilingual MC RFA try admitting their feelings but get drunk instead RFA w/jealous MC RFA sees MC with glasses RFA(+Unknown) w/delinquent MC RFA cuddling RFA(+V&Unknown) go to Universals with MC for Halloween RFA(+V) w/wheelchair-bound MC RFA(+V&Unknown) w/secret agent MC RFA w/MC having a deadly allergic reaction RFA(+V&Unknown) in the Pokemon world RFA w/somebody getting too friendly with MC RFA w/MC adorably trying to get their attention RFA(+V&Unknown) w/short MC RFA(+V) w/asexual MC RFA(+V&Unknown) w/Broadway actress MC RFA(+Unknown) w/tall MC RFA(+V&Unknown) w/bad cook MC who makes something good RFA(+V&Unknown) w/MC who have intensively bad periods RFA(+V&Unknown) which ones are/are not virgins RFA(+V&Unknown) w/middle school MC RFA(+V&Unknown) what kind of Valentine’s chocolate they like RFA(+Unknown) when Valentine’s dinner goes wrong RFA(+Unknown) reveiving a homemade Valentine’s gift from MC RFA(+Unknown) going iceskating for Valentine’s Day RFA(+V&Unknown) being loaded with work on Valentine’s Day RFA with MC who woke up panicking from a nightmare while they were gone RFA(+V&Unknown) with an MC with an artistic career RFA(+V) with an MC who loves to sing but is really bad at it RFA(+V&Unknown) seeing MC in a swimsuit for the first time Unknown w/MC who’s like Seven Zen, Jumin, Seven w/sick MC Yoosung under a mistletoe V & Unknown exchanging Christmas gifts w/MC Jumin & V on Christmas morning w/MC Zen’s first Christmas alone w/MC Jumin & Unknown go sledding w/MC Yoosung spending Christmas with young MC Jumin reacting to MC who always spends Christmas alone Seven reacting to MC being more workaholic than he is Jumin & Unknown w/MC being insecure about her smile/laugh Seven & Unknown react to MC calling them the ‘Choi Bois’ Jumin & Seven take MC to NY for the Near Year’s ball drop Seven and Zen jump out and scare MC and making her cry
Pairings:
Fluffy Juzen & Yooseven HCs
Fics:
Jumin celebrating with birthday with MC and V Casual date with Yoosung First wedding dance with Zen and short!MC
ok so i have a lot of friends + writer friends & they don’t know the difference between who and whom, and to be honest i didnt know the difference until not that long ago
what u have to do is think of the pronouns ur using
WHO is used to replace THEY/HE/SHE etc.
He loves chocolate cake. I know someone who loves chocolate cake.
WHOM is used to replace THEM/HIM/HER etc..
I saw her today. You saw whom today?
AND HERE’S THE TRICKY PART: if the pronoun comes after a CONJUNCTION (with, yet, but, so, or, etc.), you KEEP the pronoun, and put it at the BEGINNING of the sentence.
I got all this way with them. With whom did you get all this way?
i hope this helps!! i tried to make it as clear as possible but its ok if its not clear to u!! it took me awhile to figure the difference out & not everyone will get it immediately.
Hey guys! As a writer myself, it’s hard to have a lot of resources for writing in one place. That’s why I decided to create this masterpost, and maybe make more if I find future resources. I hope you like it, and expect to see more masterposts like this in the future!
Character
Appearance Generator
Archetypes Generator
Character Generator
Character Traits Generator
Family Generator
Job/Occupation Generator, (II)
Love Interest Generator
Motive Generator
Name Generator
Personality Generator, (II)
Quick Character Generator
Super Powers Generator
Names
Brand Name Generator
Medicine Title Generator
Name Generator
Quick Name Generator
Vehicle Generator
Town Name Generator
Plot
First Encounter Generator
First Line Generator, (II)
Plot Generator, (II), (III)
Plot Device Generator
Plot Twist Generator
Quick Plot Generator
Setting/World-Building
City Generator
Fantasy Race Generator
Laws Generator
Pet Generator
Setting Generator
Species Generator
Terrain Generator
Prompts
Subject Generator
”Take Three Nouns” Generator
Word Prompt Generator
Misc
Color Generator
Decision Generator
Dialogue Generator
Journey Generator
Title Generator, (II), (III)
Just a few I found from the writing tips tag!
Writing action / @berrybird
How to create a strong voice in your writing / @collegerefs
How to plot a complex novel in one day! / @lizard-is-writing
8 ways to get past writer’s block / @kiramartinauthor
psa for writers / @dasakuryo
”Write Using Your 5 Senses” / @ambientwriting
How People Watching Improves Your Writing / @wherethetransthingsare
Writing Science Fiction: Tips for Beginners / @fictionwritingtips
Creating Likeable Characters / @authors-haven
Descriptive words / @somekindofstudent
Words to replace “Said” / @msocasey
Obscure color words / @mintsteelpeachlilac
Words to spice up your stories / @busyibee
Words to describe someone’s voice
Words to Use Instead of Very / @gaybybirth
Touchy Feely Words / @gaybybirth
Stephen King’s Top 20 Rules for Writers
”But my plot isn’t UNIQUE or BIG enough!” / @youreallwrite
8 Things Every Creative Should Know / @adamjk
(How To) Get Over Comparing Yourself to Other Creatives / @adamjk
How to Get Over Common Creative Fears (Maybe) / @adamjk
14 Tips From Stephen King On Writing / @i-can-give-you-prompts
Electronic Thoughts / @eruditekid
“Mix About Writing” An Instrumental Mix / @shadowofemirates
Shut Up, I’m Writing! / @ninadropdead
Chill / @endlessreveries
Breathtaking Film Scores / @tweedskirts
Music to Write to Vol. 1: Starlight / @crestadeen
Music for Written Words / @ghoulpatch
Dead Men Tell No Tales / @scamandersnewt
Fatale / @dolcegf
All These Things that I’ve Done / @referenceforwriters
Feeling Soaking into Your Bones / @verylondon
I Can Feel Your Pulse in the Pages / @rphelper
Morally Ambiguous / @scamandersnewt
Wonderwall / @wheelerwrites
Pythia / @mazikeene
Ballet: To Dance / @tanaquil
For Writing
ZenPen: A minimalist writing website to keep you free of distractions and in the flow.
The Most Dangerous Writing App: A website where you have to keep typing or all of your writing will be lost. It helps you keep writing…kind of. You can choose between a time or word count limit!
Evernote: An online website where you can take notes and save the product to your laptop and/or smartphone!
Writer, the Internet Typewriter: It’s just you and your writing, and you can save your product on the website if you create an account.
Wordcounter: A website to help check your word and character count, and shows words you’re using frequently.
Monospace: An Android app for writing on the go when you feel the inspiration, but you don’t have your laptop on you!
For Productivity
Tide: An app that combines a pomodoro-esque timer with nature sounds and other noises! (Google Play / Apple Store)
ClearFocus: An Android app with a pomodoro-type time counter to let you concentrate easier and stay productive.
Forest: An app with a time counter to keep you focused and off your phone, and when you complete the time limit, a tree grows in your garden! (Google Play / Apple Store)
SelfControl: A Mac downloadable app that blocks you from distracting mail servers, websites, and other things!
@writeworld
@dialouge-prompts
@oopsprompts
@prompts-for-the-otp
@creativepromptsforwriting
@the-modern-typewriter
@theprofessionalpromptmaker
@writers-are-writers
@otp-imagines-cult
@witterprompts
@havetobememes
@auideas
@putthepromptsonpaper
@promptsonpaper
@fyotpprompts
@otpisms
@soprompt
@otpprompts
@ablockforwritersblock
@awritersnook
@writeworld
@anomalously-written
@awritersnook
@clevergirlhelps
@referenceforwriters
@whataboutwriting
@thewritershelpers
@nimblesnotebook
@slitheringink
DIY Crochet Flower Patterns
Happy Patty Crochet on Etsy
Want to create a religion for your fictional world? Here are some references and resources!
General:
General Folklore
Various Folktales
Heroes
Weather Folklore
Trees in Mythology
Animals in Mythology
Birds in Mythology
Flowers in Mythology
Fruit in Mythology
Plants in Mythology
Folktales from Around the World
Africa:
Egyptian Mythology
African Mythology
More African Mythology
Egyptian Gods and Goddesses
The Gods of Africa
Even More African Mythology
West African Mythology
All About African Mythology
African Mythical Creatures
Gods and Goddesses
The Americas:
Aztec Mythology
Haitian Mythology
Inca Mythology
Maya Mythology
Native American Mythology
More Inca Mythology
More Native American Mythology
South American Mythical Creatures
North American Mythical Creatures
Aztec Gods and Goddesses
Asia:
Chinese Mythology
Hindu Mythology
Japanese Mythology
Korean Mythology
More Japanese Mythology
Chinese and Japanese Mythical Creatures
Indian Mythical Creatures
Chinese Gods and Goddesses
Hindu Gods and Goddesses
Korean Gods and Goddesses
Europe:
Basque Mythology
Celtic Mythology
Etruscan Mythology
Greek Mythology
Latvian Mythology
Norse Mythology
Roman Mythology
Arthurian Legends
Bestiary
Celtic Gods and Goddesses
Gods and Goddesses of the Celtic Lands
Finnish Mythology
Celtic Mythical Creatures
Gods and Goddesses
Middle East:
Islamic Mythology
Judaic Mythology
Mesopotamian Mythology
Persian Mythology
Middle Eastern Mythical Creatures
Oceania:
Aboriginal Mythology
Polynesian Mythology
More Polynesian Mythology
Mythology of the Polynesian Islands
Melanesian Mythology
Massive Polynesian Mythology Post
Maori Mythical Creatures
Hawaiian Gods and Goddesses
Hawaiian Goddesses
Gods and Goddesses
Creating a Fantasy Religion:
Creating Part 1
Creating Part 2
Creating Part 3
Creating Part 4
Fantasy Religion Design Guide
Using Religion in Fantasy
Religion in Fantasy
Creating Fantasy Worlds
Beliefs in Fantasy
Some superstitions:
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Re-organized Masterlist: June 2017. Updated after every new fic.
The previous masterlist [here] was getting long in a particular section… so to even it out, we’re trying categories! There may not be a big difference between some categories, but its main purpose is to even out the masterlist without being too messy.
Tags We Use:
#mysme-fics
#adminnao
#adminri
Note: The old HCs/fics written by Admin E are untagged, as there had not been a need to distinguish herself before having co-admins.
#character names (e.g. yoosung kim, saeyoung choi, etc.)
Categorized by the genre/section that matches the most.
MC stealing RFA’s clothes and sleeping on their bed
MC under the mistletoe with another guy
Confessing to their crush (Jumin, Seven, V)
Foreigner Cousin Kisses MC [Fan Favourite]
Drunk person kissing MC
MC ignoring because of toothache [Admin Ri Favourite]
MC Announces Her Pregnancy [Fan Favourite]
Infertile MC
RFA React to MC bad with being touched
MC with Chapped Lips
Waiting out the Thunderstorm
RFA with their Kids
Accidentally Hits MC [NEW]
Bullied MC
RFA Reacts to MC’s death
Kidnapped MC [Fan Favourite]
Unrequited, One-sided Love for RFA [Admin Ri Favourite]
Disoriented after sex MC
MC being loud in bed
MC’s first time
Jealous of MC giving affection to pet (Jumin, Seven, Zen)
Walking in on MC pleasuring herself (Zen, Seven, Jumin)
MC who’s always almost nude around house
MC grinding on their thigh
Threesome (MCxJuminxZen)
MC having persistent hiccups
Drunk MC
Self-harming MC
Insomniac MC with Anxiety
MC with Depression [Effe - HC Ver.]
MC with a Huge Scar
Depressed MC [Ri - Mini-Fic Ver.]
MC has Anxiety Attack
MC as a Birthday Present [Fan Favourite]
MC with Period Pains [Fan Favourite]
MC Trips On a Stranger Misunderstanding
MC Wearing Kitty Lingerie
RFA in relationships falling for MC (Fluff) [Admin Ri Favourite]
Seven/Saeran Birthday
Chubby MC Asks to Break Up [Fan Favourite]
Sick and dying MC
RFA enlisting
Playing laser tag together
Model MC
Professional ballerina / soprano MC
Top lawyer for NSA MC
Underground MMA fighter MC (Zen and Jumin Reacts)
Professional ballroom dancer MC
ATLAB AU
Wolfpack AU
Wolfpack AU sidestory (JuminZen week special)
Wonderland AU
Soulmate AU:
707 - Colours
V - Visions [NEW]
Stolen Diaries AU :
Victim #1 : Saeran Choi [NEW]
There’s so many, it needs another section of its own. Majority written by Admin E. ;)
MC with fish-keeping hobby
MC with out-of-control baking hobby
MC that likes things neat and in order
Hardcore Beyonce fan MC
Messy MC
Young MC
MC named Elizabeth the 3rd [Fan Favourite]
British MC
Bi/Poly/Pansexual MC
Narcissist MC
Avoidant-Dismissive MC
MC who wears Badass Makeup
Bilingual MC
Fencer MC
MC with Glasses
Jobless MC
Magical Singing Voice MC
MC that looks like a Mini-RFA
Native American MC
Never been kissed before MC
Sailor mouth MC
Super tall MC
Tattooed MC
Trust fund kid MC
RFA Attends MC’s graduation
Drunk MC (SFW)
Long distance relationship with MC
MC busy with schoolwork and ignores RFA
MC singing romantic songs
MC that ran away from home
MC trying on wedding dress
MC Forced into Arranged Marriage
Receiving a bad Christmas gift from MC
MC sending pics of cute animals
MC having prince-like childhood friend
MC with heavy menstrual cramps
Convincing MC to stay the night
Family Christmas Party with MC
Meeting MC’s parents
Overly stressed due to studying MC
Teaching MC to swim
MC turned off by Narcissism
RFA watches RHPS with MC
HCs/fics revolving around a specific character and MC.
Time Capsule [NEW] [Fan Favourite]
MC trying a role
MM: Life After (Admin E’s long fanfic series)
Mermaid MC
Talk about MC’s past
Sulky after Zen’s kiss scene MC
Stressed MC
Frustrated MC
Zen asks MC for help with new role
React: Insecure MC who is “different” from Zen
Older MC (NSFW)
Awakening MC’s Inner Beast (NSFW)
Zen and MC on their honeymoon (NSFW)
Deep friendship with MC
Commoner Date
Jumin laughing
Lashing out on MC
Paper Planes (JuminV week special)
Reversing Roles (NSFW) [Admin Nao Favourite]
Not Always Prepared for “Action” (NSFW)
Lazy day with MC
MC working in Seven’s agency
707: The Cold Treatment
Forget me not Fanfic [Admin Nao Favourite] [COMPLETED]
Walking in on MC changing (NSFW)
MC Eats Last HBC (NSFW)
Seven as a dad
Insecure Saeran
Fangirling over BAP MC
Cute date turns NSFW (NSFW)
VDay: Jealous of Seven (NSFW)
Saeran in College Imagine
Artificial Stars, Real Feelings [Fluff]
Unknown Kidnaps MC [Fluff] [Fan Favourite]
Where Are You Now? [Ri’s Fanfic]
Unknown Hacks into Camera at MC’s Apartment
Protecting MC from Bully
Scrapbook gift from V
Surprising MC with his eye surgery
Lanterns
12 Shutter Clicks (ANGST) [Admin Nao Favourite]
All That I Have (ANGST)
(note: normally we won’t write him.)
Before Vanderwood Met 707
Yoosung Birthday Event Specials: [Here]
Zen Birthday Event Specials: [Here]
(the b-day events include HCs, fics, sfw and nsfw)
V-Day 2017 Specials: [Here]
RFA but they hold furry conventions instead of fundraisers and Vanderwood is the anti who stands outside with signs protesting
and in this moment, I am Vanderwood.
this is why Mint Eye was created
What program do you use to draw???!!!
I use clip studio paint for sketching and sometimes lineart and photoshop for everything else 😊
A side blog, meant to contain useful lifehacks and references. Useful for me, of course.
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