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I cry for the butcher

Gold silver and copper

cake my tongue

No harm can ever come from

my mother's praying hands

My filthy mouth -

I harmed myself

Orange wedge lip

Clenched ivory threat

Pulled the trigger with my tongue

Blood orange

Her saintly hands

I’m sorry - a million times over

I say to her

And when i finally cry

It is not for the lamb.


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8 months ago

Idk if anyone cares or not, but I’m making a RiddleJokes fanfic. Uhm, if you want to read it, it’s linked here.

it might be really bad. (I TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM)

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(Once I get an AO3 accout because I’m used to wattpad, I’ll update this post to link that.”

archiveofourown.org
An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

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1 year ago

Moltar and Linda cosplaying as Ghost In The Shell! ^^

Moltar And Linda Cosplaying As Ghost In The Shell! ^^

Video ——V (Potentially flashing?)

(Constructive criticism is alright ^^)


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5 months ago

My take on the Dream Tiger!

My Take On The Dream Tiger!
My Take On The Dream Tiger!

I am new to digital art and this is one of my first colored works, any advice and constructive criticism welcome!

(Not too happy with the background, I’ll try to improve 🐅)


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2 months ago

Okay, so I used to write short horror/Gothic/scifi stories (which I might post here soon), but anyway, I just thought of a story concept and I need to know if it sounds atleast somewhat interesting.

(A very rough and audhd concept i know needs polishing)

So, the main character is a test tube baby made specifically to be better than regular man through both some light cybernetics and genetic mutation. However, her parents try to raise her normal for a time. She reached young adulthood and was too sheltered that when she goes out into the loud scary world, she's overwhelmed and is having a hard time coping.

Suddenly an alien crashes in front of her/maybe it's just eating her trash, and she thinks it's a wild animal at first only knowing from TV and stories. So when she sees this 8 foot tall fleshy carapace bug humanoid thing she treats it kindly and feeds it. Soon she discovers it can change its form(I definitely wanna make it a visceral and graphic transformation, think animorfs but bloodier) she still can't do human speech but does learn sign language.

It's eventually revealed that The alien (I think I'm gonna call her Mixy) is on the run and hiding from the Mi-go (They are possibly my favourite sci-fi race, and they are public domain!) So now they both have to stay hidden and fight these highly advanced and decently intelligent xenos.

Only for the MC (I can't really think of a name, open to suggestions) to find out that she and her alien love interest arent so different in origin (yes, I had to make it gay! Sue me!)

Well? What do you, someone who totally read this far down, think? Should I pursue it further? Or does it sound too crazy? I'm open to suggestions! 😊


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2 years ago

Meet Koa :P

This is the first I drew this year which is pretty sad when I think abt it

Meet Koa :P

She's fucking tall as well. Like REALLY tall lol. Tall women are so pretty though. Click it for better quality my camera sucks ass


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