lr-scarlet - ๐™ป.๐š. ๐š‚๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š•๐šŽ๐š

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๐™ป.๐š. ๐š‚๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š•๐šŽ๐š

โœŽ๐šˆ๐š˜๐šž๐š› ๐š•๐š˜๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š• ๐šŽ๐š—๐š‹๐šข ๐šŸ๐šŠ๐š–๐š™๐š’๐š›๐šŽ ๐š ๐š›๐š’๐š๐šŽ๐š›.โšฐ๏ธŽ โš ๏ธŽ๐–๐š๐ซ๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ : ๐„๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ข๐œ๐ข๐ญ ๐‚๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐ž๐ง๐ญโš ๏ธŽ โงผแด€แด…แดœสŸแด›โงฝ โžณ โ„‘ ๐”ฉ๐”ฆ๐”จ๐”ข ๐”ž ๐”ค๐”ฌ๐”ฌ๐”ก ๐”Ÿ๐”ฌ๐”ฌ๐”จ ๐”ด๐”ฆ๐”ฑ๐”ฅ ๐”ž ๐–‰๐–†๐–—๐– ๐–™๐–œ๐–Ž๐–˜๐–™ ๐”ž๐”ซ๐”ก ๐”ข๐”ณ๐”ข๐”ซ ๐–‰๐–†๐–—๐–๐–Š๐–— ๐–—๐–”๐–’๐–†๐–“๐–ˆ๐–Š ๐“†ฉ๐Ÿฅ€๐“†ช ๐— ๐—ฎ๐—ถ๐—ป ๐—ช๐—œ๐—ฃ: "๐™ƒ๐™–๐™ฉ๐™š ๐™”๐™ค๐™ช, ๐™‡๐™ค๐™ซ๐™š ๐™”๐™ค๐™ช" [๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝ•๏ฝ‹๏ฝ๏ฝ‹๏ฝ• โ•‘ ๏ผณ๏ฝˆ๏ฝ‰๏ฝŽ ๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝ•๏ฝ‹๏ฝ๏ฝ‹๏ฝ•] โ›“โ›“ ใ€Ž๐™ด๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š™๐šŠ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šœ.ใ€ - ๐™ณ๐šŠ๐šฃ๐šŠ๐š’ ๐™พ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š–๐šž, ๐™ฝ๐š˜ ๐™ป๐š˜๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š› ๐™ท๐šž๐š–๐šŠ๐š—

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3 weeks ago

THAT'S WHAT I'VE BEEN SAYING FOR YEARS!

Why don't more people know about the wonderful interrobangโ€ฝโ€ฝ

It's so sad smh

Literally furious that a โ€ฝ symbol exists and just never caught on. Youโ€™re telling me thereโ€™s a more streamlined way to ask exclamatory questions than this, and it just never caught on?!?!?! Iโ€™m so mad. English has the worst punctuations, I swear.


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1 month ago

Starting today Iโ€™m going to be a man with courage in his heart. When a person falls to the very depths of suffering - where he can find no escape - he is somehow able to find new courage.

Dazai Osamu, A New Hamlet

Starting Today Iโ€™m Going To Be A Man With Courage In His Heart. When A Person Falls To The Very Depths

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1 month ago

There's 15 books on there now, with 5 of them being random cook books.

I really hope the rightful authors of those books discover this problem ASAP.

Fanfiction Authors: HEADS UP

(Non-authors, please RB to signal boost to your author friends!)

An astute reader informed me this morning that one of my fics (Children of the Future Age) had been pirated and was being sold as a novel on Amazon:

Fanfiction Authors: HEADS UP

(And they weren't even creative with their cover design. If you're going to pirate something that I spent a full year of my life writing, at least give me a pretty screenshot to brag about later. Seriously.)

I promptly filed a DMCA complaint to have it removed, but I checked out the company that put it up -- Plush Books -- and it looks like A LOT of their books are pirated fic. They are by no means the only ones doing this, either -- the fact that """publishers""" can download stories from AO3 in ebook format and then reupload them to Amazon in just a few clicks makes fic piracy a common problem. There are a whole host of reasons why letting this continue is bad -- including actual legal risk to fanfiction archives -- but basically:

IF YOU ARE A FANFIC AUTHOR WITH LONG AND/OR POPULAR WORKS, PLEASE CHECK AMAZON TO SEE IF YOUR STORIES HAVE BEEN PIRATED.

You can search for your fics by title, or by text from the description (which is often just copied wholesale from AO3 as well). If you find that someone has stolen your work and is selling it as their own, you can lodge a DMCA complaint (Amazon.com/USA site; other countries have different systems). If you haven't done this before, it's easy! Here's a tutorial:

HOW TO FILE A COPYRIGHT COMPLAINT FOR STOLEN WORK ON AMAZON.COM:

First, go to this form. You'll need to be signed into your Amazon account.

Select the radio buttons/dropdown options (shown below) to indicate that you are the legal Rights Owner, you have a copyright concern, and it is about a pirated product.

Enter the name of your story in the Name of Brand field.

In the Link to the Copyrighted Work box, enter a link to the story on AO3 or whatever site your work is posted on.

Fanfiction Authors: HEADS UP

In the Additional Information box, explain that you are the author of the work and it is being sold without your permission. That's all you really need. If you want, you can include additional information that might be helpful in establishing the validity of your claim, but you don't have to go into great detail. You can simply write something like this:

I am the author of this work, which is being sold by [publisher] without my permission. I originally published this story in [date/year] on [name of site], and have provided a link to the original above. On request, I can provide documentation proving that I am the owner of the account that originally posted this story.

Fanfiction Authors: HEADS UP

In the ASIN/ISBN-10 field, copy and paste the ID number from the pirated copy's URL. You'll find this ten-digit number in the Amazon URL after the word "product," as in the screenshot below. (If the URL extends beyond this number, you can ignore everything from the question mark on.) Once this number has been added, Amazon will pull the product information automatically and add it to the complaint form, so you can check the listing title and make sure it's correct.

Fanfiction Authors: HEADS UP

Finally, add your contact information to the relevant fields, check the "I have read and accept the statements" box, and then click Submit. You should receive an email confirmation that Amazon has received the form.

Please share this information with your writer friends, keep an eye out for/report pirated works, and help us keep fanfiction free and legally protected!

NOTE: All of the above also applies to Amazon products featuring stolen artwork, etc., so fan artists should check too!


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1 month ago

The townspeople found many pretexts for their treatment of him: he forgets things, they said, he is an idiot, he is unclean, he steals. They succeeded only in reducing him to permanent beggarhood and sealing him off from the world of human emotions.

Kunikida Doppo, โ€œOld Genโ€ from Five Stories by Kunikida Doppo

The Townspeople Found Many Pretexts For Their Treatment Of Him: He Forgets Things, They Said, He Is An
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1 month ago
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โ€œWhen I describe Dazai to the staff, there is a phrase that I always use, โ€œan unworldlyย being with a mental age of two thousand years.โ€ Dazai has far surpassed the mental dimension that human can reach, thus no-oneย can even tell if the emotions he shows are the real things or not.

There are rare moments when that Dazai shows his very โ€œhumanโ€ side. That is when he talks to another superhuman who is on the same level with him. The other is when he talks about his old friend who has passed.

This is the scene when Kyouka wondered โ€œMaybe Iโ€™m, after all, just a murderer at heart.โ€ and refused to be saved. And Dazaiโ€™s reaction to that. When he said โ€œDonโ€™t give me any of that!โ€ here, he really meant it. That was an outburst from Dazai, as a 22-year-old boy, in this scene.โ€

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(Bungou Stray Dogs Chapter 35 - Easygoingscanโ€™s version)

โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”-

TN: I went to the BSD exhibition in Ikebukuro today and they have Asagiriโ€™s comments on each character and their important scene, that I find very nice so Iโ€™m gonna find time to translate them little by little.


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

Hi everyone! :D After rereading the BSD novels I noticed a rather interesting pattern and came up with a fun idea!

How about a new impossible drinking game? Take a shot every time you notice Asagiri describing Dazai in the edgiest way possible when you're reading the light novels.

Sounds not so bad at first, however... Well, take a look yourself and have fun:

"I look at the young man. He is just staring at the ceiling. No emotions, no intents. Just a flat expression, like one who is just telling his age. I cannot believe my own eyes. I donโ€™t even feel like there is a human there. If it was late night instead of a refreshing early morning, I would think that he was a ghost or a hallucination".

"His eyes remind me of a burnt black cat, his build reminds me of a burnt black cat, his presence reminds me of a burnt black cat. He has a tone that sinks into the abyss of the spirit, and deep, dark eyes that seem to hold the conviction that the sun will never rise again. He is a man of few words. And his voice has the sound of severance that rejects mutual understanding from the very beginning. No one could understand him. No one ever will. And he himself knows that very well. That kind of voice".

"When Dazai finally says so, his eyes look different from those of any human being. And those of any living things. Those are wounds. A pair of open wounds on his face, from which darkness is peeping out".

"Dazaiโ€™s face when he says that reminds me of the end of a culvert, or a black wall at the end of the road that leaves you no way to go".

"Dazai looks at me. Those eyes are like the bottomless see at night. Dark, cruel, quiet, endlessly sucking people in and never letting go".

"Dazai looks down at the opponent. Even people who look at the pebbles on the riverbank would show more interest than that".

"Dazaiโ€™s gaze towards Hirotsu turns dark instantly, as though representative of the gravity of his next words. If it were any ordinary person being stared at, they would be seized by nightmares for the next few days. Dazaiโ€™s eyes foretell the impending blood and violence about to come".

"I look at Dazai. There is something invisible within that canโ€™t be seen with the naked eye, like a breeding ground for spirits that will raze everything to the ground".

"I look at Dazai intently. Although we have known each other for very long, this is the first time Dazai has spoken about himself. One can see something as sharp as a giant fishhook piercing and gnawing into Dazaiโ€™s life".

"โ€œNo.โ€ I say. โ€œI donโ€™t think so. At the beginning, I thought you and Dazai were very similar, unable to see the value of your life, hoping for death, hence jumping into a world of violence and fighting. But thatโ€™s not the case. That guy is just a child whoโ€™s too smart. Just a crying child whoโ€™s been left alone in the darkness, a world of nothingness far emptier than the world we can seeโ€".

""I know. There's a certain anxiety, anxiety about whether the previous boss's assassination was leaked". Dazai's expression was still unreadable. It was quiet as a freezing lake".

"The boy's gaze quietly penetrated Mori. Like a medical device that looked through the human body".

"The doctor and boy exchanged a silent gaze for a while. The Shinigami and the Devil seemed to glare at each other as the room filled with their spirit. In Mori's head, a word that he didn't know flickered many times and echoed like an alarm".

"The nightmarish thoughts Dazai sometimes showed through his observing eye was like an unprecedented, frozen eagle in the mafia's demonic nest".

"His expression returned to his usual Dazai thing. It was a gray expression that wasn't interested in any concept".

"Iโ€™m not a person with an excellent observation skill. But even so, just by looking at those eyes, I understand a few things right away. He probably has killed before. Not one or two digits. Hundreds of people. When you have killed that many people, you will reach the other side of the mentality that ordinary humans can possess, beyond the other shore where neither light nor gravity can reach. The spirit of those who have reached that state will be seen first in their eyes, then in their mouth. Their eyeballs become black holes, and the muscles around their mouth become organs to show the depth of their sin, not their facial expressions".

"I ask again. There is no answer. I donโ€™t even know if he is listening. Because the light in his eyes show no reactions to my question. No matter how cold-hearted a person is, if you look at him in the eyes and throw words at him, you can still see some kind of responses. But this young man does not have any of that. Just black eyes looking at where my figure is".

"There is no heart here. Just a heart-shaped emptiness".

"He doesnโ€™t reply. Those eyes are filled with a quiet emptiness. From that, I assume that he is listening. Because if he is deaf, there should be a reasonable amount of confusion and signs of claiming that he cannot hear".

"I say, my words echoing in the emptiness and dropping into the corner of the room, in the middle of nowhere".

"Dazai is standing in the corridor of the bunker, where it is completely dark. The distance between him and Odasaku is more than ten meters. Because of the darkness and the distance, Odasaku and the other guy cannot see Dazai. In fact, they wouldnโ€™t even notice Dazai if he came within an armโ€™s reach. That is how much Dazai has melt into a dense shadow and become one with the darkness himself".

"Seeing that violence doesnโ€™t even make his eyes move. His eyes are as still as those of a dead man, not showing the slightest flicker of emotion".

"Dazai has become one with the darkness. That is why no one is able to find Dazai".

"There is only darkness. As if no one was there from the beginning. Itโ€™s as if darkness has taken the form of Dazai, and has finally turned back to the original darkness and disappeared".

"The voice is intimidating, assertive, and filled with raw danger like a bleeding wound. It is high-pitched as that of a young boy, but it lacks the human-like characteristics a young boy should have".

"The cop can feel cold sweat squirting from his whole body. This young man is not lying. It shows in his eyes. That this young man is only seeing him as a fly in his kitchen".

"The copโ€™s body trembles in fear. This is the fear of pain, the fear of his imagination. But the most frightening of all is the young man in front of him, the king of the Pain land, the one who creates pains and controls pains".

"When Dazai finally opens his mouth after a long pause, that voice completely lacks emotions. No mockery, no cruelty, not even a carnivorous smile, nothing. A complete hollow".

"โ€œYou really donโ€™t listen to others.โ€ There is nothing left in Dazaiโ€™s voice, not even the ruthlessness. There is nothing in there. Not even a sign of someone holding a gun, nor talking to a human being".

"Suddenly, I feel like someone who got lost in the freezing cold weather at the top of a mountain, with only his underwear on. Having nothing to cover for myself, nor a way to escape. Far beyond the pale darkness, a mysterious monster is waiting to tear me into pieces".

"That voice had the dignity of a king and the mercy of the devil at the same time".

"When he saw that cold look heavier than a hundred eloquent words, Atsushi tensed his back".

"From the main office you could see the sunset of the city. In the middle of the room, Dazai was sitting alone at the desk with his arms crossed. He had a thin smile on his lips, and in his only visible eye the light darkness of the world".

"Because in the depths of his eyes lay a jet-black darkness deeper than any of the nights found at the disposal site".

"Dazaiโ€™s expression didnโ€™t change whatsoever, and he spoke in a gritty voice devoid of any emotions".

"โ€œItโ€™s simple.โ€ Dazai smiled faintly. His voice was low, as if it were the sound of a growl in a nightmare".

"Dazai smiled after he said that. It was like you could hear the sound of his broken soul with that smile".

"Dazai smiled and held out his hand to help me stand up. He saw through everything with the eyes of a sage, seeming to stare at a place that wasnโ€™t anywhere on Earth".ย 

And etc.

*reads all this through*

*tries to proceed the information properly*

*inhales*

GODDAMIT, ASAGIRI. WE GOT IT.


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

Just a psa for fic writers who use the โ€œtrauma bondโ€ tag, please make sure youโ€™re using it correctly. A trauma bond is not two people who experience similar trauma and bond over it. Itโ€™s a carefully curated, manipulative bond between abuser and victim to keep the victim coming back because of the addictive highs and lows that come with abuse.

Just A Psa For Fic Writers Who Use The โ€œtrauma Bondโ€ Tag, Please Make Sure Youโ€™re Using It Correctly.

If you want to tag two characters bonding over shared trauma, a good substitute tag would be โ€œbonding over shared trauma.โ€ Trauma bonding is, by definition, an abusive relationship and may steer people who have experienced it away from your fic. Please spread the word and happy writing!


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

We kill others to save our own skin - thatโ€™s the way of the world, isnโ€™t it?

Dazai Osamu, โ€œRun, Melos!โ€ from Crackling Mountain and Other Stories

We Kill Others To Save Our Own Skin - Thatโ€™s The Way Of The World, Isnโ€™t It?
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1 month ago

I craved desperately some great savage joy, no matter how immense the suffering that might ensueโ€ฆ

Dazai Osamu, No Longer Human

I Craved Desperately Some Great Savage Joy, No Matter How Immense The Suffering That Might Ensueโ€ฆ
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1 month ago

Thereโ€™s not a single person back home who reads my works. Or, if they do read them, no doubt they merely focus with a pitying smile on the vile nature of the main character, recounting his flaws to others with exasperated shakes of the head, scornfully deriding me for bringing shame upon our homeland. Once, four years ago, when I briefly met my eldest brother in Tokyo, he told me to stop sending my books to the relatives. โ€˜Not even I want to read them,โ€™ he said. 'When the relatives read what you write, how do you think theyโ€ฆโ€™ He didnโ€™t finish, but bowed his head, as if the words had caught in his throat, but heโ€™d said enough to make things perfectly clear to me. I didnโ€™t intend to send another one of my books back home as long as I live.

Dazai Osamu, โ€œThinking of Zenzoโ€ from Self Portraits

Thereโ€™s Not A Single Person Back Home Who Reads My Works. Or, If They Do Read Them, No Doubt They Merely

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1 month ago

You wait and wait for happiness, and when finally you can't bear it any longer, you rush out of the house, only to hear later that a marvelous happiness arrived the following day at the home you had abandoned, and now it was too late. Sometimes happiness arrives one night too late.

Dazai Osamu, Schoolgirl

You Wait And Wait For Happiness, And When Finally You Can't Bear It Any Longer, You Rush Out Of The House,

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1 month ago
Happy 38th Birthday To Dazai Osamu's Seiyuu (Voice Actor) Mamoru Miyano ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

Happy 38th Birthday to Dazai Osamu's Seiyuu (Voice Actor) Mamoru Miyano ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

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1 month ago
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1 month ago

Cause Iโ€™m a โœจFANFICTION WRITERโœจ

lol please enjoy this stupid little video I made about fanfiction. No thoughts at all. Just silliness.

Youโ€™re welcome.


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1 month ago

"Have I met you anywhere?" Dazai smiles a smile of no personality. "No. This is the first time we met."

- The Day I Picked Up Dazai (Side B), Kafka Asagiri


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1 month ago

How I imagine Chuuya feels every time he says Osamu instead of Dazai (bc there's no way he doesn't from time to time)

โ€” Emery Allen, โ€œSoft Humanโ€ (via Lunamonchtuna)

โ€” Emery Allen, โ€œSoft Humanโ€ (via lunamonchtuna)


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

Excellent tips and habits for writers

The advice I've given before is to write every scene you think of, no matter if it gets used or not. Its always a great idea to go back every once and a while and edit these scenes, or revise them.

Never force inspiration or a scene. If it isn't coming naturally, take a break and come back later or the next day. it's important to give yourself time to think. use your break to day dream about your story and what could come next. if your brain is happy, this should be relatively simple. If your brain isn't happy, then you need to take a longer break, stop writing for the day all together, or write something else.

if you're a pantser, like me, and it's hard to plot. You can practice reverse plotting, and plot your story as you go. make notes of things that happen in your story, changes in a character, changes in the plot, changes in the setting, dates for events, timelines, important information that's been revealed, anything you deem important to your story.

always reread what you've already written. don't try to edit it. turn off your editor brain and reread your story so far before you resume writing, so you can get into the voice and tone that you've already established.

if you're finding it difficult to start writing or keep writing. try turning off your internal editor and free write. it's good practice to be able to write down your unfiltered thoughts or daydreams without having to stop and edit while you're writing. it helps with your writing flow, getting the scene down onto the page, and increases your writing intuition.

before you write, always take time to daydream or think about your story beforehand. it helps things go much smoother in the long run.

if you've been working on something for a long time, don't pressure yourself into confinement. if you want to work on something new but you're worried about what you've been working on, don't. stop worrying and write what you want. forcing yourself to keep writing something when you don't want to is just going to make you burn out faster.

don't be afraid to create visuals or playlists that help you with what you're writing. It's an enviable talent to be able to write something off a photo you saw on pinterest, or a song you really like.

if you find yourself in a mood where you want to write really badly, but you have no idea what you want to write, and none of the prompts you find are appealing enough. find an activity you use to destress, whether its listening to music, listening to asmr, doom scrolling on social media, or browsing pinterest. go do that. chances are, you'll find something that will inspire you what to write when you're not looking for it.


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

There are two types of writers:

1. 'It's fiction, it doesn't need to make sense!'

2. 'I didn't account for the rotation of the planet and how that affects the constalations while my characters stargazed at different times of year, I have failed as a writer, and this entire thing is trash'

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1 month ago

Hair all tangled this morning - Shall I smooth it With spring rain Dripping form the jet-black Wings of swallows?

- Yosano Akiko, โ€œTangled Hair: Selected Tanka from Midaregamiโ€

Hair All Tangled This Morning - Shall I Smooth It With Spring Rain Dripping Form The Jet-black Wings

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1 month ago

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

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You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP

You WILL write your WIP


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1 month ago

that feeling when youve written down 2k+ words and havent even got CLOSE to the main part of the fic yet </3

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1 month ago

ใ€ŒHate You, Love Youใ€ ส™แดœษดษขแดแดœ sแด›ส€แด€ส แด…แดษขs า“แด€ษดา“ษชแด„

Short rewritten excerpt from Chapter 9:

sแดแดœแด‹แดแด‹แดœ า“สŸแดœา“า“

~๐™ป.๐š. ๐šœ๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š•๐šŽ๐š

๏ธพ๏ธพ๏ธพ๏ธพ

๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ๏นŒ

"So, where did you go yesterday?" Chuuya asked through crunches as he ate some cereal. He looked up at the brunette across the small table from him, who began to grin. "Dazai?"

"Hehe, don't worry about it." Dazai continued to curl his lips as he took a bite out of a piece of toast.

"That's only making me worry about it more. Please, where were you?" Chuuya whined. He put his spoon down to look at Dazai, now getting concerned as well as annoyed.

"It top secret Chuu-Chuu!" Dazai yelled as he dramatically grabbed the butter knife and held it in the air as if to prove a point.

"Don't call me that and answer my question, jackass."

Dazai dramatically gasped. "My heart! I've been wounded! How could you call me such a foul name!" Dazai grabbed his chest as he flopped back in his chair, and Chuuya did everything he could to keep himself from slamming his own face onto the table and into his food, he had just gotten out of the shower after all.

"Damn it Dazai, just tell me." Chuuya said with a sigh as he rubbed his temples, and wondered how the hell he fell for someone like Dazai.

"Fine fine." Dazai said as he calmly sat back down like a normal person, putting the jam covered toast down on the elegant plate in front of him. "I was doing some research." Chuuya raised a suspicious eyebrow and questioned, "About...?"

Dazai then dramatically threw his arms in the air as if what we was about to say was the best, most revelitional thing ever. "I wanted to find a way to make my Chuu-Chuu happy! And I found it!"

Chuuya sat up straight and looked at Dazai attentively, now more curious and slightly confused than anything. He knew the younger man wouldn't stop with the nickname, and that wasn't the battle he was choosing to fight at this moment. "Go on...." He prompted tentatively.

"One moment!" Dazai sang as he got up and went to the fridge, leaving Chuuya unable to see what he was doing behind the silver insulated refrigerator door, but he didn't take long. As he walked back to the small table, he held whatever he grabbed behind his back, and as his wicked grin grew, so did Chuuya's suspicion. "This!" Dazai said as he slammed the milk carton he was hiding behind his back down on the table. "If my Chibi drink's some of this every day, he'll get taller, and he'll be happier!"

Chuuya's aura grew dark as he slowly stood up, his piercing blue eyes downcast and hidden from sight. His silk purple robe began to float slightly with a scarlet hue as he activated his ability. The spoon in his hand snapped in half with a grudge before it flew towards Dazai with such force, that after Dazai smoothly dodged it, it stuck at least half way into the wall. "You little shit!" The redhead snarled through gritted teeth as he threw the milk at Dazai, and again Dazai dodged and it, making a mess on Chuuya's sparkling kitchen floor.

The brunette began running to avoid Chuuya's wrath, laughing all the while. "Haha, no~ you're the little one! AHH- ANGRY CHIBI!"

"GET YOUR ASS BACK HERE!!" Chuuya screamed full of rage, while arming himself with more food floating behind him like bullets aimed directly at the cackling brunette as he ran around, dodging the oncoming assault of dairy, grain, and produce based bullet hell attacks.


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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

Revising and Self-Editing

Iโ€™m currently revising and self-editing my mermaid x human boy romance novel, so I thought I would share some resources that may help other writers revise and/or edit their stories.

Revising And Self-Editing

A list of resources to help you during the revision process or when youโ€™re self-editing your story.

Editing and Proofreading An article written for college students from The Writing Center at the University of North Carolina. While most of it applies to writing academic papers, it has helpful tips (under the section titled โ€œSome tips that apply to both editing and proofreadingโ€) that can apply to any writer who is revising or editing their own work.

Beginning the Awesome Journey of Revision Provides helpful tips on how to get started on revising your storyโ€™s draft. The list of additional resources includes a few broken links, but most of them work.

How to Survive the Editing Process Provides tips and suggestions for how to get started on revising or editing your storyโ€™s draft and what to look for when editing.

The Big Bad Guide to Novel Revision A lengthy, comprehensive guide to revising and editing your storyโ€™s draft. Explains in detail the elements to consider when going over the story, the characters, and grammar. Includes a few broken links, but the guide itself is helpful.

When to Say Youโ€™re Done Revising Offers realistic advice on how to know when youโ€™re done revising and editing (or how to know when youโ€™ve edited your manuscript as much as you possibly can).

For a more thorough guide on editing, check out my post The Different Types of Editing, which also includes links to even more resources on editing.

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lr-scarlet
1 month ago

List of describing exercises to help you improve your descriptions.

As I try to improve my technical writing skills, I've noticed my describing skills are pretty lacking. So, here is a list of description exercises.

Setting Description

Pick a setting and describe it in a way that evokes a positive emotion, then describe the same setting negatively.

Pick a setting and try to describe it by using all of your senses.

Find a setting you've written before and write 500 words of pure description on it.

Describe a tree from the point of view of a character that's feeling a strong emotion, whether they're depressed, frustrated, or excited.

Character Description

Pick one of your characters and write a 500 word description of them.

Write a 500 word description on how your character feels about different people.

Pick 3 different characters and write 200 word descriptions for each of their voices.

Write a 500 word description about how your character looks at different people.

lr-scarlet
1 month ago
a meme

an iceberg, and the tip above water is labelled "the writing i publicly share" 

beneath the surface underwater, the larger chunk of the iceberg is labelled as "the unfinished stories in my my folders"

at the bottom is the balrog labelled as "the writing that exists only as disconnected climactic scenes i imagine while falling asleep"
lr-scarlet
1 month ago

ใ€Ž๐™ฝ๐š˜๐š  ๐™ธ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š—๐šŽ๐š’๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐š› ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐š’๐š—๐šŽ๐šœ๐šœ ๐š—๐š˜๐š› ๐šž๐š—๐š‘๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐š’๐š—๐šŽ๐šœ๐šœ.

๐™ด๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š™๐šŠ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šœ.

๐šƒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š’๐šœ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š˜๐š—๐š•๐šข ๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐™ธ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š๐š‘๐š˜๐šž๐š๐š‘๐š ๐š›๐šŽ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š–๐š‹๐š•๐šŽ๐š ๐šŠ ๐š๐š›๐šž๐š๐š‘ ๐š’๐š— ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šœ๐š˜๐šŒ๐š’๐šŽ๐š๐šข ๐š˜๐š ๐š‘๐šž๐š–๐šŠ๐š— ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š’๐š—๐š๐šœ ๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ ๐™ธ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š๐š ๐šŽ๐š•๐š•๐šŽ๐š ๐šž๐š™ ๐š๐š˜ ๐š—๐š˜๐š  ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐š’๐š— ๐šŠ ๐š‹๐šž๐š›๐š—๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š•๐š•.

๐™ด๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š™๐šŠ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šœ.ใ€

โ€” ๐™ณ๐šŠ๐šฃ๐šŠ๐š’ ๐™พ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š–๐šž, ๐™ฝ๐š˜ ๐™ป๐š˜๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š› ๐™ท๐šž๐š–๐šŠ๐š—


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1 month ago

FAQ Masterpost:

WRITING TIPS:

How To Stay Positive

Write Stories That Are Problematicย 

On Being Distracted By Your Phoneย 

How To Write a Synopsisย 

Quick and Easy Writing Tip for Social Media

8 Tips to Get You Through NaNoWriMo

Top Ten First Page Turn Offs

How to Limit Hand Stress (EDS oriented)

How to Write Dragons

How to Write ESL

How to Choose a Story Idea

โ€œHelp! How do I connect a plot hole?โ€

How to Stick to a Writing Schedule (and Keep It)

The Importance of Expositionย 

8 Ways to Get Past Writerโ€™s Blockย 

^^^ Video Version

Writing a Sword Fight Scene

Why You Should Write Horriblyย 

Finding Your Audienceย 

5 Ways to Write Solid Description

How to Make Your Readers Cry

Scrivener PSA - a Great Writing Software

Creating a Languageย 

CHARACTER TIPS:

How To Write Characters Outside of Your Identity

5 Ways to Develop a Convincing Character

How to Write Strong Dialogue

POV Writing Exercise

How Do Characters Bond?

How to Choose Your MCโ€™s Personality

Writing a Mute Character

How to Write a Bisexual Character

How to Avoid Insta-Love

Writing Gray Characters

How to Write Believable Romance

EDITING TIPS:

Stuck? Do this

How to Use -, โ€“, and โ€”ย 

How to Read Like a Writer

For Writers Who Edit When They Should Be Writing

Getting an Editor - Yes or No?

How to Up Your Editing Game

NETWORKING:

How to Find Beta Readers

On Paying Beta Readers

How To Find a Critique Partner

What To Expect From A Critique Partner

When Considering Feedback

How to Enter Into Contests/Magazines

How to Write a Query/Cover Letter

Marketing Tips

How to Make Connections

WRITING INSPIRATION:

How to Find Inspiration to Write

If You Write Fanfic, Are You a Writer?

If You Need Someone to Tell You to Write

How to Stop Being a Beginning Writer

Stop Feeling Bad

Read Your Old Work Like This

To the Writers Who Donโ€™t Write

On Clichesย 

The Steps of Writingย 

Why You Should Keep Writing Anyways

Do YOU Deserve Support?

Feeling Anxious About Writing?

Reminder About Writerโ€™s Block

Need a Pep Talk?

WRITING FUNNIES:

Americaโ€™s Next Top Writer

The Five Types of Writers

Need a lol? Have a meme

And another. Because commas are terrible

On writing fight scenes

On plot twists

On story ideas

On writerโ€™s block

Writers: What They Say vs What They Mean

How to Kick Start a Writing Session

Writing and Friendship and Sacrificeย 

Fun Fact

15 Things That Make Writerโ€™s Anxiousย 

First Drafts Suck

Funny with a twist (also my most popular post ever)

Searchย โ€œwriting humorโ€ on my blog for a ridiculous amount more

FIRST SENTENCE FRIDAY (FSF):

On My Opinionย 

Submitting BEFORE/AFTER Friday?

How to Write a Good Sentence

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Prologue

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World Building

Excerpt

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