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I knelt on the marble floor, not daring to look at the twelve thrones that surrounded me.

"Rise, Alelia." A loud voice boomed out.

I slowly raised my head, trying not to shake at the sight of the figures around me.

"You know you have committed a forbidden act, do you not?" The voice boomed again.

My eyes widened and I started to my feet. "No, please! You must understand, this can help us! Is our ultimate aim not to gift these people with knowledge?"

A feminine voice came from my right. "These people were a mistake. They have no use in terms of strategy."

I turned to the blonde woman. "Please, my lady. We created them, therefore we must take responsibility!"

The man in front of me stood. "Alelia Athanidi, you are hereby charged with treason against the crown. If you love these creatures so much, how about you spend some time with them?"

I take a shaky breath. "How long?"

"Until we see fit to bring you back."

I take a sharp step backwards. "No, please! I have a life here! I cannot just leave."

The man shook his head. "I'm afraid that is impossible, my daughter. You have committed severe crimes and they must be repaid. You will be stripped of your power and immortality. Remember, this is not a death sentence, but a lesson."

I lowered my head. There was no point in arguing. "Yes my lord."

I kept my head down, not noticing the lightning bolt had left his hands until it struck me and everything went dark.

I

was

falling.